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komal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#91

Honii wrote:

komal ji awesome part me loved it toooooooo gooooooood continue sooon 👏

thx soo much 😳

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komal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#92

Iqbal neha 1 wrote:

great part
hope sujal and kashish tell each other whats in their heart 👏

well yeh toh nxt part hi batayega 😉 😉 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

#93

golu_1677 wrote:

awesome part 👏

thx soo much 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

#94

armaghan0 wrote:

kashish kahan gaey 😆

well woh jane ke liye toh u have to wait till the nxt part 😉

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#95

sun_423 wrote:

kimmy dear the parts were absolutely rocking... ek dum bindaas , dhaasu , raapchik , jhakaas...simply superb.... super duper coolest... mind blowing... i loved it... beleive me main teri writing style par fulltoo fida hogayi....simply wonderful , fantastic , awesome , amazing..... keep the good work going......... 👏
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me very happy the way the story is moving forward... sujal , kashish kareeb aa rahe hain... they have realized their love for each other.... sujal ka keeping kashish's earing... kashish planning a surprise for sujal.. then kashish ka sujal ko satana.... sujal ka kashish ko propose karne ke liye idhar se udhar , udhar se idhar bhaagna.... all this was shooo sweet.... very cute... 😳 ab i think in the next part sujal , kashish ek dusare se apne dil ki baat keh hi baitenge.... un dono ke beech pyaar ka ikraar ho hi jayega.... lekin on the other side i think ki yeh dono itni jaldi apne dil ki baat nahi kahenge... dono chup rahenge... & will wait for the other to tell... well yeh mere do guesses hain.. ab tu mujhe bata kaunsa sahi hain....aur kaunsa ghalat..... 😉 ab please next part jaldi post karna..me waiting eagerly.... 😃

hey di thx 4 ure lovely lovely comment 😳well nxt part mein kya hoga yeh toh apko tab hi pata chalega jab woh part update hoga tab tak keep thinking dii😉😉

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komal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#96

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awesome part

😳 thx so much 😳

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: komalsirwani

hey di thx 4 ure lovely lovely comment 😳well nxt part mein kya hoga yeh toh apko tab hi pata chalega jab woh part update hoga tab tak keep thinking dii😉😉

kimmy yaar mujhko thanku nahi bolo..... dosti mein no thanku hotha hain.... 😊 dear i know ki mujhe next part mein kya hoga tab patah chalega jab tu update karegi.. tho isliye jaldi se update kar... mujhse next part ka intezaar nahi ho raha hain.... 😆

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gr8 part.. 👏 ..jus 2 good... 👏

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gr8 part.. 👏 👏 ..jus 2 good... 👏

thx soo much 😳

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#100

Hello everybody this is me kimmy back with LAMHE-11th Part......
RECAP:Kashish thinks of a surprise 4 Sujal......Sujal tels Kumkum abt a girl in his life......Sujal -Kashish realise that they love each other.....Sujal searches 4 Kashish everywhere but is unable to find her......He gets ready 4 da party.....

In the Party.....
Sujal is searching 4 Kashish.....He goes around the whole party hall but he is unable to find Kashish....Suddenly someone places a hand on his shoulder.....
Sujal smiles n holds that hand n turns.....His smile fades away as he turns........Itz Kripa
Kripa:hi Sujal
Sujal(sadly):hi
Kripa:kya hua itne udaas kyun ho
Sujal(hiding his feelings n trying to smile):udaas....... mein...... nahi toh.....
Kripa:haan haan tum kyun udaas hone lage
Sujal:right
Zaib:hello guys
Kripa(hugs him sideways):Hi Zaib
Zaib:hello jaaneman
Sujal:arre waah khullam khula pyar ho raha hai
Kripa blushes
Zaib:Sujal tu bhi na ....
Sujal:main bhi na kya.....
Zaib:jab tujhe pyaar hojayega na tab dekhenge tu kaise door rehta hai apni girlfrnd se
Sujal(to himself):yeh saza toh main already bhugat raha hoon door toh main hoon hi na usse
Zaib:kya kaha tune
Sujal:kuch nahi mere bhai chal na wahan jaate hai
Sujal takes Zaib-Kripa somewhere n then slowly escapes frm der....
Hes standing at the entrance waiting 4 someone....Suddenly some one comes in front of him n asks
Sum1:kisi ko dhoond rahe ho Sujal...
Sujal(looking at the door):haan woh ka.....(he sees whuz in the front)arre bhaiya bhabhi aap
Sumeet:haan tum kisi ko dhoond rahe the socha tumhari madat kar doon
Sujal:main kisi ko dhoond raha tha??......nahi .nahi toh main toh kisi ko nahi dhoond raha tha
Kumkum:toh phir devar ji ap yahan kya kar rahe hai darwaaze ke paas
Sujal:woh....main dekhra tha ki sab kuch theek toh nahi hai ......main wahan dekhke aata hoon
Sujal comes in the front ......
Sujal:ufff bach gaya kahan ho yaar kashish tum pata nahi aur intezaar karwaogi

