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Posted: 9 years ago
Khushi really had to suffer so much... U say it right if god takes from one hand he showers on u with both hands!
Srry for nt catching b4!!
Thnx for PM
ur writing too means a lot to me *hugs*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally Arnav found out Khushis painful past
Sad that she had to suffer so much
loved the update as always
I cant wait for the precap 😳
thanks for the PM




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: xZoyax

Faiqa can we get an early update or am I asking something illegal?😆



😆 Zoya, it is because she is not online since the teaser.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

It's horrible that I missed Thread-4 altogather

Ch-11-13..

Khushi knows that Arnav loves him a lot n he cares for her..

She also knows why did he do all that to her..
But..

She's still unable to get over those words uttered by him..

Though she realizes that he never meant it all yet she's hurt..

She has shared her past with Arnav but he never ever told her about his dark past..
So...
It means he doesn't trust her..
This feeling is killing her..

She frankly admits that she still loves him but need some time ndistance ..

Arnav has his own reasons..
He regrets over his words..
He's madly in love with her..
He can feel her turmoil n is very upset n sad..
He wanna woo her again..

AND WE R WITH HIM..😃

GOOO...

Get ur PRINCESS back ❤️

@Faiqa..
I love u !!!😆




Originally posted by: pakpearl

Hugs to You Teddy Picture fAiQa...

for writing this beautiful story..

n a gift for u ...


Arnav n Khushi love each other more thanthemselves..
I just fall short of words on seeing the depth of their love..

Arnav was so concerned about Khushi's past that he investigated the matter..
The scene where Khushi was running cross the park..all drenched in rain.. was justaawesomeee..

Precap n Teaser 👏



Fauzi 😊

Thank you dear 🤗

Blue ...yes she is hurt because he doesn't trust her and that is killing her more thn tht because she thinks he thinks of her as weak ,but now he knows she is way stronger than him after knowing her past.

love the pink...and purple
yes they love each other more than they love each other.


Love the roses, thank you madam for such cute flowers.

really appreciate that and hope your eyes are doing fine now

phele se 🤗behtr
Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Mind blowing
Loved it


Thnx newmoon dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angelappy19

Faiqa 👏 Briliiant Job. A great update. as i always use to wonder ki frm where u get such ideas to make stories so intense but this tym this is a Real Story. 👍🏼

Its painful dat ur friend has to go through all this. Omg she is a Strong Lady. Gal i Respect you from d bottom of my heart. i just hope everything goes Good.

well Faiqa you are an Awesome writer n der's no doubt dat u narrate it beautifully to us.!
Love d efforts u make to make us understand d story soo well n get connected to it.
Thankyou soo much ! this was indeed d beaurtiful one.

Love
Aparajita 🤗


Aparajita😊

Thnx sweety,

If i really did connect you with 50% of this reality,then I am so happy, trust me .I was so nervous because u can understand as I didn't want to reveal the whole truth as it is and wanted to incorporate in such a wy so everyone could get the gist of the main thing...

God knows how many times I deleted and rewrote...and that is why sometimes I can't post on time...yeah silly me

Thank you so much dear, really happy seeing you got connected with this story .

❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pravallika

Beautiful update and you made it more beautiful with your writing style faiqa :-)

As you said life is not at all bed of roses for some.. my heart goes for that girl whose ever story this is faiqa. .
I loved the way arnav is trying to deal with that palo.. he is directly trying to deal with the problem rather than involving cops or someone else in this.. this gives us an idea how protective he is and can go to any extent when it comes to kushi.. arnav has put his own life at risk when he went to meet him...
He has now understood how much she has gone through and why she said those words in that letter.. Hope he will make her forget everything one day and heal her wounds completely. .
Awesome story faiqa. .
Loved the precap dear ...


Thnx Asha😊

Underlined, yes
sometimes in life you can't put things aside because those are wy important to u.and Khsuhi is EVERYTHING to him as he said to Aadi.

Pink, yes now he understood her hurt because he was saving her thinking her as a fragile one and now he reched to the point that she is teh most fragile one because she has been through a hell in her life and needs purity of emotions, faithfulness from him/


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nelokulood

CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW THREAD...

