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Posted: 20 years ago
#31

Hey Happs!

Keep it going..Can we expect some fireworks too??????😉

😊Anamika😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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2nd Part

So all 5 leave and they decided to show Kripa the Mumbai city. Kripa is enjoying her self very much but most of all is Angad because he just can't take his eyes off Kripa. After showing Kripa around they all decide to go watch a movie or something. They all went to watch Maine Pyaa kyon Kiya 😆. From left to right, Kartik, Mishti, Prithvi, Kripa and Angad. That's how they were sitting. Through out most of the movie, Angad would try a catch a glance of Kripa's face while Kripa is just too busy watching the movie. During the interval, they had 15 minutes to go get something to eat. They all decided to grab some popcorn and candy. Kripa was about to pay for all this but Angad stopped her and paid for all of it. Then they all go back to watch the movie. Since Kripa had candy in her lap, Angad held the popcorn bowl in his lap. Kripa constantly would take some popcorn and shared with Angad. Angad just loved this. It was his first time sharing something with a girl. Kripa puts her hand in the bowl to get some popcorn and at the same time Angad unintentionally puts his hand in the bowl. For the first time, their hands touched each other and for the first time Kripa looked in Angad's eyes. During the second half of the movie, Kripa would constantly look at Angad as well and for a second, Angad notices that. Kripa shyly start watching the movie.

After the movie ends, everyone comes out of the theater. Mishti asks everyone where they should go now. Prithvi and Kartik decided that they should go to a restaurant and eat dinner while Angad said that they should go to beach cuz it's lovely there at night. Kripa agrees with Angad and so did everyone else. They all decide to go to beach.

At the Beach

Everyone is walking together and just then Prithvi's phone rings. He was asked to come home by his mom cuz he had to sign some important documents. Prithvi had to go from there. So now it was only Kripa, Mishti, Kartik, and Angad. Mishti and Kartik are walking on the beach holding each other's hand. Angad was walking with them but Kripa catches by his hand and slows him down. Angad is little astonished but asks Kripa what happened?

Angad: kya hua?

Kripa: Angad tum bhi na, Mishti aur Kartik ko akele chalne do na. Let them spend some time together. Let's not disturb them.

Angad thanks Kripa.

Angad: Aaj tak mujhe pyaar nahin hua na is liye mujhe pata nahin tha. Waise kya tume kissi se pyaar hua hai? Angad was waiting for Kripa's answer cuz he wanted to know whether she has been in love.

Kripa: haan.

Angad's face has a sad expression and asks her who is he that she loves.

Kripa laughs a little and said if I tell you promise you won't laugh. Angad promises. She tells him that she loves Salman Khan (me too). Angad has a huge smile on his face and he was relieved that she loves a bollywood actor.

Kripa: Angad tume kasi ladki chahiye?

Angad thinks for a moment and gives her an answer.

Angad: I want someone who is very sweet, innocent, pretty, who would share every thought with me, with whom I can talk for hours, with whom I don't have a say a single word and yet she will know what's on my mind. I want someone who will be there for me and who will love me as a person and not as a rockstar.

Kripa: I am sure some day you'll find her.

Angad: But I feel that I have found her.

Kripa smiles shyly but doesn't say a thing.

Angad: Kripa tum ne nahin bataya ke tume kaisa jeevan saathi chahiye.

Kripa: maine is ke bare main kabhi socha hi nahin.

Angad: kyon?

Kripa: I don't know. It never crossed my mind.

Angad: oh

Kripa: If I ever do think about it, you'll be the first to know.

Angad smiles while Kripa just thinks of what she just said.

Mishti and Kartik come back and asked Kripa and Angad if they wanna go eat now. They all decide to go to a restaurant and eat there. After having dinner, they decide to go home. They all hit home. Kartik drops Angad and Kripa home and then goes to drop Mishti.

Khanna House

Kripa's parents were waiting for them to come home.

Kripa's dad: beta, how was your day?

Kripa: amazing dad. I have lodes of fun.

Angad: don't worry uncle, I think Kripa enjoyed her self very much. Kripa nods.

Kripa excueses her self by telling that she was tired and heads towars her room. Angad goes to his room too. As he was about to take off his shirt 😉, he hears a knock on his door.

