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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nelokulood

WOW.. that truly was an intense scene...arnavs emotions were beyond his control...finally they had solace in thier embrace...

Loved cute scenes of arshi...khushi looks adorable calling arnav mr law n order...hats off for this dee...mr laad governor cum lord governor cum law n order loves khushi soo much..took my heart..awesome se bhi zyada awesome...a relief that alls gonna be f9👏🤗🥳


Thnx Zuriah😊

Love what you said Ziyada se bhi Ziyada...awesome se bhi ziyada he loves her...and she is the only one who can scold him😆
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Posted: 9 years ago


Originally posted by: ameena671

wow brilliant update loved it thank you for pm.











Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Story is going very interesting update nest chapter soon make it fast pm me thanks for pm.


Originally posted by: saschades

beautiful update
love how Arnav loves her
thanks for the pm x


Originally posted by: mika17

Superb update

Thnku for the pm




Originally posted by: hydsri

such an emotional update/ khushi has been through so much turmoil.





Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written update...thank you for the PM..👍🏼




Originally posted by: sfghfj

awesome update. loved it




Originally posted by: arshi_sarun

Such a cute update.. Thanks for the pm



Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow Update Is Impressive And Just Flamboyant ...Loved It



Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Awesome update..
congrats on new thread...







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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely222

Like always the best will b waiting for it



Originally posted by: sam88

amazing

pata hi nahin chala kab update khatam hogai





Originally posted by: merehan

wonderful update
loved it




Originally posted by: sanasahel

super update. do dil jaroor milega😊



Originally posted by: AKAD

Must say, This story is way different than anything I read.
Very interesting.👏



Originally posted by: kowsiRa

I loved tge update.it is really nice to see the love between arshi.cobtinue soon :)



Originally posted by: Uarnkhui

Amazing part like Arnav talk with khushi by text





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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pup03

Lovely update.. ARSHI moments were so cute.. Arnav wants Khushi to agree to their deal while Khushi is not ready to do so not until Arnav confess his love to her.. God both are stubborns.. but happy for them as they together have taken a step to let go of their past and move ahead.. loved the superb romantic update..


thanks for pm 😊


Thnx Param 😊

U r so right, how stubborn these two are😆

Pink is so right, yes

Both have taken a step towards the life from which they were running away for a long time.
Their deal is sealed yet they don't want each other to say it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_sarun

The sweetest update.
Loved their morning romance and the texts from Arnav.
Waiting for the next update to know about Anjali's call.
Thanks for the PM.


Kavya😊

thnx dear ,

glad seeing you enjoying the updates dear.You are so sweet .

Anjali's call will be in the next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archnahardik123

Brilliant update.
Sorry for late comment, my internet is not working from few days and Sometimes I can't even login through my phone. Still I keep on trying and now able to comment.
Update was marvellous and their moments were beautifully written with full magic.
Loved the love they show each other despite of being angry. In future too they will make it for each other through love only.
And I am sure arnav will make her forget every thing at this rate very soon. Time is not so far when she will confess soon. But let see who win in this confession game.
You were awesome in this update.

But what happens to anjali. Is any of their enemy left?
Update soon. And thanks for pm.


🤗archana

Don't be sorry , there are some people who have become part of my life and you ar eone of them.I know no matter what you will be here , sooner or later no matter.Love u dear, in a small period of time we have become friends and pretty understanding.

Love the pink

😆 yes lets see who is going to win this deal or both fall together in it.As his love and care and her anger and love means so much to them...how ironic😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suji5

Nice update
What happened to JPalo?
What is bothering Anjali?


Thnx Suji 😊

JPalo is remorsing over his acts and repenting , that is all...


Anjali's part will be here in coming update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pravallika

Awesome faiqa :-)

The best thing i loved in this update is her sweet and cute endearment to arnav before the officers.. she was so tensed and so happy to see him safe after meeting jpalo.. how can she not be worried after knowing about jpalo..
Their conversation in his room about why he met him and how she is scared that he will harm arnav was so beautifully written and it made me feel very natural faiqa.. and i loved the way he said that he will erase the memories of that night.. both of them just needs love to forget their past..
Both are equally stubborn.. She wants him to confess his feelings first this time and he wants her to say the feal is his.. let's see who will confess first.. but in the end you left us hanging.. I'm now waiting to know what went wrong with anjali. .
Thanx for the pm faiqa.. hope your AD relents a bit and you will update soon this time :-)



Asha😊

Thank you

I love the pink , If u felt natural, then I am so happy😊
Her innocent act being oblivious of her surroundings is what have broken all the shells for him, he will never make her remember anything like that...and that is what he was doing in the morning

stubborn they are , lets see what happens even she has confessed as TEASER...what will she do with him after that😆


Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: smat

Simply brilliant.


Loved reading about their cute moments.

Happy to see that they are willing to look past the past and trying to move on.

Thanks for the pm


Thnx smat dear😊

Loved the underlined...yes that is what they are doing




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Fabulous Faiqa...Loved the way you have described JPalo pain and hurt...He realized his mistake for putting Lydia's child through hell. I like him...as he prayed for Khushi and wants her to be happy. But Faiqa...you and your mystery...what is there in the two envelops.

I really loved it the way Khushi addresses ASR with different names...from where you get all these names😆
Officers are going to go crazy to see these two hell stubborn people who loves each other. Poor guy is so confused.
Poor Khushi is scared of JPalo that he will come and kill him as he killed his father. Arnav has to assure her that he is fine and never leave her in this life.
Now Khushi realized Arnav care and his love for her...He was there to give her comfort and take way her pain all night through. He has not taken any advantage of her...I love this Arnav. This is all about Arnav who can't harm her in his dreams too.
Cliffhanger, I hope Anjali is fine.


I love the concept of consent, not forcing and that is ARNAV

He never forces ,but his love makes her to want more...He becomes her need and she is his

She is realizing his love nd care slowly ,but more than before, she is getting this if he is a hot tempered then he is the most tender one too

U liked JPalo, thnx and yes he is not harmful , he was just in this thought that she is his daughter because she was Lidia's and he always thought Lidia was his and never accepted that she loves someone else.

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