The party is on in full swing....Everybody's enjoying except Sujal....Time passes by itz 11:30 .....Sujal sees the time
Sujal:11:30 baj gaye tum ab tak nahi aayi Kashish agar tum 12 baje tak nahi aayi toh koi aur mujhe wish kar dega aur main chahta hoon ki is saal sabse pehle tum mujhe wish karo plzzzzz aajao
....Mihir n Lalit come on to the stage
Lalit:ladies n gentlemen aap log yeh jaanne ke liye betaab honge ki aakhir aj ki yeh party humne rakhi kyun.....is party ki ek wajah toh yeh hai humara frnd aur bussiness partner Mumbai se ab Shimla shift ho gaye hai aur.....
Mihir:aur doosri wajah ap sab ko kuch hi der mein pata chal jayegi so Enjoy the party........
Every1 is enjoying th party all the couples r dancing.......Sujal looks at them n wishes if Kashish would be der.....He looks at his watch ...Itz 15 mins to 12....He gives up....
Sujal:shayad is saal tum mujhe nahi wish kar paogi Kashish.......Immiadiately lights are off theres sum1 on stage....Itz a lady but her face is covered by the darkness......
Lady:Hello ppl ap logon ko is party ki ek wajah toh pata chal hi chuki hai Mahen uncle aur unki family ka yahan shift hona lekin is party ki usse bhi bade wajah hai woh bhi apko pata chal jayegi bas kuch hi palon baat
Sujal wants to see who is it but nobody is able to see who is it ........
The lady proceeds...
Lady:kehte hai jab hum is duniya mein aate hain toh bhi khali haath aate hain aur jab jaate hain toh khali haath hi jaate hai lekin humare beech ek aisa shaks hai jinhone jis pal se is duniya mein kadam rakha yeh duniya suhaani ho gayi yeh aaye aur apne saath itni khushiyaan laaye ki inke pariwaar kya inke dost kya saara sheher(city) inka hogaya ......
ap log janna chahte honge yeh kon hai........bas kuch hi der intezaar kijiye humein abhi pata chal jayega
The projector is on.......
In the first clipping we see a small baby born in the hostipal ...The nurse brings him out n gives it in the hands of his father.....Then we see a mother kissing that baby......
Then we see a boy of 2 yrs walking and running towards his dad and his dad hugging him....
In the nxt clipping we see a boy of 8 yrs giving a sixer in his batting n then he runs with happiness on his face towards his frnds n all the boyz fall upon on another.....
Then we see a boy of 15 yrs running towards his mom with a trophy in his hands and his mom kisses his forhead......
Then we see a boy of 22 yrs partying in a pub with his frnds......
Then the projector closes.....
Lady:so aap sab toh samajh gaye hain yeh kon hai Yes yeh wahi handsome dashing smart har ladki ka dil chura lene waale Mr.Sujal Garewal hai jo aaj se teekh 24 saal pehle is duniya mein aaye aur hum sabki khushiyon se bhar diya ......
The spotlight falls on Sujal......Sujal who is quite happy that he's got such a nice surprise on his bday is smiling pleasantly but sumwhere deep in his heart hes missing Kashish thought itz not looking in his face....
Lady:Mr.Sujal Garewal may i request u to please come on to the stage......
The whole hall is filled with cheers n claps after all itz Sujal Garewal's bday......Sujal walks on the stage.....Everybodys smiling Veena Lalit.....Tulsi Mihir.......Kumkum Sumet......Anuraag Prerna......Zaib Kripa....Mahen Pallavi...Anjali... everybodys really happy 4 Sujal....But Sujal he has only Kashish in his mind......Hes happy that ppl love him soo much but Kashish he just cant take her out of his mind....
Sujal reaches the stage......There comes a big cake.....Sujal wants to see the lady whuz still in darkness but hes unable to see her.....That lady comes n gives him a knife......
Lady(gives her hand):Happy birthday
Sujal(shakes hands with her):thx(he felt sumthing ....who was she???? he was desperste to knw know but she had a mask ohhh godd wat would he do....before he could react Veena Lalit n all others in the family came onto the stage)
Sujal cuts the cake .....Happy birthday song is being played in the background.....He gives the first piece to Veena n then Lalit n then sumeet n ....it goes on......finally he feeds the girl in disguise.....When everything is done n every1 is gone Sujal also starts to walk off.....
Lady:rukiye rukiye Sujal aap itni jaldi nahi jaa sakte abhi toh surprises baaki hai ....
Sujal smiles n comes back.....
Lady:can i have a dance with the birthday boy?(n she gives him her hand)...He accepts it n both of them dance.....
(Tumhi dekho na frm KANK is playing in the background)....Sujal is trying hard to find out who she is but she dosent allow him to find out...
Sujal(thinking):kya yeh kashish hai...agar haaan tu yun mujhse chup kyun rahi hai aur agar nahi toh kahan ho tum Kashish plzz jaldi aao ab aur der mat karo aur der hogayi toh pata nahi kya hojayega plzz aajao
Lady:apne kuch kaha
Sujal(thinks):yeh awaaz .....pata nahi yeh kon hai
Sujal:nahi kuch nahi......
The dance gets over...Every1 claps for them.....
Lady:So Ladies and Gentlemen ........the party has begun .....come on n burn the dance floor.....The Dj plays the music n all couples are dancing......
The lady goes away...Sujal goes behind her to find out who she is but on the way hes stopped by Veena .....
Veena:Happy birthday beta
Sujal(hugs her):thx mama
Veena:itna bada hogaya hai tu pata hi nahi chala
Sujal:mama apke liye toh humesha chota hi rahoonga na
Lalit comes:bilkul sahi bacche jitne bhi bade ho jaye maa baap ke liye toh chote hi hote hai Happy Birthday son( Sujal touches his feet n he hugs him)
Sumeet comes:happy birthday Sujal
Sujal:bhaiya thx soo much (n they hug)
Kumkum:bas main hi bach gayi Happy Birthday to my sweetest devar(n she rubs his cheeks)
Sujal:thx my sweetest bhabhi(n he rubs her cheeks too)
Sujal:papa mama bhaiya bhabhi ap log dance kijiye na
Lalit:haan haan chalo veena
All of them go away...Sujal now thinks where couldve she gone....He turns back n sees Kashish standing there.....Sujal cant believe his eyes...Is it really Kashish or his imagination....He goes to her n tries touching her ....Shes still there....
Kashish:arre Sujal kya hua
Sujal(surprised that shes spking):kya tum sach mein ho Kashish
Kashish(confused):haan Sujal main sach mein hoon par tumhe kya hogaya
Sujal:nahi kuch nahi im ok
Kashish:ok yeh sab baatein chodo Wish u a very very Happy Birthday
Sujal(turns away):badi jaldi aagayi tum
Kashish(comes in front of him):im sorry baba(holds her ears) kaho toh uthak bethak(sit ups) bhi karoongi
Sujal(takes her hands in his):nahi nahi iski koi zaroorat nahi itz ok tum aageyi na yehi mere liye bahut hai
Kashish:acha Sujal mama keh rahi tum subah ghar aaye the mujhse milne kuch kaam tha kya
Sujal blushes:haan Kashish kuch kaam toh tha main tumse kuch kehna chahta tha
Kashish:Sujal im soo sorry mujhe jaana hoga main tumse bad mein milti hoon
Sujal:arre Kashish suno tho.......... (before he completes his sentence shes gone)

