Originally posted by: lashyyy
aww this is so beautiful piece of writing dear
really I just felt lucky that I can read it overwhelmed
the concept is awesome n very well executed
from the starting itself I was so engrossed in it till the end
starting as usual confusing
from ur starting no one can guess the story or concept which is a very brilliant thing as reader is curious all the time reading it that wats coming next line
beautiful story armaan is so guilty but in a way he deserve it wat he did with ridhz is very wrong
ridhz the poor soul has to suffer a lot till the end feel so bad for her
sid he is angel I guess
the story is his pov n its makes it more fabulous
loved how armaan is overprotective abt ridhz
I wish u added ar confession too I really wanted to read that n ar lil bit abt ar baby
OK one thing ur a brilliant writter as I said but I wanna say as ur all os till now
all is kind of sad matlab OK ur first os is also kind of this usme bhi koi happy moment nah tha na hi ar ka koi dialouge its just kind of scene shown with a father pov n thought
second I didn't like it much as I say coz it's a sad one n I don't like n read death stuff stories
third one is the my fav of all the story of new bride
u know how much I like it no want u to continue it as ss
but its also a pov os not much dialogue n romance
n third my second fav its also as I comment above
now plz write a new concept a happy romantic one not with a pov thing try it I know you will rock in it too
Thanks a lot for your appreciation. It means a lot to me. I am glad you like my work it felt like it worth writing.
I know my OS are POV of different people in AR lives and all,and that's the point of Longest hours series. I want to write AR's life from other view, it's kinda experiment I am doing to improve my writing style and make it challenging. I think its hard (at least for me) to write down AR from someone else view, usually I am out of ideas and have to think real hard, to make it more challenging for myself I decided to post on every Sunday (on blog).
Longest hours consists of 7 AR OS. I have already worked on 5, 2 more to go.
I guess after that I can do some romantic type SS or something, probably recondite fairytale (my 3rd OS in Longest hours)
Also I understand that adding some more of AR scene like there baby moments or confession for example would make my OS better but again words limit is the problem. I have limited words for my work i.e;3000 words. So I have to remove a lot of parts from OS so that its under 3000 words. This all is to test my limits and improve myself.
I will definitely do another project after longest hours which have lots of AR moments and their dialogs and all.
Thanks for the support and suggestions. I really value it.
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