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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -cuteee.tigress

DAMN this was one amazing chapter!

i feel like im reading *cough*'s life story. :P

it is so well written and all the words flowed so beautifully together in this, absolutely great! 👍🏼

i loved the asr last part, lets see how they come together now!

Public Hai Leela Rani! Thanks a lot, Meri Moonlight!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dellz-

This is just a ideal and unique concept.

For a moment I was like OK ladkiyaan ka kaam hota hai kitchen sambalna and be quite in front of your husband etc. But this was just way ahead.
How could someone be like that doesn't know how to respect women.
Suhansiji please aap toh badlo. Aap khushi ki maa ho, how could you say like this.
Waiting for Arms to get his Khushi back
Thanks for the pm
Continue soonish

Hahahah! My concepts are never so simple, Dellz! Thanks a lot, re!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: russelskhushi

beautiful update... true, their love is so strong that even sin worship it... loved how arnav knows why khushi did what she did...
loved it...

A last minute addition! Thanks a lot!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Oh this was absolutely outstanding.. I so loved this part.. it was very realistic.. and yeah this is the harsh reality we are all closing our eyes to.. kudos my baby for taking this concept.. I so wish I get time to give my usual long comments.. *sigh* anyhow continue soon <3

Thanks a lot, baby! I am waiting for your long comments!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Okay Di I just opened IF and saw your story pm .

Actually I had seen you requesting banner in creative shop for this story and I from that time was very interested in .
I love the title Gunaahon ka devta as I loved the show with same name . And now I love your story .
I had read the sneak peak back then but could not reply .
I really liked the prologue . Yes like no where in the world marriage has an extra ordinary definition in our Indian society . And it's just so sad that Khushi has to face all these .
Her mother I found her just like every serial 's mother . And her father 🤢 I hate him . He seems like a person of Crime petrol and Savadhaan India .
But I love the way how Khushi questions her mother , her questions are the questions of many girls of Indian which are left unanswered .
You know I m just loving this story Di .
And Khushi is already married ? 🥱 But with Arnav yeah ! And I hundred and one know that he will do something . Till then I want Khushi to fight back .
This Rahul is giving me weird chills . I m totally imaging Arnav giving him an Dushasan death by tearing his chest 😆😆
Khushi worries for Arnav is totally justified . I remembered this dialogue from Hamari Adhuri Kahani of Vidhya Balan where she says that she loves him so much that just to decorate her heaven she can not push him to her hell forever . I feel Khushi feels the same .

Really addicted to this story . And this is going to be special for me . I m gonna buddy that account and please update regular . Really love this story .

Ps when are you going to update the ArDi ff ? 😕 And loved your Siggy

Love
Sam


Dushasan Death! I would love to write that! Thanks a lot, baby! I haven't seen Hamari Adhuri Kahani! ArDi FF, the response disheartens me but let us when I can update that! And I too love my Siggy dabba, Sam!
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Posted: 9 years ago
You are talented yaar! I love your writings!
I can clearly understand Khushi's feelings! Beautifully written!
What to say about Suhasini? She considers her husband as Lord Shiva too? One who has married an other women just bcoz she couldn't conceive? She is letting him treat her like a thing in her house! Without any self respect!
And she wants her daughter to be treated like that?
ArShi are married? Wonder Since when!
I'm glad Arnav is gonna fight for their love!
Waiting for the next one!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

Hahahah! My concepts are never so simple, Dellz! Thanks a lot, re!

Hehe I know you are a dark FF writer 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Why love takes a lower place in front of damned social norms? A man is allowed to bed n number of women, he can marry anyone he wants to, he can touch anyone anywhere anytime and a if a woman thinks of doing any of that, she is said to be a 'black spot' to the society -_- Is this called modernisation? The society's thinking is like a desert where no new plant can grow!
When Suhasini experienced everything herself and is herself stuck in an abusive relationship, how effin can she see her own daughter go though all of this? Aisa karna tha toh paida hi kyu kiya?? I hated when she said that Rahul has all rights on her even before the marriage 😡

Arnav seems to be nice :) But he needs to be strong to gain Khushi above the society which won't let them to be together! When they are destined to be together, NOTHING can stop them

Continue soon, Vini :)

And I forgot to tell you, You are awesome as a Writer and as a person 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey thanks for the pm. Loved the update. Wonderful. Enjoyed every bit of it. Superb. So arshi are married.??????? Rahul such despo. Khushis mum is so submissive and her father is dominant. Hope Khushi is able to come out of this chakravew
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.

You are talented yaar! I love your writings!
I can clearly understand Khushi's feelings! Beautifully written!
What to say about Suhasini? She considers her husband as Lord Shiva too? One who has married an other women just bcoz she couldn't conceive? She is letting him treat her like a thing in her house! Without any self respect!
And she wants her daughter to be treated like that?
ArShi are married? Wonder Since when!
I'm glad Arnav is gonna fight for their love!
Waiting for the next one!

Since when, I guess future chapters will answer that question of yours Alisha! Well many women in India are like Suhasini, Pati Kuch Bhi Kare, Tumh Jhelogi! Bullshit!

Thanks a lot, re!

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