Kashish walks little front.....
Kashish(thinks):im sorry Sujal main aise kar rahi hoon lekin thoda sa intezaar karlo phir tum sab kuch keh sakoge aur main bhi(n she blushes)......

Sujal is sad that he couldnt tell Kashish what he wanted to tell her .....He's standing alone in a corner when Anjali comes to him....
Anjali:hey Sujal yahan akele kya kar rahe ho itz ure bday yaar chalo letz dance
Sujal:nahi anjali mera mann nahi hai
Anjali:nahi Sujal aj koi bahana nahi chalo na dance karte hain plzzzzz(n she pulls him with her )
Both of them dance...Sujal is forcible dancing...He wants to be with Kashish but .......uff hes so irritated now.....Finally the dance is over ....Anjali is called by sum frnd so she goes away...Sujal gets a letter frm sum1....It says...
Sujal apke surprises ab tak khatam nahi hue one more surprise waiting 4 u in ure room.....Sujal is kind of confused but he walks up to his room.....He reaches his room opens the door n is abt to go inside when some one calls out to him.....
Mihir:arre Sujal beta kahan jaa rahe ho yahan aao na
Sujal:woh uncle main(he looks at his room) kahin nahi (he locks the room n comes dwn) ji uncle boliye
Mihir:Sujal inse milo yeh hai Mr.Sisodia humare ek bahut hi purane client hai
Sujal:hello

So he gets busy in meeting ppl....Then Zaib comes n takes Sujal away with him...
Zaib:arre Sujal tu bhi kya boring logon se mil raha hai chal mere saath wahan bethte hai
Zaib takes Sujal to a table where Kripa Kashish n Anjali are already siting...
Zaib:so the birthday boy is also here
Kripa:gr8 acha hua Sujal tum bhi aagaye
Anjali:ya Sujal betho naa
Sujal sits dwn beside Anjali n opposite Kashish...Kashish dosent spk nething .....Her eyelids are dwn...Finally she gathers up all her courage n the moment she looks up she sees Sujal staring at her smiling.....She blushes n looks dwn again....She wants to look up but shes too nervous Finally she tries to look at him n their eyes meet.....There is no need 4 words their eyes spk it all ....But this contact is broken by Zaib...
Zaib:Sujal-Kashish tum dono kuch bol kyun nahi rahe mon vrat rakha hai kya
Sujal :nahi yaar aise koi baat nahi......Kashish shys away......
Pallavi comes to them.......
Pallavi:arre bachon tum log yahan ek kone mein aakar beth gaye ho kuch dhamaal karo yaar the party is soooo boring
Zaib:actually mom itz soo boring chalo na lets dance.....(n Zaib offers his hand to Kripa...Pallavi notices this but is quiet)
Kripa takes Zaib's hand n both of them go on to the stage.....
The Dj palys the song.....
Aaj ki raat .....Zaib-Kripa perform on it.....Every1 claps n then they take the mike...
Zaib:humare baad ab aayenge Sujal-Kashish.....Sujal-Kashish who r standing nxt to each suddenly give a whats dis kind of look to each other n then Sujal takes Kashish's hands n goes on to the stage....
They dance on Mahi ve n when the words come Soni re soni re aaja mahi ve ....Kashish turns n comes around to Sujal n both of them stop there looking at each other ....The music stops but they dont move....They hear all the claps n come back to reality n both of them shy away.....Kashish runs away frm der...Sujal follows her....Nobody notices this......
Kashish runs on to the terrace ....Shes looking at two love birds on a nearby tree....Sujal follows...
Sujal:kya dekh rahi ho Kashish
Kashish:woh dekho vo do love birds kitne pyaare lag rahe hain na socho agar yeh dono alag alag hote toh kitne adhure hote...
Sujal:yeh hi toh kudrat ka neeyam (rule) hai na Kashish har koi dusre ke bina adhura hai isliye toh humein ek saathi ki zaroorat hoti hai ek aise saath ki jo humare bina adhura hai aur jiske bina hum...
Kashish:par humein woh saath milega kaise
Sujal:well woh toh us upar waale ka kaam hai (n he looks up)wahi humein apne saathi se milwata hai bas humein uska ishara samajh lena chahiye
Kashish:hmmmmm
Sujal:kashish ek baat poochon
Kashish:hmmmm
Sujal:jabse hum milein hai tumhe nahi lagta humari zindagi badal chuki hai .....
Kashish(understands what he means but wants to tease him so says):badal chuki hai? matlab?
Sujal:matlab humari zindagi ko dekhne ka nazaraiya badal chuka hai.......hum ek dusre se......(hes interrupted by a voice calling out 4 Kashish frm dwn)
Kashish:oh mumma ohk Sujal main chalti hoon hum baad mein baat karenge Happy birthday once again bye....

