||THE LAST WALK|| AR/RM FF(Part 9 - Pg 8 -31|1|16)

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Hey Guys...!!!
M Sanju here with another ff of mine...!!
2FFs are already goin on but this one is for my Suugerpie i.e Amna di.
Yess the amazing writer.
Hope u all like it...!!


"When two bestfriends Armaan and Ridhima became apart it was their doom, but when they'll meet again will they be the same like always, together...or not...?? What will it be called??!!!
The Doom or The Luck...!!???
It is a story of LOVE FRIENDSHIP PASSION ROMANCE EMOTIONS.
To Know further do come with me on the Journey of 'THE LAST WALK'..!!"


KASH


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PART 1: START OF A NEW FRIENDSHIP - PAGE 1

PART 2: THE COMING YEARS..GROWING UP..!! - PAGE 1

PART 3: SEPERATING WAYS..IS IT THE END..?? - PAGE 2

PART 4: THE NEW CHAPTER...A NEW BEGINNING - PAGE 2

PART 5: THE LOST BET PUNISHMENT..!! - PAGE 2

PART 6: IT'S JUST THE BEGINNING..!! - PAGE 4

PART 7: Friendship..Feelings..Fights..Blaming..Hurt..Realization - PAGE 5

PART 8: REWINDING PAST - PAGE 7

PART 9: THE BALL - 1 - PAGE 8



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Part 1: Start Of A New Friendship

"Mommyyy" a lil girl around 3 years cried when a ball hit her.

"Hey u lil gil..why al u clyin..its just a ball"(Hey u little girl..why are u crying...its just a ball) spoke a boy of around her age with his cute baby voice.

"U hit me..I hate u..stupid Jumbo" the girl said while hitting him with a fist with dry tears and a cute angry voice

"Haawww...u called me Jumbo..u..U al (are) a shtuar (stuart)..look at u..such a sholt (short) height wearing a shtuar lil tee" he said laughingly

"Hummpp...papa shays (says) light (right)..all boys are shame (same)...they make u cly (cry)" she said whinning and stomping her feet..

"Okk..okk...M a gentleman...not a bad boy..so sholly (sorry) to make u cly (cry) bt that was by mishtake (mistake)" he spoke with a pride during the gentleman part and then made a cute pout while holding his years...

"Its ok..Jumbo" the girl spoke clearing her tears..."u r not a bad boy..u al (are) a gud gentlemen" she spoke taking his hand from his ears as he was still standing in a position to say sorry. ..

"Thankeeww to accept my apology shtuar (stuart)...lets be frnz.." he said clearing her dry tears and then forwarding his hand for friendship..

"Best Frnzz.." she said holding his hand and then shaking them.."By the way...ur name??" She asked

"Let it be...For me u al (are) Shtuar (Stuart) and..." he was about to cont when she cutted him..."and for me u al (are) Jumbo" and then both hugged each other.

And then both went to play together saying "Besht (Best) Frnz We al (are) Foleva (Foreva) Will Be"...!!

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Hola Amigos...!! Hii M Sanju With A FF on My favorite couple AR.
Its gonna be my first FF which will be fully written in English.
Hope u guys like it...!!

I dedicate this FF to AmnaSaleem0 as her b'day gift...!! Sugerpie This ones for u...!!

From next part..part length will be bigger and maybe u guys will get more than 1 part..!!

Cmnt, Like...!! ^_^

And which team r u??

#TeamStuart or #TeamJumbo
Who seams more cuute...!!

TWITTER: @kashjenian
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Edited by --MinOch-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful start
excited for more
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
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PART 2:The Coming Years..Growing Up..!!!


"Mommyyy" a girl of around 6 years shouted from the kitchen cabinet.

"Kyaa hua angle...whts up..why r u shouting..." mother of the girl asked her...

"Mommy this..this jumbo he pulled my piggy tails" the girl said while crying and irritated look

"Amuu...This is not fair naa..why r u alwz behind our lil doll" a lady came and scolded the boy

"Oh God...Nan u know naa how much they fight..and common angel its just a lil thing.,why makin it a biig issue..." the girl's mother said defending boy's deeds...!!

