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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

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This was the most adorable update ever! Mihika realizing she's obsessed with Abhishek, wanting to speak about it with him but backing out in the end, that was like really cute! And I'm loving this affectionate authority that Abhishek is showing on Mihika. 😆 That's just so Abhishek! And Mihika thought he was gonna propose her. 🤣 And this fasting concept that you came up with is actually very innovative! Abhishek, poor guy. 😆 That part where he's irritated, pondering over whether he should call or not, that was adorable. I loved the update! But cliffy again! 😆 Now I'm all curious again. 😆

Hopefully, you'll get many many many more adorable updates. 😊
I am so very addicted to giving cliffhangers. 😛

Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

Mihika and her innovate fast LOLZ 😆

Thanks. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

This FF is getting so interesting . The story and oh AbhiKa aree bring some romance between them na ☺️

Continue soon .
Love
Sam

Thanks a lot Sam. Hopefully, you'll get some romance soon. First date's coming, 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Mihika had suffered in her past relationships.i think bcz of that only she feels bad abt obsession n their relationship is moving very fast n not want 2 get married so soon.But Abhishek surprised her with lovers' rings.she wants one 2 b worn by him.it shows she is obsessed too.def this KW is very unique.not keeping any contact with each other till moon's arrival.hats off 2 u 4 this idea.But mihika dressed in a grand red saree like other women do on KW.Abhi reached n blindfoldedher eyes.Any surprise?

thank you very much. 😊
And yes it is a small surprise.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Aww! The sweetest and the most unique Kadwa Chauth I've ever seen!

Thaanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cortana

reserving for a comment, might need to read again

p.s. your first post's layout looks weird on my computer but I don't know if that is because of the alignment or a code issue with the website.
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I have never heard of lovers' rings before. I have heard of purity rings and the usual engagement rings but this is something new. Also nice twist on the karwachauth vrat which is suitable for this day and age. I feel like someone else in the family who is not meant to be there is going to turn up and Abhika might end up in a pickle which will lend itself to a lot of humour but of course the truth only you know. It's an interesting comparison also from the beginning of the story in terms of characterisation because now they are like obsessed with each other while before one wanted space so much that she moved to a whole different country! Let's see what happens next though. 😊

Hmm.. Even I heard of them a few days ago. But I thought of using it here.
That would have been really funny. But like I told you, I want to give different content. 😊

Thanks a ton. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zuriah

Wow..I m all swoonee with such detailing and loongg updates. Can spend my time reafing this..

U truly are amazing with an amzing writing skils and way of words👏

Mikhika has ishita her akka to confide into..
Yes she went under a turbulent experience but now abhishek is my mr sweet heart..

N mikika sundari😳..
I loved how abhishek surprised her with lovers ring..nothing seems to make things more amazing..its lije DO HANSON KA JODA
Obsession does ruins things when not controlled on r8 time..
Eager to know what awaits nxt

Loads of love
Zuriah🤗

New reader!🥳
Thanks a ton for reading. And I really really hope you enjoy the upcoming updates as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter XXIX

Mihika, though frightened, chose to believe Abhishek. She could not exactly reason why but she felt that he would never harm her. There was trust, trust which weaved all her concerns into a string of love. She simply followed his instructions.

"Now, we are standing in front of your room's door. I'll open the blindfold once we enter the room. There's something for you in there!" He bubbled with excitement. His words perfectly reflected his excitement.

Mihika drew a deep breath as she opened the door and she entered her room. Slowly, he removed the blindfold. Mihika felt cold as his fingers brushed against her cheeks while doing so.

And when she was free to view the room, she was shocked. It was illuminated, but surprisingly, not by lights but by the radiance of earthen lamps and candles. As her eyes inspected the room, a smile conquered her face.

Abhishek, who silently observed her face, for he waited to see her reaction, simply smiled and waited to listen to her words. And he was not disappointed for his partner soon broke the silence.

"When did you do this?" Mihika asked him, fascinated.

"I didn't! Vandu akka did!" Abhishek said with a smile.

Mihika was first shocked, then irritated and lastly afraid that Vandu was helping Abhishek a lot and this might help him do a lot of things ahead which he must not do. She said, "Abhishek, I am short of words".

He chuckled. Then, he held her hand and told her that "he knew that she was". Then he slowly placed his head on her shoulder from behind and embraced her into a warm hug.

All this though seemed nice, but Mihika seemed disturbed. She was feeling caged suddenly, she did not want stop him but she did not want him to continue ahead because she was not ready to take this relationship to any new level which hurt her later.

"Mihika, thank you. Thank you for being. Thank you for happening to me. And thank you for happening to me at the right time."

Mihika was shocked. He was really serious about her. But were they in the same boat? Mihika felt that though she loved him but the jet speed of his expression worried her. She did not want anything to grow big enough to hurt them later.