Kashish leaves leaving behind a confused Sujal........
Sujal:Kashish tum tum hamesha yun kyun chali jaati ho pata nahi main kab tumse apne dil ki baat keh paoonga par jo bhi ho jaye main tumse kahoonga zaroor....(n he blushes)
Song in Background....
Chupke chupke naa jaane,
kub woh dil mai hai ayee.
Bunke khusboo woh meri,
zindagi mai samayee.
(Sujal remembers the first time they met in London n he hadnt given his hand to her n she was angry)

Uski hur baat mujhko,
ub to lagti bhali hai.
Mai kisi raah pe jaon
lagai uski gali hai.
(He remembers the scene when she was sleeping at him in the plane)

Meri yaadon mai rahe
Oh oh oh oh
Woh mere saath chalai.
Banke merir parchayee.
(he remembers the scene when he had imagined Kashish 4 selecting his clothes)

Haan mujhe pyar hua hai,
O meri saathi.
Thoda sa pyar hua hai,
thoda hai baaqi.

Sujal now full khush remembering all his moments with Kashish goes to his room smiling......His room is dark the lights are off....He goes n ons the lights.....
Hes all the more surprised to see his room completely decorated with flowers n all his picz frm Childhood till now....He just loved it.....
Sujal walks in n he sees a letter on the table....he takes it n reads it ....
So Sujal kaisa laga yeh surprise well yeh toh shuruaat hai abhi toh kal ka saara din baaki hai....Sujal is lil confused but he .....
Sujal:yeh kon hai...mama nahi woh mujhe aise letter kyun likhegi ...Kumkum bhabhi .....na woh bhi aisa nahi karegi phir kon....lagta hai kal hi pata chalega .....(n he goes off to sleep only 2 see kashish in his dreamz...)