"Coz this stuart has nothing to do so just pick up a fight with me..its okk..I m goin to Rahul's..would like to join and if not I'll ask Muski to call u up and come here to stay with..." he said making ridhima more irrirare bt she cutted her...

"Shut up...ahhh...where is buddy..I'll complain him..." she said getting too angry

"Oyee u r being a lil child..crying complaing whinning" amu said nudging her shoulders

"And m a child..not a oldie like u...i have 94 years to live" she said stomping her feet on his's.

"Wht happen sweetheart...Is this son of mine irritating u??" Another voice which was of amu's father

"Yess yess tess buddy" she said jumping and went to his father and hugged him tightly.

"Hey princess..wass up" another voice comes

"Daddyyy" she ran to him and kissed his cheeks who was sitting on his knees.

Yes they all were with eachother together having dinner. These both girl and boy r the same Jumbo and Stuart and its been 3 years since they became frnz. Not even they bt their parents as well. Both call each other Jumbo and Stuart only, both of them don't know each other's real name as even both parents call each other with nick names and both r in different schools. The girl i.e Ridhima's parents call her Angel and Princess and Armaan's parents call her Doll and Sweetheart and Armaan was called by Amu, buddy. It was one evening when they all decided to have a dinner together at Ridhima's place but our Armaan is really naughty and so didn't leave a chance to irritate his best friend stuart and as usuall Ridhima was irritated by her best friend jumbo.

"Daddy u know this Jumbo he...he made me cry" she said with lil tears again forming in her eyes.

"Hey princess...common u r a big girl...he loves to do that and u alwz gall in his trap" her father said ruffling her hair.

"U all alwz do that..no one loves me...sob sob..." she said shouting a lil and went in her room and closed it.

'Oops...I guess now need to make up with her" Armaan said...and then went running to her room and opened it

"My bestfrnd...Stuart..sorry baby..." he went towards her and cleared her tears..

"NO...M not talkin to u..u r sooo bad" she said being stubborn and shruging his hands...

"Stuart sorry"...and hugged her

"Okay now...!! Its okk.." and then hugged him tight...

And then he shouted with joy twirling her in his arms.. "yehh...stuart have forgaviven me...yiipppeee...wohooo"

"Hehehheehahah...wohooo"

Scene fades with both parents smiling towards them while them eating the dinner with each other.

To be cont...

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Wassup...!! U guys here??!! Well u guys here then I was indeed needed to be here. So hope u like this part. Thnx for the viewing my story.

@nilusoni @sweet_tehs Thanks for reading the story and cmntin.
This chapter dedicated to u guys..!!

@amnmallik1 Well this FF will be a dedictation to u foreva and eva...!!
Love u suugerpie..!!

Cmnt..Likes..Tweet..Fan...!!

#TeamJumbo #TeamStuart
#TLW
Do share ur regards reading the story...!! ^_^

With Huggs Kisses and Smiles
Sanju ^_^

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Originally posted by: nilusoni

wonderful start

excited for more
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next


Thnx nilu...glad u liked it..
Will cont to pm...^_^
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heyya itni jagah comment kaise dun *pout*
you decide kahan comments dun yahan ya vahan ???
as I said awesome start
interesting story
ar is so cute
loved their first meeting
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Part 3 : Seperating Ways...Is it the end..??

It was one such morning when Jumbo and Stuart were playing on the beach making a sand castle.

"U know what Jumbo..One day I may'll be living in a castle like that." She said keepin her hand on his shoulder.

Then he made her stand and asked her to climb his back and then he was giving her a piggy back ride. While giving ride he spoke "bt u live with ur parents..how would u'll be living in a castle like that??"

"Oh gawwd..stupid my prince charming will come na.." she spoke while hitting him slightly on his head

"I won't let him take u...I'll be with u alwz and thats a promise" he said frowning with authority.

"Then u'll have to become my prince charming..Is that okk??" She asked pinching his cheeks from back

"We'll think of it...bt u r mine stuart..no one else..got that" he spoke making her stand on her own and spoke as they started playing with water

"Only..only urss Stuart...Jumbo's Stuart" she said splashing some water on him and then he ran behind her.

And then we see their parents smiling lookin at them. It was a very common scene from past 2 years. Both r 8 years old.

