Humko Deewana Kar Gay(prt 78 pg 127)AK ff - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awwwwwwwwww!!!! SUch a cute part, 😳 but the car ruined it!!! I bet u da person in da car must hav bin prithvi n mishty coz they wanted to take kripa to lunch!!! 😡

ur really gud.👏..can u predict the future or sumthin?😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guyz herez the nxt part...its not much but bear wid me...I've got tons of homework and hardly any time...this world xpects tooo much frm a 15 year old! 😭 !..am expecting ur gudddd comments cuz they r really encouraging!

Part 14


Recap:Kripa cries…Angad feels guilty & says he was just kidding…they were abt to kiss wen they were disturbed.


Angad comes closer to Kripa and brings his lips closer to hers whereas Kripa just gets lost in that moment has totally given in.They come closer and closer,their lips onliy a few millimeters away(hehehe) when suddenly they hear a car's horn honking and Kripa immediately pushes a dumbfounded Angad away frm her.

Kripa was shocked and still hadn't come out of the feeling of being so close to Angad.Once again they were abt to kiss and their beautiful moment had been ruined,disturbed by sum1.How she wished she cud bring time back and re live tht moment but she knew it was impossible.She was upset wid Angad but tht didn't change her feelings for him.
She stood there,frozen,lost in her own thoughts when the car honked again.This time Kripa was certain tht the car belonged to sum1 who knew here and wanted to talk 2 her but who cud it be?She hardly knew any1 at all.
To her surprise it was Prithvi at the driver seat and Mishty in the passenger seat.

K:(puzzled)tum loge yahaan?

M:(smiling warmly)ya…tumhare liya.

K:(confused)mein kuch samjhi nahin.

P:(all jolly and excited)oh cum on! I want us all to have lunch together in the famous Chinese restaraunt here.

Angad was quietly listening to all this frm behind a tree.He gave an evil smile and head off in the other direction.
On the other hand…

K:nahin woh mein…

P:(making a cute and pleading face)cum on yaar…be a sport!

K:(double minded)laikin…

And turns back but is shocked to see that no1 iz there…Angad was gone.

M:laikin kiya Kripa?

K:(smiling)ok,let's go!

Mishty's mobile phone rings and she hurriedly gets out of the car and walks a little away.

K:(puzzled)Mishty kahaan-

P:ati he hogi.Why don't u sit in the front with me?

K:ummm

P:soch kiya rahi ho?aao to sahi I promise I wont eat u!!!

K:(laughing)ok ok!

Mishty came back after a few minutes with a tensed look on her face.

M:bhai…

P:ya bolo

M:who baat yeh hai ke…

P:don't tell me keh tum nahin arahi humare saath.

K:haan Mishty plz don't say tht.

M:sorry to disappoint u guyz but meri eik frend ki tabyat bauhat kharaab ho gayee hai &
I've gotta go & c her.I hope u guyz don't mind.

K:ohhh…hmmm…wellll I guess its ok.

P:acha…do u want me to drop u?

M:nopes,u go and enjoy…I'll manage!

P:ya ok then…take care.

As he said so,Mishty smiled and winked at him as he mouthed a silent "thankyou"
Throughout the drive,there was an awkward silence betweent the 2.Whenever one of them tried to start a conversation,they would immediately stop.They had no words,simply nothing to talk abt.
The plain thought tht Kripa,his love,was sitting next to him in his car was enuff for Prithvi to be content.There was no need of words,as he thought so.Prithvi kept steeling glances at Kripa and Kripa did not notice this.She was still thinking abt Angad and wht might of have happened if Prithvi had not showed up.Would they have really kissed?
Finally Kripa broke the silence-

K:Prithvi…

P:(smiling)haan…

K:ummm…

P:bolo bhi

K:I just wanted to say tht I am really sorry for my earlier behaviour.

P:huh?wht r u talking abt?

K:oh cum on Prithvi…I know I hurt ur feelings a lot….and I'm really sorry for that.

P:yaar Kripa….get this straight,friendship mein no sorries and no thankyou's,ok?

K:----

P:hum friendz hain na?

K:yeah!ofcourse.

P:so cheer up,mein to kab ka who sab bhool gaya hoon.

K:ur a gr8 friend.

P:woh to mein hoon!


They talked a bit for a little while but Kripa wasn't really listening to him.She just kept thinking back to the moment wen she was abt to kiss Angad.They were so close and yet so far away frm eachother.She knew she had started to like him but his strange behaviour towards her was growing to be a major mystery which she was unable to solve.
They hadn't gone a great distance wen suddenly Prithvi spotted a black sports car parked on the other side of the road and a man kicking the tire.

P: Kripa…I think we should help him becuz this is U.S.A, I know no1 will help the poor guy.

K:(quite impressed) y not? Go ahead.

Prithvi stopped the car across the road.

P:(rolling down the window)Excuse me!Umm do u need any help?