In the morning.....
Sujal is sleeping paecefully just like a small baby ....(OMG he looks so cut while sleeping).....
Sum1:Sujal utho
Sujal:offo mama aaj mera bday hai na mujhe aj zyada der sona hai
Sum1:well mr Sujal agar ap aur der soyenge toh main yahan se chali jaongi
Sujal:mom plzz na main bas 10 mins mein uthra hoon
Sum1:ok then im going (she bends dwn n whispers in shivs ear) Happy birthday Sujal...
Kashish dint get up still when Sujal opens his eyes n he sees Kashish so close to him ....Kashish quickly moves away .....
Sujal(in a sleepy tone ):Kashish tum yahan
Kashish(cant look at him so looks the other side n spks):haan woh main aunty uncle se milne aayi thi toh aunty ne kaha tumhe jaga doon tum jaldi se ready hokar neeche aajao main chalti hoon....
She gets up to walk but Sujal holds her hand before she escapes....He gets up frm his bed.....Brings her closer to himself shes standing having her back towards him and he has his hands over hers on her stomach .....Kashish closes her eyes....
Sujal(goes close to her n whispers in her ear):thanx Kashish ....(Kashish turns to him and y thx ka expresion)...(Sujal looks at her face n smiles n says) mujhe wish karne ke liye....
Kashish blushes and tries to run away but Sujal dosent leave her hand....She looks in Sujal's eyes in a pleading way..Their eyes spk.....
They hear some foot steps....Sujal leaves Kashish n both of them look dwn n turn opp to each other when Kumkum comes......
Kumkum:Arre waah Kashish tumne toh aaj woh kardiya jo hum mein se koi nahi kar pata hai
Kashish:maine kya kiya bhabhi?
Kumkum:tumne isse jo utha liya
Kashish laughs
Sujal:bhabhi aap bhi na aaj mera birthday hai kam se kam aaj toh mujhe chod do
Kumkum(goes towards him presses his cheeks):aww aaj tumhara birthday hai na ..........so wat aaj toh main tumhe aur bhi pareshaan karoongi(presses his ears)
Sujal:ouch bhabhi
Kumkum:hehe sorry devar ji par kya karoon apki bhabhi hai hi aisi
Kashish is enjoying the cute talk between Kumkum and Sujal.....
Sujal(takes his turn to press her cheeks):aur humesha aise hi rehna bhabhi
Kumkum:chal chal ab zyada maska mat maar jaldi se ready hokar neeche aaja sab tera wait kar rahe hain .....chal kashish hum chalte hain
Kashish:haan bhabhi chalo(Kumkum walks out......Kashish goes closer to sujal presses his cheeks n says) aur tum bhi humesha aise hi rehna(n runs away before Sujal could react)
Sujal is surprised at first with Kashish's behavior and then he smiles n goes to the bathroom......He gets ready n comes dwn ....The whole family is sitting there on the breakfast table but Kashish is gone...Sujal comes ...
Lalit:good morning beta
Sujal goes n takes Veena n lalit's aashirwaad and greets Sumeet ......he goes n sits dwn
Sujal:mama Tia ka koi phone aaya
Veena:nahi beta
Sujal:lagta hai woh mera birthday bhool gayi hai
Veena:aisa nahi hai zaroor uska phone mein koi problem hogi woh aj ka din khatam hone se pehle phone kar legi dekhlena
Sujal:woh phone karegi toh bhi main usse baat nahi karoonga
Veena:offo Sujal kitna bachpana hai tujhmein
Tia comes frm the door.....
Tia:hello everybody....Sujal sees Tia ..his face lights up he rushes to the door n goes n hugs her...
Tia:Happy Birthday bhaiya
Sujal(remembers that hes angry):ab aayi ho tum
Tia:im sorry bhaiya kya karoon humara trip extend hogaya warna main kal hi aajati thi
Sujal:chal koi bat nahi but nxt time aise nahi hona chahaiye
Tia smiles:bilkul nahi (n she hugs him sideways)
Veena:sirf bhai se hi milogi ya humse bhi
Tia:ohh mom (she goes n hugs her mom hugs her dad n meets Sumeet n Kumkum)
Sujal:so Tia Ranveer kaisa hai
Ranveer:woh bhi acha hai bhaiya ctually woh aana chahta tha par phir usne kaha ki woh apse baad mein mil lega
Lalit:so Sujal tumhara aaj ka kya plan
Sujal:pata nahi papa ab tak kuch decide nahi hua hai.....
Zaib:decide ho chuka hai....
Every1 looks at the door
Veena:arre Zaib tum aao na
Zaib:hello aunty hello uncle....(he goes upto Sujal)tere birthday ka saara din tu kaise spend karega yeh main bataunga....Aunty uncle ap sabka lunch aaj humare ghar pe hai mama ne kaha woh apko call karegi
Veena:ohhh tumhari mom ka cal aya toh tha lekin main mandir gayi thi main hi use call kar deti hoon
Zaib:ok aunty....So Sujal decide hogaya hai na ab tu chal mere saath
Sujal:kahan ?
Zaib:chal na letz go n meet sum frndz
Sujal:zaib tu jaa main tujhe thodi der mein join karta hoon
Zaib:par tu kahan jaa raha hai
Sujal:mujhe kuch kaam hai main aata hoon tu jaa
Zaib:ok buddy then call me when ure free
Sujal:ok then
Zaib leaves...Sujal gets ready n goes in his car....He goes to the mandir ......He goes there n stands in front of the idol n prays...
Sujal:ap toh sab jaante hai aur yeh bhi ki main kashish se kitna pyaar karta hoon.....aaj mera janam din hai woh din jab main is duniya mein aaya apne mujhe itna aacha parivaar diya itne acha pyaar diya mujhe apse aur kuch nahi chahiye bas mere pyaar ke aankhon mein kabhi nami na ho woh kabhi udaas na ho jab tak main is duniya mein hoon usse humesha hanste hue dekho bas yehi meri iccha hai
Kashish on the other hand is in the same mandir....
Kashish:apko toh pata hai na aj Sujal ka bday hai main toh bas yehi chahti hoon ki woh humesha khush rahe usse itni khushiyon dena ki gham uske kareeb aane se bhi dare aur usse meri bhi umr de dena bas mere Sujal ko humesha yunhi hanste hue dekhna chahti hoon main
(ab bhagwan ji ke paas bhi aur koi chara nahi hai in dono ki baat manne ke siwai)....
Sujal opens his eyes n turns to go when he sees kashish n Kashish also sees Sujal at the time ......Both together...
Sujal:arre Kashish tum
Kashish:arre Sujal tum
Both laugh
Sujal:tum yahan woh bhi aaj ke din
Kashish(hiding her feelings for him):haan woh aaj Saturday hai na
Sujal(becomes sad):ohh Saturday...(thinks) keh nahi sakti thi ki tumhara bday hai isliye aayi hoon saturday keh diya
Kashish(thinks):main kyun kahoon tum hi pehchaano na agar pyaar karte ho toh itne toh pata hona chahiye na
Sujal(thinks):haan haan jaise pyar sirf mujhe hai tumhe nahi
They walk outside.....
Kashish:ok then main chalti hoon
Sujal:tum kaise jaogi il drop u na chalo
Kashish:nahi maine bhabhi ko kaha tha she'll pick me up
Sujal:arre Kashish pata nahi bhabhi ko aur kitni der lagegi main chod dunga na
Kashish:ok but mujhe bhabhi ko call karna hoga aur main apna phone toh ghar par hi bhool gayi
Sujal:koi baat nahi take my phone(n he gives her his phone)
Kashish calls Prerna
Prerna(sees Sujal's no):hey Sujal happy birthday
Kashish:bhabhi itz me Kashish
Prerna:arre Kashish tum ..Sujal ke cell se
Kashish:haan bhabhi woh Sujal mujhe yahin mil gaye toh main unke saath hi ghar jaa rahi hoon ohk ap direct ghar pohonch jaiye
Prerna:oh ok then bye
Kashish cuts the call....shes abt to give the phone to Sujal when she sees his wallpaper.....Itz Kashish.....Sujal dosent realise that shes seen it....
Kashish(thinks):Sujal ke phone mein meri pic...kya iska mtalab woh bhi mujhse pyaar...(She smiles looks at Sujal) lekin usne mujhse ab tak kaha kyun nahi .....well maine usse mauka hi kahan diya ......ok then main intezaar karoongi Sujal(she looks at him)
Sujal:Kashish
No reply
Sujal:Kashish
No reply.....he turns towards Kashish n.....
Sujal:kashish(he snaps)
Kashish(comes back):haan ...kya hua
Sujal:kahan khoyi ho
Kashish:kahin nahi
Sujal:acha mera phone toh do
Kashish(smiles):yeh lo
Sujal:thx
Kashish's house comes.....
Kashish(gets dwn):Sujal tum bhi chalo na
Sujal:nahi main chalta hoon
Kashish:arre Sujal agar mumma ko pata chala ki tum yahan tak aakar chale gaye toh unhe kitna bura lagega chalo na plzz
Sujal(cant say no to her):ok chalo
Kashish and Sujal go inside....Ranveer is sitting in the hall....He sees Sujal n comes to him...
Ranveer:hey Sujal bhaiya Hapy Birthday
Sujal:thx Ranver(n they hug)
Kashish goes n calls Tulsi....
Tulsi:arre Sujal beta aao na
Sujal comes to her n touches her feet
Tulsi:Happy birthday n may u have a long long life....
Sujal:thx aunty....
Tulsi:Sujal tum betho main tumhare liye kuch khaane ko lekar ati hoon
Sujal:arre nahi aunty main chalta hoon amin toh bas apse milne aaya tha abhi il leave
Tulsi:arre ruko na
Sujal:nahi bas aunty muma wait kar rahi hogi mujhe chalne chahiye bye
Tulsi:ok beta jaisi tumhari marzi
Sujal:ok thn bye aunty bye kashish
Kashish(smiles):bye