"Abhishek.." She was going to remark when he ssshh-ed her. Mihika was confused then.

"Come with me", he held her hand and took her to the bed, "look what I got you!" She opened her drawer which was just beside her bed and took out from it a small packet.

"What is it?" Mihika seemed confused though she was trying to force a smiled on her face.

"Well", he stood up, "its something which you like. I have to thank Vandu akka. She helped me choose it and now that you have it. Open it!" He told her with a bring expression.

Mihika, too stood up and open the packet and she was shocked when she did. It was dark chocolate. Mihika had a thing for dark chocolate and chocolate ice-cream. But this was not known to anyone other Vandu, who knew the closest of her secrets. She did not reply.

He came closer and clutched her hand with his. She looked up into his eyes. From her expression, he could easily make out that she was vulnerable but this was something he wanted to get her out from. This small corner in her heart, which had hidden all her sorrows so long, he wanted her to destroy it. He wanted her to be free from any thought of past.

Soon, they were close enough because Mihika was caged between the wall and Abhishek. Their hands, still clutched and eyes still steering into others. Abhishek felt that he needed to break away because this might make her feel a bit unsettled. But when he tried to do so, he saw that her grip tightened. Amazed, he looked at her.

He could make out tears in her eyes. Of happiness or sorrow, he could not determine.

Mihika soon hugged him and this time Abhishek felt that she was really opening up to him. This was what he wanted. He wanted her to be free.

"Thank you Abhishek. You are possibly the only one who seems to struggle to know me. To care for me. It actually makes me feel complete. I cannot just tell you how it feels!" She told him as she crashed into him. Feeling safe, felling complete and above all feeling secured.

He closed his eyes and smiled. He was enjoying to see this new side of Mihika. A vulnerable one which asked to be cared for, which demanded respect and demanded to be valued. This Mihika was lost somewhere, he thought, in her struggle.

"How do I tell you that I feel complete now? After today, possibly I'll never feel this secured ever!" She told him.

Abhishek broke the hug and made her sit on the bed, and he sat down on the floor in front of her. He held her hand and looked up. Then with a stern expression, he tasked "You feel complete?"

She nodded in agreement.

"Then my work is done!" He said with a bright smile.

"Don't! Don't be this good. Don't be so good that you lose your happiness!" She told him because she felt she had hurt him in this process of confession.

"What are you talking about?" He told with a confused expression.
"Well, you know what, now I am not going to trouble you anymore. You, ma'am, need to rest." He stood up and told her to rest.

"But..." Mihika seemed disappointed.

"Don't!" He told and forced her to sleep.

Caressing her hair as he looked at her he could feel her grip tighten. She was holding his hand tightly. As she drifted into sleep, her expression became calm and composed. Mihika felt safe.

Gently he got free of her hold and whispered,"Sleep happily. Today, Mihika, you have conquered every fear. And tomorrow, you'll rise to be happy. To be you."
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Chapter XXX

As sunshine entered the room through the window, Mihika covered her head with blanket. She wanted to sleep but she couldn't, because soon she was disturbed by a sound in her room. The next second she was afraid that someone had come into the room and saw all those earthen-lamps, she got up in an instant.

It was Madhavi. But to Mihika's shock, there were no decorations around. Mihika stared at Madhavi as if she expected her to say something but when Madhavi sat down close to her, she was sure that the old lady had seen nothing.

"Mihika, kanna, had a nice sleep?" Madhavi asked her affectionately.

"A really good one, periamma", she told her with a smile.

"Now, get up and get ready. You have to free yourself from this habit of sleep till late."

"Why exactly?"

"Well", Madhavi took out a letter from the drawer, "It seems like someone is now a business analyst at Clements!"

Mihika's eyes widened and the next second she snatched the letter from her and eagerly opened it. And with a smile, she read it aloud to Madhavi. Madhavi was happy to see Mihika contented and this just made her feel that it was time that Mihika settled with someone she likes though she had no idea of who the person should be. Madhavi now felt, it was sensible to ask Mihika to get married.

"How on Earth am I going to do this! I have to reach today itself for the training session before twelve! And it is already, nine!" Mihika got up and her face perfectly reflect her mind which was worried.

"No problem, you get ready and by the time you come down, I'll prepare something to eat. Okay?" Madhavi told her.

"No periamma, I am really hungry, I'll simply brush and come down to eat first."

"Okay then. As you wish! Wait, did I tell you this hairstyle looks good on you because it really does." And with this Madhavi left to go down.

Mihika checked herself in the mirror, and was surprised to see all her hair on one shoulder. Though she liked it, but she didn't know how did that come up. "Abhishek? Maybe", but then she thought again,"yeah! Why would he do it!"

She soon got rid of those thoughts, checked her phone, only to be disappointed. "Extended the fast, ACP sir?" She messaged Abhishek. Then after brushing, she quickly went down to have her breakfast.