The guy turned back and slowly removed his red sunglasses and smiled at them and to Kripa's shock,it was no1 else but ANGAD!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
awww naughty angad 😆 😆 😆 he prob done it by purpose
amazing part
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kool!!!! Thank god now prithvi n kripa wont be alone they will have angad to give them company!!! lolz 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
angad is impossible 😆
awsome part 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
gr8 part 👏 👏 👏

cont soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
aww he did it on purpose 😉 ..sumone was getting jealous...cont soon, it was awesome 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
that was an awesome part!!!!!! n wicked angad 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
Im awfullly happy tht u guyz like my ff so much...herez the nxt part...enjoy!


Part 15


Recap:Kripa sits in the car with Prithvi to go to eat in a Chinese Restaurant…Kripa apologizes for her misbehaviour…Angad who knew abt their plan faked tht his car had a flat tire.

The guy turned back and to Kripa's shock,it was ANGAD!

A:oh hi!

P:hello…

A:thank God I found sum1..I thought I wud be stuck here 4 quite awhile.

P:(smiling)don't thank God…thank me! Anywayz,jokes apart…may I help u in any way?

A:hey…rn't u a student from my class?

P:yes sir….can I help u?

A:yes,well as a matter of fact,u can.m Actually y car has a flat tire…danm tht car!... and I've urgently got to meet my best friend somewhere.

P:well,if u don't mind,can I drop u?

A:mind..? NO WAY DUDE! which way r u going?

P:we r going to a Chinese Restaraunt.

A:(with a thoughtful xpression)u don't say….which one?

P:Wong Tong….

A:(with fake surprise and shock)OMG! Wht a coincidence….I was heading towards the same restaurant!

P:(all happy-go-lucky kinda attitude)gr8!...then hop in!

Angad sat in the back seat of the car and had a wide grin on his face whereas Kripa was actually quite delighted from inside, but did not want to show it to Angad… so she put a frown on her face which Angad automatically noticed.

A:(from the backseat)hey guyz….I hope I didn't disturb the 2 of u.

P:no sir…not at all.

A:by the way,I luv Chinese restaraunts.

P:another coincidence….Kripa luvz them too.

A:is tht true Kripa?

K:y-yess.

A:tht's gr8.

The rest of the drive was quite silent.No one said much even though Prithvi did try to start a conversation but Kripa was obviously not interested.She seemed lost in her own thoughts and Prithvi thought tht it wud be best to leave her alone.
After every few seconds,Kripa kept glancing at Angad from the rear view mirror,just to c wht he was doing,was he luking at her or not…was he the least bit srry? and Angad just loved it!!!
Finally they reached the huge restaurant & they all got out.

A:(at the entrance)hey thanx buddy…(and shook hands with Prithvi)

Kripa just looked offended even though she really wasn't.

P:hey..sir…it was my pleasure.

A:If I can do anything 4 u in return,do let me know.

P:no sir,why the formality?

A:well suit urself…I was going to five u an extra 5 marks on ur "to come" term paper but….

P:u can't be serious….

A;guess wht?

P:(feeling a bit bad he lost this opportuinity) wht?

A:I'm not!!!

They all burst out laughing.

A:ok gtg…bye and thanx once again.

P:it's ok sir.

So they all entered the restaurant. Kripa & Prithvi scanned the place for an empty table.The place was jam pack and there was no empty space.
After impatiently waiting 4 a few min,Finally Prithvi and Kripa got a nice and cute table in the corner of the place which,according to Prithvi,was perfect for him and Kripa to spend some time alone to get to know eachother.
On the contrary,Angad had already left to the other side of the restaurant and was totally out of Kripa's view.

P:(thinking)I think I should tell Kripa abt my feelings….Magar hum abhi to milen (met) hain…fir yeh theek hoga ya nahin?

K:(snapping her fingers in Prithvi's face)kiya hua?kin khayalon mein gum hooo???

P:(smiling)kuch bhi nahin…soch raha tha ke kiya order kiya jaaye?

P:(thinking)abhi sahi waqt nahin hai…I think I shud give our relationship more time and then decide.

K:haan order karte hain.

Suddenly Prithvi's mobile phone rings.

P:(holding the mob in his hand)xcuse me Kripa…

K:go ahead…

Prithvi gave Kripa an apologetical luk and briskly walked outside to answer his mob.On the other hand Kripa's eyes darted here & there in the restaurant searching for Angad.She tapped the table nervously and frantically luked here and there…desperately dying to catch a glimpse fo him.
Suddenly Angad came from behind her & sat on the seat across frm her.Kripa frowned eventhough she was most delighted.She desperately wanted to smile and talk 2 him.She had so many questions in her mind but she kept quiet and pretended to be angry at him and not at all happy abt his presence.

A:(in a as-a-matter-of-fact tone)tum mujhe dhoond rahi thi naa?

K:(surprised at his guts)huh?mein kyun tumhein dhoondne lagi?

A:(naughtily)bano mat..

K:u mean to say tht I'm a liar?

A:heyy meine aisa to nahin kaha.

K:Angad just get lost!

A:ok..as u wish…

And to Kripa's dismay,Angad left.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
amazing part
cont soon
yaar kripa...dont u think u shuld 4give him now 😆
poor angad he's runnin afta her n she's ignorin him 😆 😆

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