In the afternoon...Mahen's house....The viraani's and Garewals lunch is at Kapoors house...
Zaib is sitting with Anjali trying to convince her..
Zaib:Anjali plzz yaar meri baat maan na jaa mom ke paas
Anjali:bhai ap pichle 1/2 ghante se mujhe manane ki koshish kar rahe hai aur main pichle adhe ghante se mana kar rahi hoon
Zaib:par kyun
Anjali:well agar main mom se baat karoongi toh mujhe kya milega
Zaib:Jo tujhe chahiye bas
Anjali:ok par mujhe karna kya hai
Zaib:theek toh tu jaldi se mumma ko bol kil Kripa ko bhi bulaaye lunch pe
Anjali:ofo bhai bhabhi ki yaad arahi hai tumhe
Zaib(blushes):haan..........par ab tu jaldi jaa aur maa ko bol na
Anjali:ok lekin yaad rakhna mujhe jab bhi kuch chahiye main apke paas hi aongi
Zaib:done

Anjali invites Kripa too 4 lunch...Sujal and family come n have thier lunch...Zaib n Sujal sit n talk
Zaib:arre Sujal tu subah kahan chala gaya tha kaha phone karega par phone bhi nahi kiya
Sujal:arre woh main mandir gaya tha wahan Kashish mil gayi toh usse drop karne chala gaya
Zaib:ohhhhh Kashish wahi main kahoon Sujal bhool kaise gaya ab Kashish ke aage tujhe aur kuch yaad rehta hai kya
Sujal:shut up Zaib aise kuch nahi
Zaib:acha aisa kuch nahi hai toh Kashish ke naam pe tere gaal aise kyun ho jate laal ek dum
Sujal(touches his cheeks):nahi toh...tu bhi na
Zaib laughs...Kripa comes...
Kripa:hello guys
Zaib:tum ab aarahi ho maine tumhe yahan apne gharwaalo ke saath baithne thodi bulaya hai
Kripa:offo Zaib ab sab wahan bethe the na main unhe kaise kehti ki mujhe Zaib se milne jaana hai
Zaib:keh daati pyar kiya hai toh darna kya
Kripa:acha tum mein itne guts hai toh tum hi kyun nahi keh deti
Zaib:maaain....no wayz
Sujal whos enjoying this fight starts laughing...
Kripa:dekha Sujal tumhare dost ke guts tumhi batao agar tumhe kisise pyaar hojaye toh kya tum usse nahi kahoge
Sujal(thinks abt kashish):main......main usse ....
Kripa:arre Sujal tum toh aise ghabra rahe ho jaise tumhe sach much pyaar hoagaya hai
Sujal is thinking wat 2 say when his cell rings....He picks up the call..
Sujal:hello
Voice:hello Sujal ji pehchana mujhe
Sujal:nahi toh
Voice:apki wahi surprises wali fan
Sujal:oh aap toh boliye ab kya hai
Voice:apka bday khatam nahi matlab surprises khatam nahi
Sujal:matlab?
Voice:matlab ke aj shaam 6 baje se pehle apne ghar na jaana wahan bhi ek surprise hai
Sujal:agar main chala jaon toh
Voice:apko entry hi nahi milegi try kar lijiye
Sujal:letz see
Voice:acha woh sab chodo ap yeh bolo kal raat ko apka room kaisa laga
Sujal:ohh toh wo apne kiya tha
Voice:yes so did u like it?
Sujal:woh toh main apko tab hi bataunga jab main apko dekh loon
Voice:well uske liye u have to wait till then bye
Sujal:arre lekin...(but the fone is disconnected)
Zaib:kya hua Sujal kon tha
Sujal:koi nahi bas ek frnd
Kripa:so Sujal tumhara aj ka kya plan hai
Sujal:kuch khaas nahi ghar pe hi hoon main
Zaib:kyun itna rukha bday Kashish ko kahi le jaana
Sujal(blushes but controls):Zaibbbbb tu na.....
Kripa:rehne do sujal ne wayz Kashish busy hain
Sujal:kyun use kahan jaana hai
Kripa:pata nahi kal se kahan jaati hai kahan aaati hai kuch nahi batati
Sujal(thinks):yeh Kashish ko kya hogaya hai pata nahi woh kahan hogi ab(to Zaib kripa) main tum logon ko abhi milta hoon ok bye