Hope you all liked it. I'll have to go and continue my other fan-fic now. 😆

Edited by happe - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#33
awesome happe u made me soo happe😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#34
oh god this is remarkable plz add more scene to it i just love it
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Posted: 20 years ago
#35

plz dont stop...keep it writing....👏👏

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
#36
actually guys, angadkripafan will be concluding the next part. I am waiting for her to conclude cuz she is really good with romantic parts and I am eagerly waiting to see some romance between Angad and Kripa. 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#37

hey i m ritin a story after a long time hope uall like it

angad heras a knock at the door n it is his mom

angad:hi mom

naina:hi

angad:kuch kam tha kya actually i m preety tired rite now

naina:i want take 2 much of ur time actually i want u 2 take kripa 2 ur friendz perty that is tomm let her mix up with ur friendz n even make new friendz here so that she will fell comfotable here

as soos as angad hears kripas name his face lightens up

angad:ya sure i would love 2 do so

naina:take care of kripa n good nite beta

angad:good nite mom

angad changes n is lying down on his bed n thinkin abt kripa how he will ask kripa 2 come 2 the party with him n will she say yes he was nervous cause was a very different girl different then those he would spend the nite with

kripa on the other hand has started 2 like angad a bit she no that angad is that one nite one girl type of a person totally different then her but still there is something that pulls her towards him she knows that angad is a good person fron inside n can change if some1 makes his good self come out

in the mornin kripa gets up early cause she could not sleep at nite cause she was thinkin abt angad then suddenly she sees angad going 2wards his car kripa calls out 2 him

kripa:angad

angad walks 2wards kripa

angad:hey kripa good mornin wat r u doin up so early?

kripa:i could not sleep properly

angad:hey i m goin 4 a WALK 2 THE BEACH WOULD U LIKE 2 JOIN ME ?

kripa:uuummmm ok i would love 2

angad:lets go then

they sit in the car n angad is drivin in his mind he is very happy 2 spend time alone with kripa then they reach the beach

kripa:u love 2 come 2 the beach dont u?

angad:ya in the mornin cause here there r not much of ppl hardly 3 or 4 i can b myself i dont have 2 give autographs n no 1 is there 2 disturb me n i can peacefully watch the oceans beauty

kripa:gosh never thought a rockstars life is so hard

angad:ya it is very hard

kripa n angad talk 4 a long time n laugh n enjoy themselves then suddenly angad remembers abt the party

angad:kripa wat r u doin this evenin

kripa:nothing y?

angad:my friend has thrown a party i was thnkin if u could b my date 4 2nite

kripa(shys a bit):alrite but i dont no any1 i will feel out of place

angad:dont worry karthik n mishty r also commin

kripa :oh gr8

angad i think v should go home now its time 4 breakfast

kripa:ya ur rite

angad(jokes):i m always rite

kripa playfully hits angads arm n they laugh then reach home

after they reached home

angad n kripa r still busy talkin n laughin n enter the house the family members r sittin in the dinin table n have started 2 eat

a-k:good mornin every1

naina(happy 2 c them 2gether):where did u ppl go

angad:v went 2 the beach

naina:ok now have ur breakfast

all have their breakfast then later kripa calls mishti

kripa:hello mishti

mishti:hey kripa

kripa:hey i was wonderin if v could go shoppin 4 2nites party?

mishti:how do u no abt the party i was abt 2 invite u

kripa:angad invited me (blushes with happiness)

mishti ok i will come 2 khanna house then v will go 2gether anyways i have 2 bye something 4 karthik

in the afternoon they go 4 shopin mishti buys clothes 4 herself n karthik n kripa buys 4 herself they were levin the mall when kripa saw a smart dress a jacket , top n pants

kripa tough of takin it 4 angad she tells mishti 2 sit in the car

mishti goes in the car n waits 4 kripa buys the clothes 4 angad n then mishti drops her home n then goes 2 her home

kripa knocks at angads room it is evenin n they have 2 go 2 the party in abt 1 hr

angad:come in

kripa comes in

angad:hi kripa where were u th hole day?

kripa:i had gone shoopin with mishti n i saw these clothes n thought it would look gr8 on u 4 the party so i bought it 4 u if u dont wear it its ok

then suddenly kripas mom calls her n kripa goes b4 angad could say anything

angad had a smile on his face

kripa is ready n is comin down stairs angad is already down stairs n is watin 4 kripa

they both look so beautiful n r stairin at eachother n look like match made in heaven then they leave 4 the party

angad:kripa i love these clothes they r gr8

kripa:ya n u look so smart in them

angad:n u look so beautiful

kripa blushes n angad cant take his eyes off her

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Posted: 20 years ago
#38
sorry took time 2 rite but it was 2 big plez tell how it was
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Posted: 20 years ago
#39
I loved it yaar. Thanx for continuing. Can't for the next part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#40
happe not sure if i will b able 2 continue cause i cant come online 4 a long time cause my school has started n studies but if i get a chance i will surely

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