||THE LAST WALK|| AR/RM FF(Part 9 - Pg 8 -31|1|16) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Its awesome yaar
i loved it so so so much
amazing concept and story
very well written
Awesome job
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Hwy sanju baby..
Amazing parts...

Part 1&2 were really cute...
Bt 3 rd toh ful to emotional krdia...

Hope sabhi jldi mil jaye...

Ye ka itne chotu chotu updates vo bhi itne late late...

Update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5: The Lost Bet Punishment

"Hey sweetheart.." RSS hugged her

"So...I have a good news" the girl jumped

"What..??" RSS asked

"She lost the best" she said...

"Who?" RSS asked

"Well ur best friend" the girl said

"What..what did u did with her..what bet" another girl comes from back wearing a red spaghetti top and yellow color mini pencil skirt with open hair and minimal makeup and shouted on the girl

"Calm down girl" RSS said to the girl "what did u said to my best friend..if she got hurt I must tell u that m not gonna leave u.." he said to girl 1

"Chill RSS and RG gension not nothing happened to her." The firl 1 said

"Shut up Sanaya...If it hurted her, i will ruin ur looks ok??!!" RG said

"U shut up..Miss Ridhima Gupta, u got such a nerve girl to say something like that to me..u donow who I am" Sanaya said

"Why r u amnesiac that u forgot who r u" RG said and put her hand on her waist "and Miss whatsoever if m living in my apartment that doesn't mean I can't stand at ur place..m even higher than urs..huhh" RG said frowning

"Ohh really I really didn't knew that Miss Gupta had an identity other than a part of the RSS gang and Best Friend of Sanyukta" Sanaya spoke flicking her hairs.

"U...urghh" and she ran to sanyu with tears almost spilling and with thoughts If jumbo would had been here..he would had not let anyine say that...from past 2 years m living here alone. Alone in Cali away from connecticut...so what if I don't want anyone to know about who my parents r...urghh leave I should go to Sanyu.

She just reached their when foud RSS with sanyu..She smiled lookin at them and then thought to leave them as it was time for her to leave to go to the place.

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"Hey m rahul...whats ur name??!" Rahul asked a air hostess
The air hostess blinked her eyes and then flicked her hairs.
"Stacy" the air hostess replied.

"Men...urgghh" a girl sitting in the same flight with curly ahirs thought and groaned and put her head phones.

The flight was about to take off from the hault it took at Paris. And from Parish she could just see ine Indian and that the biggest flirt who is supposed to be some Rahul.

"Urghh Grow up Muski...its just a stupid person..don't think of him" yes the girl is Muskaan.

"Excuse me madame" she heard someone spoke so she looked and now great..It rahul hear.

"What?" She snapped at him

"Woah Woah..Calm girl...Every girl gets charmed by me bt u didn't and so I like u. A very different person. Hmm..Intestesting" Rahul said winking at her

"Leave.." she said

"What?" He asked

"R u deaf..I said leave" she snapped at him again

"But..." he was about to say more but she cutted him..."i said leave and take ur seat" she shouted

He thought it was better to leave but was confused of her behavior. He was just flirting..maybe she didn't liked it..afterall she is Indian but she seems to have a very diff accent. Somewhere American..Somewhere Indian and another one which he was not able to recall.

"Hmm...gonna be a long journey..hope we become friends or even a mere acquaintance would go well."he thought as he sat on his seat...

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"Hey kids" a girl shouted as she entered a apartment with 5 kids.

'RG..." all the 5 kids shouted

"Hey Ridz..." a girl comes wearing a floral print dress of white and turquoise mix.

"Sanyuu..." ridz said and then hugged her tight

"Hey...soo ready for today" sanyu asked her making her come out of the hug

"Yehh...BTW what that Sanaya was saying about the bet..??!!" Ridz asked her

"Well...It was a bet that when RSS will come he will hug who first...well there was no ans from me, she assumed it that I said yes and as I hadn't anwered her so I can't do anything and when I denied she just blased and insulted me and then as I hadn't even said no so I had to get her by saying yes to the bet and just a lil humilation more added to the insult before when RSS hugged her first...so i was upset just about that" sanyu told with a half hearted smile

" that..idiot..and what was the punishment to the bet...??" Ridz asked

"Umm...U will come to know soon..." sanyu spoke and suddenly a bell rang

"I'll go" ridz said and went to open the door and as she opened the door her mouth was open up wide..."u..u guys here" she spoke stammering

"Ridz I was about to tell u.." sanyu came from back spoke

"When..??" ridz asked

"Well this was the punishment that they wanted to see where I go everyday in eve nor they will assume that m in a relationship without RSS consent" she spoke

"And BTW RG i got to remem that u said to me that If I found something u r hiding u will do anything for its makeup" Sanaya said as all had entered the house

"Urgghh..not again..u know what Sanaya...u just speak shit..coz u don't have any identity , u make effing shitty plans and execute them...I can't believe that u r even playing with anyone and everyone's feelings" ridz snapped at her with anger.