"I know Amma, Simar just cries in almost every other episode! This just irritates me that the show is so regressive!" Vandu's voice rang up in the hall.

"Well, at least she is better than Gopi Vahu who is suffering from posttraumatic stress disorder, since she married into the Modi household!" Madhavi told her with a laugh.

"Okay, now are we talking about television?" Mihika marked her presence.

"Yup. Amma, do you know what Mihika likes these days?" Vandu told with a smirk.

"What exactly?" Madhavi asked.

"She loves Pyaar Ko Ho Jane Do! Isn't it Miku?" Vandu winked at Mihika who narrowed her eyes at Vandu.

"I assure you akka, that I have never heard the name before!" Mihika sat down on the counter as Madhavi gave her a plate.

"Obviously! You have never heard the name! You know one name these days that is Abhishek!" Vandu said it the flow before she clicked her tongue.

"What?" Madhavi, shocked as she was, first looked at Vandu and then at Mihika with a strange stare. She could almost imagine Abhishek and Mihika getting married.

"I meant, those bottles of energy drinks amma! Abhi Shake drinks! What did you think?" Vandu modified the meaning of her sentence at an instant which gave Mihika relief. No matter how lame the explanation seemed, it was still an explanation.

"Ah! I love them!" A voice rang up from behind which attracted everyone's attention.

"Yup! Now he was left! Great, get in ACP sir! I am already being trolled, add up to it!" Mihika thought as she cursed Abhishek who had made his way to the counter.

"Good morning aunty! And oh! Vanduji! And... Mihika!" He greeted everyone with equal attention.

"Obviously you love those drinks Abhishek. I am not shocked. Are you shocked Miku?" Vandu went ahead to make the most of the situation.

"By ACP sir's sudden appearance? Yes I am!" Mihika answered smartly, to change the topic of discussion.

"I feel a traditional drink is better than energy drinks!" Madhavi remarked as she mixed honey in water and added some lemons to it.

"Well, periamma, I'll go and change!" Mihika stood to leave and as her eyes met Abhishek's, she teased him as if celebrating her victory.

But before she could fly away like a free bird, Vandu held her hand and made here sit,"Come on Miku! Look ACP sir is here to investigate your case, I mean to investigate a case in our buliding! Go help him!"

"I would have loved to akka but I have to get ready!" Mihika smiled though she was irritated.

"Oh! I can investigate myself, but Mihika make sure you are wearing all that jewellery you were wearing last night, for it seems someone has stolen jewellery of many!" Abhishek told Mihika with a nod.

Mihika first couldn't understand but then she checked both her ears, and to her shock, the left ear (which was covered by her hair), did not have the earring she was wearing last night! She eyes met with Abhishek's who signalled her to look at his hand which held her earring.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Chapter XXXI

"You know what, Abhishek I think I should help you! Its has been days since I last did something good for the society" Mihika told them which a forced smile.

"Ahh! That is good. Well, we can start right now because you don't much time!" Abhishek told her.

"Go! Go! Good people help the society!" Vandu told them as if she was a Greek messenger to the gods.

And as they left the hall, Madhavi looked at Vandu and after the stern silence of a few minutes she asked Vandu with a serious stare, "They are much more than friends. Right Vandu? And you knew about it!"

While a shocked Vandu was left behind, Mihika and Abhishek came out to the common hall for the floor.

"Given me the earring!" Mihika told him angrily.

"I won't! Nope I cannot!" He told her with a smirk.

Mihika, though a bit irritated, could hardly control herself and not admire his mannerisms. He had become a stress-buster for her and more than anything, she felt like spending time him Abhishek was putting it to optimum use.

"Abhishek, listen to me. Today is my first day at work. I have no time. Please give me the earring because well it is not exactly mine, its Vandu akka's!" Mihika told him with a concerned expression.

"Do you know about barter system?" Abhishek asked her.

Mihika seemed tensed, obviously she knew about it but what did he want? "Okay, now what do you want in exchange?"

"A promise."

"A promise. Interesting. About what?"

"Our first official date."

Mihika looked at him in shock. "Abhishek, what about it?"

"You have to promise that I'll take place soon. That it will take place after Diwali. The very next day after the last day of the festival!"

Mihika, who was herself excited for the official date, could not stop herself from answering out of excitement,"Sure. Now get me the earring!"

But Abhishek had other plans, he removed her hair from her shoulder and then, with a contented smile put the earring in its place. Mihika smiled as he did so.

Sadly, like it is said, lovers don't care about their surrounding, this scene was witnessed by Sarika and Romi (Ishita's sister in law and brother in law) who instantly understood the condition of the hearts of the two. Romi congratulated Sarika on getting a bhabhi (for Abhishek was her cousin) and Sarika congratulated Romi on getting his friend a great guy. (Mihika and Romi are friends).
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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