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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter XXVII

"Call her! No! Don't! I hate fasts!" This was the only thing Abhishek could think while sitting in his cabin. He was really irritated with the idea of fasting. "How did she even come up with it!"

Officer Sharma came in and informed that a man had come to meet him. Abhishek asked him to let the man in. It was Mihir. Abhishek was shocked but more than anything else he felt strange.

"Abhishek... I want to talk about Shagun!"

Abhishek was relived and felt much better and he then asked Mihir to sit and their talk proceeded. Mihir seemed to be worried about his sister. She had vanished again. And this time, without any message. Abhishek tried his best to assure Mihir that he would investigate into the matter and definitely approach him if anything substantial is found. Mihir then got up to leave. Once he had left, Abhishek sighed and crashed in his chair, checking the phone again for messages. Sadly, he was again disappointed.

Mihika sat in the room, in front of the mirror. "What am I doing? The interview is in an hour and I have never felt this blank! Well, they say having nothing to do makes you dull. I should get ready!"

She had an interview today. And it gave her some expectations of going back in the corporate working sector which would help her skills grow. It was not like she worked only for money, she enjoyed to work herself and earn her bread with dignity. It made life appear more meaningful.

Arranging the clothes, her document and other stuff, she started getting ready and was completely prepared in half an hour. She went down into the hall where Vishwa (Mihika's uncle and Vandu's father) was sitting.

"So Mihika, I hope you are read for the interview?"

"Yes periappa. All ready. I hope of goes well!" She remarked.

"It obviously will. You are really hardworking. They will not let such a great employee go somewhere else. Best of luck." He wished her affectionately with a smiling face.

Mihika then left the room and came out, there she met Ishita (since they live in the same apartment complex) who was coming back home.

"Akka, how is your fast going?" She asked.

"Tough. I desperately want to eat something but cannot. Honestly, it isn't that tough but today I feel like someone just put a big machine inside my stomach which asks for more food every second."

"Wow! That must be tough. Anyways, I have an interview, so I have to leave!" Mihika bid her goodbye and then proceeded ahead with enthusiasm.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Chapter XXVIII

It was night and the society was buzzing with women in heavy saris and expensive jewellery rushing around to bring their 'thaal' for breaking their fasts. Men stood in a corner.

Ishita and Vandu stood together holding their plates in the resplendent setting. The roof of the building was wonderfully decorated with flowers and red curtains. There are water settings with diyas floating in them and
small diyas placed intricately made the place look mesmerizing.

Mihika entered the place. She was wearing a red sari. It was a simple red one which looked like a classic Victorian red with thin works on the borders. She had tried wearing something like this for the first time. Her earring went well with the dress and with minimal make up, she was definitely looking good enough to catch sight of a few.

Ishita and Vandu can up to her and the three started conversing. Like teenagers, Mihika's sisters enjoyed teasing her about the innovative fast. And then they asked her about Abhishek. Mihika found this inexpressiblely funny and she satisfied her thoughts by thinking that Abhishek would soon arrive. That was definitely the only good thing about the place right now.

When the moon came up in the sky, all the ladies went to take their spots and so did their husbands. Only Mihika and Madhavi (who was not fasting) were left along with children. Mihika felt like she needed to leave now because Abhishek must have come. But she still felt strange to leave Madhavi around like that.

"Pariamma, I think I need some rest!"

"No problem dear. You go and rest. Okay?" Madhavi told her with a smile.

"Okay. I'll leave then!" And with these words Mihika went down to the apartment. She was feeling excited and worried at the same it. This was a strange feeling.

She opened the door and instantly felt someone's gaze was on her. She was right! She turned back to find Abhishek.

"Hi!"

Mihika looked around and she was annoyed. She held his hand and took him in and closed the door. "What are you doing? What if someone would have seen you?"

"Mihika.." He sighed, "Jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya?"

Mihika rolled her eyes. They then sat down and had long chat about how the day had passed. A common expression came up from both sides, "It was a really long day!"

There was some comfort felt by both. It is difficult to express yet it was something which helped them evolve a better understanding for each other.
"Coffee?" She asked.

"Any doubt?" Her partner replied.

She went to the kitchen and started preparing while Abhishek called someone.

"My work? Have you done it?" And after conversing for a few minutes, "great! Thanks."

He quietly tiptoed into the kitchen, took a blindfold from his pocket and wrapped it around Mihika's eyes. Mihika was shocked and more than anything she was frightened.

"Abhishek, leave me! If you don't..."

"Then what?" He asked as if challenging.

"I'll make sure that you are arrested!" Mihika announced.

"Okay, now, this is dangerous for me!" His said feigning fear and then whispered in her ears, "Believe me! Please do."

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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[quote]NOTE[/Quote]

Hello.

So like I said, I can get unrealistic anytime. But the Karwachauth thing is the bit took much I know but by head thinks a lot! And by that I mean reallly lot!

Now, honestly, I don't know if it is as good as others but definitely I hope you liked it.

Cliffhanger! 😈 Now you have to wait to see what happens next.

Next update comes on 3rd November!

Thanks.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was the most adorable update ever! Mihika realizing she's obsessed with Abhishek, wanting to speak about it with him but backing out in the end, that was like really cute! And I'm loving this affectionate authority that Abhishek is showing on Mihika. 😆 That's just so Abhishek! And Mihika thought he was gonna propose her. 🤣 And this fasting concept that you came up with is actually very innovative! Abhishek, poor guy. 😆 That part where he's irritated, pondering over whether he should call or not, that was adorable. I loved the update! But cliffy again! 😆 Now I'm all curious again. 😆
Edited by ..Ramya.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
Mihika and her innovate fast LOLZ 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
This FF is getting so interesting . The story and oh AbhiKa aree bring some romance between them na ☺️
Continue soon .
Love
Sam
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mihika had suffered in her past relationships.i think bcz of that only she feels bad abt obsession n their relationship is moving very fast n not want 2 get married so soon.But Abhishek surprised her with lovers' rings.she wants one 2 b worn by him.it shows she is obsessed too.def this KW is very unique.not keeping any contact with each other till moon's arrival.hats off 2 u 4 this idea.But mihika dressed in a grand red saree like other women do on KW.Abhi reached n blindfoldedher eyes.Any surprise?
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww! The sweetest and the most unique Kadwa Chauth I've ever seen!
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Posted: 10 years ago
reserving for a comment, might need to read again
p.s. your first post's layout looks weird on my computer but I don't know if that is because of the alignment or a code issue with the website.
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I have never heard of lovers' rings before. I have heard of purity rings and the usual engagement rings but this is something new. Also nice twist on the karwachauth vrat which is suitable for this day and age. I feel like someone else in the family who is not meant to be there is going to turn up and Abhika might end up in a pickle which will lend itself to a lot of humour but of course the truth only you know. It's an interesting comparison also from the beginning of the story in terms of characterisation because now they are like obsessed with each other while before one wanted space so much that she moved to a whole different country! Let's see what happens next though. 😊
Edited by Cortana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..I m all swoonee with such detailing and loongg updates. Can spend my time reafing this..
U truly are amazing with an amzing writing skils and way of words👏

Mikhika has ishita her akka to confide into..
Yes she went under a turbulent experience but now abhishek is my mr sweet heart..

N mikika sundari😳..
I loved how abhishek surprised her with lovers ring..nothing seems to make things more amazing..its lije DO HANSON KA JODA
Obsession does ruins things when not controlled on r8 time..
Eager to know what awaits nxt

Loads of love
Zuriah🤗

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