Arshi TS : Five Minutes - Teaser - pg 30 - 16th October :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

very emotional
well written
nice start...

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: prachi06
is it going to be exacrly like katti batti
plz dont make khushi die here yaar
nicely written
thanx for pm dear
continue sooonnn

Erh so Kangana dies in Katti Batti? Thank you for saying this now i dont have to watch the movie 😭😭😭

But no this story may seem similar to the movie as first shot is more or less like the trailer but Khushi wnt die or something 😲 you can be assured!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sheen.sk
Katti Batti didnt excite me at all
but reading this as Arshi's story made me very curios..
very interesting, waiting for the nxt..
pls continue soon..

uhh thank you.. i hope i will be able to stand on your expectations😳

the next sht will be up in few minutes :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: radhika007
waiting

your wait shall be over in few minutes 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: hiuytlm
Please don't make it a sad ending

i personally hate sad endings so i never write on in my stories 😳 be assured this will also end in a happy note 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: oKBSo
Khushi has commitment problems!

But she loves him right!

Love? well maybe.. or may be not 😈

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Uzii
Plz continue soon as I'm curious to know wat happened that khusi abruptly left him

the next part will be updated in few minutes, thanks for being patient. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Rishaal
Hmmm 😳
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Hmmm🤓
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Hmmm..mmm

Silly Khushi! Nevermind...

Hey, I am here see 🤪 itni jaldi mein agayi
Coming to the shot, you said that I am being naughty these days? Dude have you read your first para? ☺️ huh! OMG it was cute.
Khushi more or less seems like Arnav in the show here. I think she doesnt want any commitment and all she needs is a boy for herself, you know what I mean, dont ya? 😳
And you approve my thoughts so I am right. She doesnt want him to have any feelings for her but I cant guess a good reason for it. Trust me if Khushi comes with any silly reason for running away in the second part of your TS, you cant even think what will happen to you babes. 😈
Mujhe to ye bohot achha laga 🤗 when is part 2 coming? 😲

Yuss you got it right. Khushi here is like our very pyara ASR ☺️

Think karna maine kab ka chod diya hai. You know had i been in thinking state main yahan writer ban ke nahi baithti 🤪🤪

Originally posted by: Rishaal
Oh yes? Why is this TS named FIVE MINUTES? You leave no logic for me to think Baba

Five minutes? Because i wanted to name it so isi liye 😳😆 and wwaise bhi zindagi is do pal ki naa yahan toh i am making it 5 effing minutes so be happy 🤪🤣