Arshi TS : Five Minutes - Teaser - pg 30 - 16th October :D - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Good story so far. At first I didn't think much about Khushi's decision of leaving him. Yes she should have handled it better but it made sense, given their different ideas. But reading the last part makes me think otherwise. There is clearly some deeper reason to her aloofness regarding love. Can't wait to find out. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Teaser





"Arnav."
He heard a shaky whisper from behind and he immediately recognized whose voice it was. How couldn't he when he had lived her and her memories all these months? He turned back and seeing her there standing right before him with, he felt alive again. His heart started beating at a mad rate and he didn't know how he was to react. Was he to be happy for finally seeing her after all these months or sad thinking she might leave him again, angry that she left him without any word or delighted that no matter what she was there right infront of him?


"Arnav." Another chocked whisper escaped her dry throat as she came and stood right before him. She smiled brokenly at him and blinked her eyes finally letting the welled up tears roll down her pale feverish skin before she hugged him tight like her life depended on it.


If there were restrains from him, that was resolved by that simple move of hers ans without giving another thought Arnav wrapped her arms around her slender waist lifting her off her feet, hugging her tight. Tears of happiness rolled down his eyes as he took a long breath into her hair breathing in the smell of her fruity shampoo and a soft smile appeared on his lips after many months.
If this was a dream, he would never want to wake up!
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser... plz update sooon dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mein keh rahi thi ke mein aaj comment kr deti hun, kya yaad karo gi. 😆
Mein tou har jaga comment hi karti rehti hun, kabhi fakhar nahi kia ke mein kitni achhi hun🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome teaser.. Can't wait for the update. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser! Khushi finally came to him!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely teaser
Thanks for the pm

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