👍🏼🤗👏
Party to banti hain...
Loved this chapter...
Gradually sab sahi ho raha hain...badly want arshi scenes together...
Hope all mishaps get over...
DEDECTIVE MANORAMA KO BULAIGA PADI..EXCOOSE MEE...HELLO HIE BYE BYE
thnx for pm dee ..love u loads⭐️😛


Thnx Zuriah😊

Party, who stopped u ...go ahead😊

Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archnahardik123

Fantastic update. Written brilliantly.

So the past is out and who killed her father and why. But will try to meet even after knowing that Khushi saw him killing her father. If he truly loved Khushi then he won't disturb her peace.
Let's see if arnav could change his mind or not.
Loved arnav's brave step going meeting gangster all alone even Aman and few bodyguard would have not done anything in gangster's den. This clearly show how much he loves her and how extent he could go for her.
Khushi can say anything to him bug in her heart she knows she can't live without him. And when two souls are attached together then they could feel each other pain and if they are in any danger.
Now that Khushi is at his house hope they could mend their relation soon and we could get some rabba ve.😃

Thanks for fabulous update and pm.


My archana is back with happiness...YESSS!


now tlll end we have wooing Rabba Ves, he has to build trust in between her and him

Pink

when someone becomes so important to u then it is impossible to stretch the time to deal the main problem and nip the evil from its bud and that is where Arnav stands as a the man of action.He knows how to break deals.

Underlined pink

so TRUE...it happens to most of us towards our loved ones...

Thnx
Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aryancha

First of all I pray for your friend who had to endure such incident in her life.I hope she is doing well now and has gotten someone like Arnav in her life to make her come out of her fears and handle her emotions.😊

Remember I changed the name of Arnav from Raizada to Ranveer, ...that was the reason.Her hubby is the most lovable person in this world.

Coming to the update..Man seriously! U are getting better and better everyday..I do not write but can see how u r growing with every update..Arnav was bang on with the meeting with JPalo..the meet could not be better than what you have shown it to be..the words spoken with such ferocity and utmost sincerity and venom that nobody would not,not feel the sting in them! Are we clear on JPalo now? Is he not going to search for Alina anymore?Did the words actually affect him,that may be he would think of her forgiveness sometime? These questions are plaguing my mind for now..The remorse and hurt in his eyes reflect that he is already a dead man, regretting his actions..don't know if I want him to confront Khushi or not..will leave it to u to decide.
She will be Khushi Singh Raizada forever! I have noticed this..Arnav has always been saying this in his mind and even to her..Khushi Singh Raizada..When did he marry her?😆😛 or even give a proper proposal to be his in every form..I know the feelings are all over their body and mind and heart..but it needs to out in air..with all the emotions of heart on their tongues..in front of each other😃

ur BLUE has the answer in RED
PINK...😆 yeap yahi to
he never voiced out, didn't put words to his emotions and he expects her to know.That will happen and how .U will see, I men read.He is a complicated guy

can't even think of her childhood pain..now I do feel angry that Arnav had to leave her when he was her only solace in her life..the admittance of him to her past is in itself so painful..he has to go through both his and her pain together..

me too😡he is just like that, now he went through hell alone for finding peace within nd for herself.

Khushi's emotions are so well written dear..I appreciate every word and the situation u created for it..the description with the surrounding is very apt..U have given life to her feelings with drunk men,homeless people,broken glass pieces..these all somewhere denote sadness and fear in their own ways..but the emotions raging over her mind is far more than everything that she could think of..the feeling of just being near him asap dominates everything when u r scared for ur loved one..I loved this part..

But it's not at all fair..y leave us at a cliffhanger..i felt I just started reading the chapter when it ended!😡 Plz plz update it earlier this time..we want Arshi moments especially after the small precap that you have given us..


😆 most of u are angry that why did I leave u with that and ahem, u will find out why in the next update.Have u seen the length of my chapter unlike some ppl I don't drag with this and that...
It was important to finish this right here

soft pink, awww u are making me the happiest of all for saying this nd that shows what kind of reader are you.Some just want to read Arshi, but I read around them and that explains me what is actually going on and how much truth or reality to facts is attached to it.That makes me attractive to the book or author.Now if she was just running, that couldn't be enough to show the depth of her pain, so all these extra elements as u said were adding sadness.Yes that was important for me.

Thnx , hope thursday


Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago

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