"Ohh..plss..okk..now I got it..In the name sake of Noble things u just run this orphan of 5 children and earn money and so live in ur apartments coz if u hadn't done that how would u be living peacefully..." sanaya played her move

"Urghhh...I donow wanna make one's b'day sad and without a party so mind if u cut ur crap..and if not get lost from the house" ridz said and showed daggers at her..

It was b'day of a lil boy at the orphanage.

"Okk...commom children come...we gonna have funnn...common comee..." ridz said to all..and when all came they celebrated the child's b'day.

Ridz made him cut the cake. The boy was wearing a red tee.

After tugging all in bed ridz kissed their forehead along with sanyu and came in the living room

"Soo...what do u say about it RG" Sanaya asked

"What it is...??" She asked her

"U'll get to know in the morn..." she said and waved them byee.

Ridhima came out of the apartment bidding adieu to Sanyu to her apartment which is the last on the same 5 storey building.

To be cont...

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( A/N ) Heyo Guys..!! Hope u guys liked the update..IK its hell confusing and I ended up crapping the part but do read and give cmnts as well.

Criticism is highly appreciated.!

P.S: In the picture the new face is SANAYA IRANI As Sanaya
P.S 2: Ridz is RG which is Ridhima Gupta (For those who didn't got that.)
P.S 3: Hell no guys Sanaya is not a negitive character and to tell u the truth their wouldn't be one.
P.S 4: RSS is the new guy in the Picture.
P.S 5: Ridhima Armaan Rahul Muskaan..Neither of them know each other's real name.

Chapter dedication to @LovelyMuskaan
#TeamStuart or #TeamJumbo ??
Keep Reading #TLW

With loads of love and twists and huggs
Sanju ^_^

TWITTER: @kashjenian
IG: @kashjenian
FACEBOOK: #SamiWinget

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glad u did.
Kal ek aur part done.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Glad u did.
Kal ek aur part done.

ok armaan!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super - Duper Awesome
Amazing Update
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
All the three parts were so Nice.😊
It was so Interestingly explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice chapter dear
like it really
very well written
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnakyu guys for the valuable and lovely comments.
They are very much encouraging and keep me refine for the next.
I can't reply to all but will do very soon.

Happy New year

And yeah believe me there is no problem in sending PMs so stop saying thankyou, it makes me feel that I had done such a great thing which it is definitely not.

Have a successful, happy, healty and lively 2016.
May the New Year brings all the success and prosperity in life.
Happy New Year.

Love
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"Finalyyy..." Muskaan breathed as she reached California after 2 hr drive from LAs Airport. It was midnight when she reached a hotel.

"Yeh Finally..." Rahul too said coming from the back

"Not again...oye listen why r u behind me..why can't u leave me..u came here also urrghh.." muskaan said to him like begging

"Well baby...i just said be my frnd...plsshhh" rahul said winking at her

She was about to say something when a person drunken tripped over her. She shrieked. And it was Rahul came and pushed her behind him.

"Hey..just leave.." rahul said siding the drunken man

"Why...whoo..rr...uuu" the drunken man asked

"Security do take him out of the Hotel premises." Rahul said firmly and then they took him out

"Hey r u okk??!" Rahul asked Muskaan

"Umm...yeh..thanks for helping but BTW i didn't need any help..." muskaan said but after that showed attitude

"Hahahe..yeh I saw that how u shrieked." He laughed at her rolling his eyes

"Whateva" she flicked her hair back and then went to the room booked

"I'll anyhow will become ur friend." Rahul said ruffling his hair goin towards his room



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"What do u want" Ridz asked Sanaya

"Well nothing my dearrr...just today while jogging u need to open up ur hair in BB court and if anyboy comes to u then I'll stop my ways with u and Sayunkta nor U need to stop talkin to RSS." Sanaya speaks up with a witty look

"Well I should had understand by ur look about ur s**ty idea. Ok done...!!" Ridz spoke.

As she was jogging Ridz was thinking

Hmm...It is said that by doin jogging for 1 hr it burns up ur calories, fats, it takes away anxiety, anger, stress. But today how much I do joggin I won't be able not to get nervous. I had took the bet bt lets see how to execute it. Urgghh..god help me.

Its when BB court comes. She goes and sit on the stairs and then ties up her shoe and then opens up her hair when suddenly a ball comes and she turns.

Air started flowing and she bored her eyes into those magnificent blue eyes. Which were unreadable yet charming and captivating. She comes out of her lala land when she heard him "Yo basket ball...can I have the ball please??"

She stood up...!!!


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"Hmm...Not at all bad for the next three years..Hello California Armaan Mallik is here.." Armaan moved out from the airport and stops a taxi and get into it to go to a hotel.

As they reached Hotel, he paid the taxi and after making a booking, he went to the room. After freshing up he laid on the bed and thought to go for a jog as he need to go to find a accommodation for him as college accommodation will not be suitable for him as he need to do some office work as well.