"I wonder how we will separate them" Armaan's mom spoke..

"Same here...they r inseparable..Rahul Muskaan Armaan Ridhima...wonder how they will get separate" Ridhima's mom spoke

"Its like a sin we gonna do" A's dad spoke

"But we have to tell them today" R's dad spoke

"Children common...lets go...collect ur things" A'smom spoke

"Comingg..." both shouted...

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Same day, Evening

"No..no no...How could u guys possibly do that...m not gonna leave Stuart" Armaan spoke

"Yehh..right..Even u r making Rahul Muskaan go..." Ridhima cried

"Dear we need to do that..Even we had merged our firms we need to handle the important branches and we can't do that possibly staying here only" muskaan's mom gave explanation

"But why we have to leave...Why can't we all''ll be here together...u guys go..bt mom dad m gonna be here" Rahul cried

"Yeh..and even only Ri (Ridhima's name by muskaan and rahul) gonna be here..all children know her..they'll gonna tease her then who'll save her..." muski spoke and sobbed a lil

"We r really sorry bt its needed to be done...say a happy good bye nor u'll regret later on..." A's mom spoke

"Enough..m not gonna leave Stuart here...either she'll be goin with me or I'll be staying here...its ur choice.."Armaam spoke with tears coming from his eyes

"Hey now...its enough...don't be so stubborn..its not only hard for u bt even for us bt for a better future we need to do this and thats final..." M's mom spoke seeing all stubborn behavior of their children.

"M...Mom..plsshh..stop them..how m gonna live here without them with all just their memories" for the 2nd time in whole conversation ridhima spoke and then she broke down

Armaan couldn't see her crying and shouted "see...look..u made Stuart cry...I hate u all..." and then went ot ridhima to console her. Even Rahul and Muskaan went and they all four cried but cleared each other's tears. All four had a group hug.

"No we should leave..time for the flight" Rahul's dad spoke

And they seperated them...

"No mom..plss"
"We won't go.."
"Ri will be alone now"
"Who'll give her a piggy back ride"
"Who'll make here piggy tales"
"Do girly talks"
"Who will fight with me like M"
"Who we will tease him for a shy behavior like girls"
"Mom how would i'll live without them"
"Rii"
"M.."
"A.."
"Rahoo..."
"Jumbooo"
"Stuart"

"Mom..Dad.." they all shouted togeyehr while crying

The scene fades with all crying faces and lookin for sign that this was a dream..but it was not...!!

To be cont...

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Je Te Amo...!! Hey hola...!! Hwz u all...!!
There is nothing to say much but thsi part it the last part of AR'S CHILDHOOD.
Hope u guys like it...!!
I myself didn't like it to seperate them but well then I do what I don't like m$..!!
Hope I was able to make emotional connection with u guys with the story.

With Loads of Strawberries (love them), salty water (tears..), huggs and beach walks...!!
Sanju ^_^

Team?? #TeamJumbo or #TeamStuart
Keep Reading #TLW

Likes, Cmnts, Criticism...!!

Twitter: @kashjenian
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Part 4 : The New Chapter...A New Beginning.,!

"Good Mornin Papa..Morning Mom" A girl in her late 20s wearing a golden sleeveless top and levis denim jeans havung curly hair with minimal make up came and hugged her father and mother.

"Good Morning baby" her mother looked back at her and kissed her on forhead.
"Morning Mus.." her father came and hugged her.

They all get settled down on the dining table.

"So ready??!..all set to go to a new place...away from us" her dad asked her while having thr breakfast

"Yeh..dad..its not that for the first time m leaving a place I love to stay." She said

"Common baby...its past..grow up..and its a new place..I wonder how u would be able to live in Cali without any adult assistance

"Mom..I'll be able to..tension not...It'll be fun..and don't be a cranky Mum...cheer up..ur daugher had grown up and I promise to have a Video Chat long session every day either at dawn or at twilight..Hope thats okk with u?!!" Muskaan spoke finishing her food and settling he luggage in car.

"Not okk..suuper okk" her dad spoke..."common lets go..ur flight gonna be departure after 4 hrs..we need to reach airport" he dad spoke opening the car door.

