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ginny_trish

@ginny_trish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: kark12
thank u so much for reading... keep reading g.. I promise u I won't disappoint u...

bilkul pura trust hai tumpe. i know u will write an awesome update again next time too 😃😃

I m falling in love wd Rajveer all over again!

Keep them coming!!!

Love n Luck

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kark12

@kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

guys I am sorry for delay in update.. got stuck with my friends birthday celebration.. I will update evening pakka

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Sakhi

@sakha_sakhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

No Problem dear... Take your own time 😊

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yoginisahakari

@yoginisahakari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Hi dear

Read the whole fix again .its amazing well written.I didn't receive any message about the updates. I think u forgot.

Pl pm me when u update me t.

Love and prayer
Yogini

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kark12

@kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari
Hi dear

Read the whole fix again .its amazing well written.I didn't receive any message about the updates. I think u forgot.

Pl pm me when u update me t.

Love and prayer
Yogini

I not forgot actually mm whoever liked the five na I sent pm to them..any way thank u so much for reading .keep reading.. I will be updating soon n I will send pm to u

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kark12

@kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

hi

thank u so much for lovely comments n... guys sorry for late update.. I was busy so nt updated .. plz read next part n give feedbacks

part 13:

they both were lost in their world.

onein dance and other in another's eye..

suddenly the door got opened n their stood abhi and nandini with shocking expeession on their face..

as soon as raj sees them there he left naina hand..

abhi and nandini came forward with same expression on face..

raj waa feeling uncomfortable by the look this..

naina:sir vo...

abhi:ha bathayiye cadet singh..aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ...

nandini:aur raj thum...thumtho muje dance seekhane aanewale the na.
raj get little angry by this..

raj:stop it guys.. ..
naina:sir actually mai yaha kuch doubt poochne ayi thi tho .. aise hi mai dance ke baareme poocha tho sie ye seekharahe the rajveer sir ne..

nandini:kya baath hai raj.. aajkal thum ladkiyonke saath kuch jyada hi comfortable hogaye ho pehele tho kithna sharmathe the... (in teasing way)

gunny entered the room

gunny:kya huva guys aap sab log aisekyukhade ho
raj:vo gunny...
gunny looks at naina whose head facing down..

abhi:hum bathathe hai aapko gunny..ye hai na hamare dost raj... ye aur cadet singh...

gunny: vo aur cadet singh kya???

nandini:kithne romanticly dance kar rahe the patha hai..????
by hearing this raj blushed whuch was noticed by gunny n naina felt bad that they r taking it wrong way..

nandini:u know what gunny raj aajkalkuch jyada hi romantic ho raha he..pehele tho aise nahi tha.. ab dekho vo dr.mishra ko dekhkar sharmatha hai auryaha dance...

raj gotangry by the name dr.mishra..
raj:nandini plz...

nandini:mainekya kiya ..kuch galath kaha kya.??

raj:nahi thum kaise galathho sakthe ho.. thumthomiss perfect hona..

abhi:raj aap unhe kyu dhanth rahe hai... sach tho kehe rahi hai vo..
raj:chauhan saab thumthochup hi raho.. they started tl argu.. two personsr feeling angry n naimawas sad that they fighting like that for her...

gunny shouts :stopit..
everyone shocked n sees gunny who was burning in anger.. n naina for a sec taken aback by seeing gunny in angry..

gunny; abhi and nandini thu dononko kuch kehena hai...

abhi:kya..
gunny:listen both of u thrre is something which u need to know n u need to keep it as secrete ..

abhi:aise kya bath hai gunny

raj:its about naina...
nandini:kya?

raj:ha vo ... naina na... (he was abt to say naveen ki behenhai but stopped by naina)

naina:sir vo... (she was feared what if they know abt hee)

gunny:naina.. dont fear they r also our friends. ..

abhi:aap log hame bathange kI yah kya horaha hai.. hame kuch patha nahi chal raha hai..

raj:mai bathatha hoo... have urseat..all satn raj closed the door..

raj:abhi nandini.. bath ye hai ki cadet singh naveen ki behen hai..mm

both of them r shocked to the hel

na nabhi:kyaa?????

gunny:relax guys... aise expression math do... we need to keep this as secrete till the time come...
abhi was emotional by rembering naveen.. then he looks at naina..
he get up n went near naina

abhi:hum aapko batha nahi sakthe ki hum kithne kush hai ye jaankar ki aap hamare dost ki behen ho. apkopatha hai humbhi apke bhai hai.. jab bhi naveen ghar se kuch latha tho hum unse jagda karthe the ki vo apko humse nahi milwaya..

he puts hand on her head and give a brothery hug..

nandini:kya bath hai.. . naina naveen ki behen hai.. hame bhi tho mauka milna chayiye ki hum bhi uw eghale lagale..

naina:ji mam...

abhi:use aap mqm kahi ..par naina aap hame bhayya ya abhi kehena padega..

naina looks happyly.. they all share a group ..

naina:I think I need to go... warna pooja dhoondthe dhoondhte yaha aajayegi..

gunny:ya.. thum javo... and take care naina..

naina:jee bhayya..

she was about to go out but stopped as raj called her

raj:cadet singh..
naina:sir ...

raj:ye apka ...he handed her the parcel.. n naina smiles n go from there. .

nandini n abhi Gives whats going on kind of look to him..

raj:kya (????
nandini:kya tha vo...
raj:comeon nandini.. ab shuru math ho jana.. vo naveen ka gift tha nauna ke liye..

nandini:naveen ka tha ya naveen ka naampe thum ye diya...

raj:u know what .. ur impossible. . gunny I need to discuss sometjing with u .

abhi:tjo aap indirectly hame yaha se bhahar jaanekeliye kehe rahe ho??

raj:kuch aise hi..

precap:fresher ball..