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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

awsum part..
so there is more to shilpa's personality...
continue asap



thankyou yes there is more😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: blessed4

Amazing start. Role reversal interesting. Please continue soon




hey thankyou😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Heyy nice start .. Loved the part... Shilpa is mysterious ... Loved her character... Looking forward to the story.. Please continue soon... Thanks for pm... Take care... Love aish :)



Hey thank you😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44


Chapter 2


The car crossed the boundary of a big gate and there was this bungalow.She got out and entered her home where Martha the caretaker of the house greeted her.A middle aged lady with big eyes and bulky face.always fond of smiling.

"good evening ma dam"

"evening Martha.such a hectic day it was."

"go take rest.I will send your coffee in the room"

"sure.wait.I have some special guest you see so let it be.you ask David to make some special arrangements in the pool corner"

"okay.it will be done"

She was climbing up the stairs when found him following her suite.

"where do you think you are going?ohh this much desperate to be with me?"

"you wish.listen you have already wasted enough time of mine.its late I have to go to hospital muskaan must be waiting for me.tell me what I have to do.or else"

"oufff.you know this much impatience gonna cost you soo much Mallik.in this game you need to have alot of patience because at the end of the day its you whose in need.remember.and if you still want to go then okay.the money

"ok fine.Iam patient.happy?why dont you tell me what I have to do?dont tell me I have to be your slave for 24/7"

"you wish?hahah well its not that easy also.there is something more to it.can you please wait for an hour more.I will be there with all your answers"


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He was sent to the pool area by the servant as per "her heinous" order.Its only one day and she was getting on his nerves.how will he bear her for 29 more days.Getting a deep breathe he relaxed for a while.quite impressive.the house was posh and every corner was made with high class taste.the pool area was decorated and the atmosphere was too romantic to be with your mate.wish if Muskaan was here only with him.

"I should call muskaan and let her know I will be late.she must be waiting for me"


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She brushed her long hairs with rage visible in her eyes.she was quite for a change and that didnt give Shayl a normal feeling.Dressed in her swimming costume she tied the robe and rolled her eyes knowing what was coming next.

"Shayl.I thought I already sent you off for a holiday?did your boyfriend ran away?I hope not"

"Iam here for something serious.you left without signing these papers and it was urgent.we need to submit them tomorrow or we will be at huge loss"

"loss heh right.such losses are nothing but a way of winning big things"

"Shilpa?"

"yeah.ok I signed them you may leave now"

"I heard some guest is there.he was also in office?"

"you are spying on me?"

"its not like that.I just wanted you to think over it and

"its not first time you are seeing me with a guy.you are much more experienced if Iam not wrong"

"yeah.but he is your sister's fiance.dont you think its wrong?

She stopped for a minute closing her eyes and trying hard to gulp down the anger.

"I always make wrong things go right Shayl.and this time iam so right.for the time being he is none but. a deal for me.a proposed deal with time period.hope that makes u feel good?now leave."

"i dont know what this girl is upto now.poor guy"


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Its been an hour and she is nowhere to be seen.he was helpless.for how long will he have to bear this tantrum queen god knows.what exactly does she want from him?anyways this was nothing infront of the smile he will get to see in Muskaan's face.He stared at her picture which was set as his wallpaper in the phone.how cute she looks so innocent serene.one can easily read her mind by looking at her.The phone dropped from his hand and he bend down to pick it up not before getting the breathless view in front.She was looking horribly sexy in the black robe clinging to her body.Her open hair and natural look was making her look beautiful.For a second he was so lost in her that he didnt realize when she closed the distance between them and was now face to face with him.

"already sweating?"

He came out of the trance and kicked his mind for even having those thoughts.

"can we talk now?"

"sure.I got these arrangements for you only.liked them?"

"what?I dont care and why would you do such a thing for me.see we need to talk for heaven sake"

She was so disinterested in his same boring line.making a boring face she joined him in the small table.She was sitting in a position in which her milky legs were visible to him and this proved to be an additional distraction for him.

"a ahem.so?what are we here for?

"for playing football.

"what?

"cant be this much dumb.we are on pool side right so we are here for swimming.I love swimming.specially when someone is there to accompany me.

"you serious?you have made me wait for so long for swimming?why would I swim with you?"

She stood up without paying heeds to his words and untied the knot of her robe when felt a strong grip on her shoulders.She saw fire in his eyes.he was already so irritated with her.this was getting fun now.He pulled her from her shoulders and made her face him.his grip was strong and she was feeling the pain but she was not a person who would easily show off her pain that also in front of a man.

"enough.you got to answer me now.whats this bloody proposal deal about?why are you doing this to me.let me tell you Iam not here to see these stupid acts of yours.Iam here for

"love this that I know.give me a break dude.you know you are boring right.in thes few hours you could nt please me for once.how will you do that in rest of your time period?

"I accepted your proposal and you promised you would give money for that.so Iam here for work and you have been only wasting my time.why cant you tell me what Iam here for

"you already know that.dont you?oh seems like you also have this memory problem?no worries let me remind you.I proposed you something and you agreed later.hope you clearly remember the deal I put forth you?

"yeah.I have to do something for you for 30 days and

"ah wait.nights.not days?