"Okk..byeee baby..I'll miss u" her mom spoke

"Byee my sassy mommy...^_*...love u muuwaah...I'll miss u too" she hugged her mom and kissed her cheeks and then they left to airport...

Hmm...I'll miss being here but guess life is all about movin..12 years before I left Connecticut...now M leaving Sydney...Hoping for a beginning of a new chapter of my life. Lets make it big..no tears..no grudges with Mom and Dad..Its just me..this house..my family..and the memories...Its A new beginning...a new life. Good byee home..Good byee sydney will miss u.

Thats what Muskaan thought as the flight took off..!!

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"Hey mom...Hey dad...wass up..Bet u guys gonna miss me..bt its life so common cheer up..mom be happy..ur sun is leaving..he had already taken many responsibilities but now he gonna take his own." A blue eyed, handsome, cute with dimpled smile boy in his late 20s came and sat beside his mom and dad as they all drank their morning cup of tea and coffee for him.

"Amu beta common work, study, college, ur adventure sports, beaches that is all left in ur life..??!! From past years u had not even went for a vaccation with us..ur family" A's mom spoke as she poured coffee for him

"Mum..u r sayin of vaccation then I m goin for my sports naa..u know how much I love them right??!! And plus u guys go was businesses tours not vaccation.

"Leave it Nan..its his life and m proud that my son finally devided to explore another place..." his dad spoke patting his back

"Dad..its not like..it's a big deal..its my college..I need to have my degree complete from my dream college and that what m getting" he spoke as he say his mom getting teary due to think of him leaving for next some years.

"Okk now...lets drop u to the Airport. Have a safe journey" his dad spoke

And they drove to the airport.

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"So RG ...ready"
"Yehh..!!"
Zoom...zoom..a strong wind passed his face as he started his bike from the starting point. It was his favorite and he love the speed. Suddenly he looked back to see the girl with closed eyes. He smirked seeing her look. He soo loved these girls who love to sit with him on his bike. He love speed. He love girls but in his heart he know, he is eaiting for the girl for whom he will slow down the speed not the other way round. And then he saw..the finishing line. And then there were people shouting.."RG RG RG RG" the person having mike in hand spoke "and even this time the race is won by RG...!!"

"Look at him...thats why I said not giving him much freedom..everyweek we can hear people saying about different bike races. And thats coz of this RG and his love for bikes and races...even one day he comes late...the fear comes to me that is he having another race..had he face an accident or got injury and god knows what not dreams." A lady spoke

"Oh plss...u know right how our relation with him was from past some years and when it started healing we can't even think of straining it back...we know that Armaan's was the one who can get angry in someone even the person think of hurting any one if them but Rahul had alwz been the one with the anger..he was stubborn. We can't do anything but its good he is now lookin forward to the proposal of goin to cali.." Rahul's dad spoke

"Yeh" rahul's mom spoke

"Hey Dad, Heh Mom" rahul spoke comin to inside his house
"Dad I forgot to tell u...m goin to cali by today's eve flight" he told them and drank juice
"What..??!! Why didn't u told us before??!!" His mom splke flabbergasted

"Coz i got acceptance today..if i would had told u guys be4 and haven't got acceptance then all ur hopw would had been gotten crash...I didn't want that...so..sorry mom but..I need to pack things...i need help...would u??!!" Rahul asked cupping his mother's face..

"Sure why not" she said
"Well done son..proud of u that u took ur decision on ur own that to very correct one" his dad spoke and patted his back.

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"Hey guys wass up??" A girl wearing a white top with printed ankle length pants and a dark brown leather jacked came running and then rubbed her hands...

"Nothing babes" a voice comes from back

And then she turned around "oh...RSS...u back...missed u soo much"
"Missed u too sweety" and then RSS hugged her...

To be cont...


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Bonjour all...!! Ik its crazy to wish u every day hello with diff words but I like that. This update is one of the biggest. I meant 1000+ words.
I left at umm...CLIFFHANGER it is..!! I some time gives..!!
Have a nice, happy day..!!
2 updates in one day..!! Clap clap clap..!!

Loads of love and kisses(on cheeks obvio)..!!
Sanju ^_^


Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Amazing work. I loved it.

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