Sujal goes to Kumkum
Sujal:bhabhi ghar chalein
Kumkum:nahi Sujal woh shaam mein 6 baje se pehle nahi jaa sakte
Sujal:kyun?
Kumkum:pata nahi papa ne kaha hai ki aj ghar mein kuch renovation ka kaam horaha hai so 6 baje se pehel hum nahi jaa sakye
Sujal:uff(thinks) ab kya karoon kaise pata karoon ....lagta hai intezaar karna hoga
Kumkum:kya hua devar ji
Sujal:kuch nahi bhabhi
Kumkum:acha Sujal suno
Sujal:haan bhabhi bolo
Kumkum:mujhe meri devraani se kab mila rahe ho
Sujal:shhh bhabhi koi sun lega
Kumkum(lowers her voice):ok ab bolo kab mila rahe ho
Sujal(thinks):woh mujhe mile tab main apko milaonga na
Kumkum:Sujal kahan kho gaye
Sujal:kahin nahi bhabhi milaonga na bahut jald bas thoda aur intezaar kijiye

Sujal is sitting n thinking wat 2 do he looks at his watch itz 15 mns to 6...Hes really excited....He goes takes his car n goes home....he sees nothing changed in his house...everything is the same..He goes to his room....
He opens his room n sees everything is the same....he gets a call......
Voice:hello mr Sujal kya hua nothing changed
Sujal:lekin tumne toh kaha tha kuch surprise hai
Voice:yes surprise hi toh hai ki kuch nahi badla agar sab kuch badla hua hota toh surprise kaisa
Sujal smiles:achaa
Voice:haan bilkul acha chalo theek hai apko ek surprise de hi dete hai
Sujal:kya
Voice:ap apna cupboard kholiye
Sujal:ek min hold kijiye
He goes opens his cupboard....He sees hi cupboard filled with gifts..He gives a smile of surprise
Sujal:hello...(but the fone is cut)he tries to call again on that no..nut itz engaged....
He goes n removes all the gifts frm the cupboard.....He sees a letter there.....It says
So Mr. Sujal ap soch rahe honge itne gifts kyun....gifts toh bahut common hai bday pe phir ismein alag kya hai..well alag hai ......yeh woh gifts hai jo apko mujhse bachpan se milne chahaiye maine apke zindage ke 24 saal miss kiye hai isliye yeh 24 gifts un 24 saalon ke jo maine miss kardiye...ab isse apko clue mil gaya hoga ki main kon hoon lekin dont be sure coz u neva knw kab apki umeed toot jayegi take care.....
Sujal is more confused now:yeh hai kon yaar pata nahi kab milegi mujhse.....newayz yeh gifts toh dekh loon...(he opens all the gifts n sees ......they all depend on his age like 1st bday pe he got a tedyy etc...)For his this yrs bday ie 24 th bday he got what he wanted frm long back but as a gift ...it was a watch...he had lots of watches but this was his best becoz he had desired 4 this frm a long time ........
Sujal:yeh meri pasand kaise jaanti hai...Oh god meri confusion toh badti jaa rahi hai...He gets a call......
Sujal:hello
Voice:sujal dont be confused yaar bas kuch hi samay mein tumne pata chal jayega ki main kon hoon...
Sujal:tumne mujhe yeh 24 gifts kyun bheje
Voice:well main chahti thi ki apko pata chale ki koi hai jo apke saath 24 saal miss karne ka afsoos mana rahi hai bas ab kuch hi der ka intezaar see u at 8 bye ...
Sujal:8??? kya yeh sach much mujhe milegi ??? well i have no choice other than waiting....
He goes n gets changed.....itz 7:30...he gets a call..hes so sure itll be dat gurl...
Sujal:hello batao ab tum kya surprise dogi
Kashish:surprise Sujal kya hoagay hai tumhe
Sujal:kon bol raha hai
Kashish:main kashish hoon Sujal
Sujal:Kashish tum....kahan thi tum aj saara din subah ke baad mili nahi mahen uncle ke ghar par bhi tum nahi aayi
Kashish:oh im so sorry Sujal main thodi busy thi...
Sujal:haan haan mera bday tumhare liye imp kyun hoga after all we r just frnds na
Kashish:toh kya frnd ke liye bday imp nahi hota ofcourse it is imp isliye toh call kiya listen maine decide kiya hai hum sab dinner pe jayenge
Sujal:hum sab?
Kashish:haan tum main zain kripa anjali tia ranveer
Sujal(gets sad):sab log
Kashish:kyun u have ne problem
Sujal:nahi nahi itz fine kab nikalna hai
Kashish:aadhe ghante mein 8 ko tum mujhe pick karne aajana na ok
Sujal(thinks):8 abje toh woh surprise wali.....khair woh Kashish se zyada imp nahi hai
Kashish:Sujal kya hua
Sujal:kuch nahi il be there at 8
Kashish:ok then bye
Kashish disconnects the call and.....
Kashish:im sorry Sujal main aise behvae kar rahi hoon main jaanti hoon akele jana chahate the well thoda intezaar karo.....sab theek hoga(n she blushes)