While he was jogging he came accross 4 to 5 boys who were playing basket ball and asked them to join. It was when they were playing a girl came and after tying her shoes opened her hairs. He was mesmerized by her and so the basket ball missed the shot and went towards her and the ball hitted her.

As she looked back he was mesmerized by her, her captivative eyes, her cheeks were red and nose well due to the morning breeze and her hair flying in the air.

He came out of the trance when heard a boy saying "go and ask her for the ball" and which he did and coz he didn't knew her name he called her "Yo basket ball...can I have the ball please??"

And next second he heard her smirk, he was confused why but shrugged the thought.


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As she heard him she smirked lookin in the direction his back was facing.

She straightened her looks and said while dribbling the ball coming towards him "this basket ball is urs??"

He snached up the ball and started looking at her and spoke "yess..no one can play better than me" and did a score

She snached the ball and started dribbling around him and spoke while pointing a finger towards him "U think u r really smart??!!"

He pocked her nose and she was in 'O' and said "no sweetheart I don't think I am coz IK I am."

Before he could snach the ball she did a score and showed him attitude with eyebrow up.

"I guess u r new here" she said

"Well I could say the same about u" he spoke while smirking

"Umm..flirting..not bad bt u can't say the same coz m here from past 2 years" she spoke and dribbled the ball taking it from him

"Umm..nice...but flirt that too with u..umm...not my cup of tea coz u r not flirt type" he spoke taking the ball and doin a basket

Her nose flared up due to the insult and she spoke with agony "so who even want to get flirted by u... have u seen ur face..u look like a monster.!" She spoke and did a basket as well

"Ooohh...someone burned up due to the insult, i can smell it" he spoke teasing her

"I did not" she spoke leaving the ball with her hand on her waist

"When did I said u burned..u just assumed" he spoke with a smirk and then moving forward like biting someone which makes her stumble

"U..urghhh...Whateva" she spoke as he came forward like gonna bite her and as she stumble back , was about to fall when he hold her from her waist but ended up falling over her.

They rolled up from 2 to 3 times but eventually got balanced.
They both shared an eyelock for mare seconds but then both stood up.
Not able to handle the awkward situation she was about to go from the court when he shouted "miss basket...atleast tell me ur name"
And she shouted "In ur dreams mister" and looked back showing him a thumbs uo and then doin it down.

Armaan stood dreamily lookin towards her retiring figure and ruffled his hair and ran to the hotel.


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"OMG how did u do that.??" RSS spoke with astonishment when Sanaya looked at her with a attitude

"Just my charm u know..." she spoke flicking her hairs back and then continued "just let it go guys..it was a bet and I completed it though I enjoyed playing basketball with a tough competitor after loong time"

"Hmm..okk lets goo..we need to go to the Charlotte's Cafe to help her today. Coz they r Indian and so she told us to come" Sanyu spoke

"Okk..lets goo.." Ridz spoke


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"RG...thankgod u r here. Pls look at these two people both r creating ruckus. They r fighting from the time they entered in the hotel" Charlotte spoke

"Hmm..I'll see to it." Ridz went towards them

"He guys m Ridhima, Ridz for those who r my close frnz and RG for those who can't spell my name." Ridhima said forwarding her hand to shake

Before Rahul to take her hand for the shake, Muskaan took and then again both started bickering with each other ove why she took Ridz had to shake first.

"Stopp it..introduce guys plss" she shouted and then looked at Rahul to say first

"Hey m Rahul and those who can't spell call me RG as well." He spoke and then shook his hands with ridz

"Hey M muskaan and loved ones call me Muski and those who can't spell call me Mu or MC." She spoke enthusiastically

"Thats grt..I'll call u muski" ridz said and then hugged her sideways but then suddenly all became silent and tehy looked at the person who just got a slap and then suddenly laughed.

"Serves him right" muski spoke and then both ridz and muski laugjed along

Actually happened that Rahul flirted with a lady looked like in her Early 30s but was in mid 40s with 2 children and so she slapped him.

Rahul was shocked but regained his senses but Ridhima and Muskaan kept laughing.

It was a sight to watch for the god seeing a 4 frz again crossing each other's paths. It was a sight to watch the two best friends laughing together holding each other's arms lookin at their another bestfriend though unaware about it.

To be cont...

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Good Noon Guys...!! Hope u liked it.
I really enjoyed writing it, do tell what u guys fell reading it.
I won't dissapoint u guys and will keep giving updates.

1439 Words..!!

This Chapter is dedicated to : kajenlife @HumairaGrover and @JayshreeSinghvi

amnamallik1 Sugerpie Its alwz for u...!! Hope u like it..!!

#TeamStuart and #TeamJumbo
#TLW

With Love, basketball matches and huggs
Sanju ^_^

TWITTER: @kashjenian
IG: @kashejenain
FACEBOOK: #SamiWinget


HAPPY NEW YEAR..!!

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