"okay fine.30 nights if it is.and whats that Iam asking you only.

"my my.Iam touched.my sister got such a dedicated boyfriend.too forgetful to get such meanings.tell me what do people do at nights?any idea you got or.I dont think you ever touched any girl beside your fiance.did you?

He was baffled now.what was she trying to mean.and the mention of nights was enough to strike his mind.although he knew the hidden meaning behind her words still he wanted to take a chance.

"what do you want me to do?"

He got closer to her and asked in a hoarse whisper.

"simple.sleep with me"


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The night was never this much long for her.She had seen her mother weeping for god knows how long and her dad lying so helpless.never imagined how one day they will have to face such a situation.but god is there and it is rightly said.he sent someone in her life to be there for her.Armaan was the person who could only get her out of this trouble.After paying the bill in the reception she took a breath of relief.

"Shubhankar.thankyou so much.I dont kno whow to thank you for this.they have been stopping the treatment for money and we couldnt sleep whole night.Mom will be so relaxed now.I.dont know how

"Muskaan relax.and I havent done anything.its armaan only he sent the money through me.okay.

"I know he is doing this for me.he takes my family as his own.loves me so much.I realize now how badly I behaved with him that day.oh I was so stressed you know with dad and my family like this.we had no place to live..

"ah you dont have to worry for that.here are the keys.you can shift there.

"he arranged an apartment also in such a short time?where is he?I want to see him.tell me

"actually he is busy in office.this was required urgently so I came here.dont worry he will be there to meet you,go home and relax.dont take stress.

Shubhankar left before giving a look to this girl who was much relieved now.he felt bad for his friend and this girl also.how will she face the truth.

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He felt the continuous vibration of the phone under his pillow and finally checked the screen.His throat dried and heart started beating rapidly seeing whose call it was.

"muskaan.

"yeah.where are you lost mr mallik.you know I have been trying to call you since last night.again busy mode?

"sorry I.you know I was stuck badly and..

"armaan please.I was joking.I know how hard you have been trying for me.and trust me.I was so wrong and being rude with you.please forgive me.whatever you did for us.its just.

"shubhankar ?

"yeah he came.thanks armaan.you saved my dad today.or else.

"muskaan your family is also my family right.how is uncle now?and you got the keys?"

"yeah.dad is stable now they started the treatment.m armaan I wanted to ask you something.

"yeah.

"how did you arrange this big amount in such a short time.I mean this apartment also?did you take loan or.

"ah shilpa."

He cursed his stupid mouth for blurting out such a wrong thing but now the damage was done.

"what?shilpa gave the money?and house.armaan?

"actually yes.I.I asked for loan and she said yes.

"see I knew it she is a family and wont ever refuse.she still loves us.now you know right she is not selfish.I want to meet her.thank her.I.

"muskaan please relax you need to be with uncle and aunty now.dont worry about all this.go take rest.I.will be there to see you.

"oh ok.I love you.and trust you.bye"

Throwing the phone on the bed he caught his head with his hands.How sick he felt at the moment.this one thing called trust they had in their relationship for years and now this word meant nothing.he had broken her trust and he doesnt even know how will she react when the truth comes out.will she trust him?

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"Mom.I told you.Shilpa is not bad.she sent money for us.for dad's treatment and even arranged a house for us.how can she be bad mom.

"she did all this?are you sure.how did you get to know.

They were unpacking things in the new house which was not as spacious as the earlier one but a simple apartment.

"oho I told you na shubhankar.armaan's friend came in the hospital.I called armaan and he only said ke he took help from shilpa.I sent him to call her up when dad was admitted in hospital.I had this feeling she still loves us.must be sacred to come because of dad.why does he hate her so much mom?

"leave all this.go and take some rest we need to leave for hospital in evening.

Her daughter Shilpa.how can she forget her.she loves him like any mother loves her child but here the case was different.she can never expect her daughter to love her the same way.why would she.after what she did to her?she proved to be the most horrible mother in this world.she does not have the right to call herself a mother.to save her family she disowned her own daughter whom she gave birth to.She was glad atleast she feels connected to her sister and father.afterall she helped them out in this situation and she needs to thank her for that.

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The Proposal


Thank you for encouraging words.my friend is super happy with the response as I told her😆so she will write with more interest now😊Chap 2 is updated :)



Edited by Shona_ksglover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awesome update!!!!
This story is really getting interesting!!!!
I am eagerly waiting for armaan to fall in love with shilpa!! I mean spending 30 nights with such a bold and beautiful shilpa will definitely make him fall in love.
I am eagerly waiting for the romantic and passionate moments!!!!
I really loved the way story is proceeding!!! Shilpa seducing armaan and armaan regretting for breaking muskan's trust!!!
Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Superb update..
Wonder what's going on shilpa's mind??
Her mother threw her out because she is girl child..
I hope Armaan gets to know why shilpa behaves so rude..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
sooo nice and full of entertaining
now armaan in trouble what to do?
and i am waiting what unfold the story
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Wow dear...
It's awesome and mind blowing update...
I m really loving this shilpa...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update
Eager to know what will happen next
Thanks for the pm:)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
superb part
omg shilpa's past i guess is really bad
armaan feeling bad for muskaan
excited for next part
thanx for pm

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