Sujal gets ready picks up Kashish n reaches the restaurant where Zaib-Kripa Tia Ranveer and Anjali are already waiting 4 them.....
Kripa:aagaye tum dono itna alate hogaye
Sujal:kashish ne hi late ki itna time lagati hai tayaar hone mein
Kashish:Sujalll late maine ki ya tumne tum hi sab se mil rahe the aur baatein kar rahe the
Sujal:acha tum jo itni der andar tayaar ho rahi thi
Kashish:oh plz main tumhare aate hi bahar aagayi
Sujal:oh really
Kashish:yes
Zaib:okok ab tum dono ladna band karo chalo letz go n sit....
They go n sit on top floor of the restaurant....
Kashish:excuse me main ek min mein aati hoon(n she goes away)
Sujal(thinks):yeh kashish kahan chali gayi? kahin yeh hi woh surprise walli...dekhta hoon agar uska call aaya aur Kashish nahi aayi matlab ....
Kashish comes back n sits dwn...
Sujal(thinks):yeh Kashish toh aagayi aur kisi ko call nahi aya iska matlab shes not dat gurl...
Just then a waiter comes n gives Sujal a letter....It says
Sujal the wait is over....main apse bahut jald hi miloongi bas kuch hi palon ka intezaar il be there....
Sujal(thinks):OMG yeh yahan aayegi who can she be? uss pata nahi kyun im really excited...
Kashish:Sujal kahan kho gaye khush rahi yaar itz ure bday 2day(n she puts her hand on him)
Sujal is happy that kashish put her hands on him n so he smiles..
Kripa:chalo na ppl lets dance kitna acha music hai
Zaib:haan haan chalo letz go
Every1 goes on to the floor except Sujal-Kashish.....
Kashish:tum kyun nahi jaate
Sujal:kyunki tum nahi gayi
Kashish blushes n looks dwn
Sujal (picks her face up):kya hua Kashish tumhe acha nahi laga ki main tumhare liye ruk gaya
Kashish(has her eyes dwn):nahi
Sujal:toh phir tum mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi
Kashish dosent spk nething....
Sujal:ok agar tumhe mujhse baat karna acha nahi lagta toh main chala jaata hoon(n he gets up)
Kashish holds his hand....Sujal is surprised..He looks at her...
She looks up...
Kashish:mujhe koi problem nahi hai betho
Sujal:ohh matlab u r adjusting with me na
Kashish:nahi i want u to sit here
Sujal:hmmm phir theek hai(n he smiles n sits dwn)
Kashish gets a call so she gets up n goes excusing herself......
Sujal gets a call too
Voice:so Sujal ap mujhse milna chahenge
Sujal:well pata nahi
Voice:pata nahi maine socha ap bahut excited honge mujhse milne ke liye
Sujal:hmm
Voice:acha theek hai koi baat nahi ap mujhse nahi milna chahte hai toh na sahi main rakhti hoon
Sujal:arre arre ek min maine na kab kaha main tumse zaroor miloonga
Voice:ok toh ap upar terrace par jaye mr khadus
Sujal:ok(n he hangs up the phone n then suddenly he realises that she said khadus he gets a big smile on his face n he runs up)
On the terrace there is a nice arangement made...He goes there but sees noone....He calls on the no......no answer....he turns to go when sum1 calls for him
Voice:Sujal....
Sujal turns to see a girl standing there with a bouquet that covers her face.......He goes closer to the girl...
Sujal:toh finally tum aa hi gaye kab tak chupogi mujhse aakhir tumhe aana hi tha (he reaches close to her but her face is still covered with the bouquet)isse pehle ki main tumhe dekhon main tumse kuch kehna chahata hoon shsyad thx ek bahut chota shabd jo tumne kiya mere liye itne surprises mujhe isse pehle kabhi nahi mile aur shayad ab tum meri zindagi mein aa hi gayi ho ab toh milte rahenge lekin yeh saal mera sab se yadgaar saal rahega sirf aur sirf tumhari wajah se thank you so much Kashish(n he removes the bouquet)
Kashish cant face so she decides to cover her face n hides in him...she hugs him....

well ppl here ends this part...Hope u ppl liked it....Plz comment

tc,
kimmy

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