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Posted: 10 years ago
Let the exploration(s) begin 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bkamber



😉 Geeta ...result for sure...😆




Hehehe I hope so... 😉 I want the whole nine yards & more... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fishbowl and shadows aside, I am more interested in Chunar Fort. 😃

Also Jen, I think, in the future, you should write a "Vetala" story, kinda a take on Vikramaditya.





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Posted: 10 years ago
Can't wait to read 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bkamber

Fishbowl and shadows aside, I am more interested in Chunar Fort. 😃

Also Jen, I think, in the future, you should write a "Vetala" story, kinda a take on Vikramaditya.






Kerrie, is this in Mirzapur??
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Posted: 10 years ago

55 minutes to go. 😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem


55 minutes to go. 😉😆


Lol! Me too :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem


Kerrie, is this in Mirzapur??



It is in Chunar which is another town near Mirzapur.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vows or Validation?
...For whom...yourself or society?

This song satisfies my wish... Chunar Fort and what's behind the "fishbowl" and shadows. 😃

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8crt75t1Sc[/YOUTUBE]

I'll be back.
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First reaction...😛 😛 😛

LOVED...LOVED...LOVED the Chapter.



I am on a business trip, with colleagues, in the hotel Lounge reading this and I went Yes..Yes...Yes. 😆 😆 I am going to leave them wondering. 😉

Be back with more to say tomorrow.
👏

Back with more...

Vows, Validations, private, personal or public.
Arnav's opinion, perhaps tainted by a deceit, but I believe it is based on what he truly has faith and trust in. Honesty of the heart and mind along with his pride will not allow him to break his vows to love, cherish and protect...eternally forever...his love..his Khushi.
Khushi's acceptance of him is the only validation that matters to him.
Loved the "noose" comment...you remembered Jen. 😆

Khushi's opinion, acknowledged and respected because it is important to her. Khushi is about a "wedding" which is all inclusive of vows, validations, rituals, signatures, family and society. We know that Arnav will happily comply with Khushi's wish and there will be a wedding, but not just for that reason, he does need signatures "...admittedly necessary at times," for legal purposes. He has a legacy to protect.
Most important to me is the very mature and compassionate way both carried out this sensitive conversation. They listened to each other and respected each other's opinions. I felt the acute concern Arnav felt at the moment Khushi paused and he quickly assured her of his feelings by a gentle touch and soft words...a proposal. This time she accepted without needing a "hindi" version.
This day is too important and neither one is going to rock it with unimportant thoughts. The happy selfie marks the end of a most memorable trip, a date to remember, important simple questions, hearts laid bare and it may not appear too obvious, but the vows of the seven pheras were implied in all the activities of the trip that ultimately ended in a "thunderous" union.

A union, unlike previous love making, this was different. This was about possessing, passion, uninhibited surrender, acceptance, reassurance, intense pleasure... ultimate release for both ...@#$%...yes...yes...yes!!
Toe nibbling ...ooo baby!! 😛😛😛

❤️

More here Tsunami

Edited by bkamber - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Jen, another awesome chapter from your key board and enjoyed reading it. I loved the way you described every minute details of the places, local delicacies and attires very eloquently in few words. Now, I feel like visiting Mirzapur and forts around.

Arnav's witty comments and Kushi's equally humorous come backs, shopping, jalebis, reminiscing Aarav's memories fondly with a smile, sharing their beliefs about institution of marriage, titanic moment, warm hugs and kisses everything is very domestic. I would say it is a day of perfect exploration till the end and not a second of time gone wasted 😉.
Jen, you have mastered in writing Arshi romance 👏👏 and you don't have to hesitate an ounce to post them. BTW, the title vows and validations is so apt for this chapter. Is Arnav heading to Kashmir and Saffron fields? Will Kushi join him to explore the rural India and 😉😳?
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cz8PQVSWoxY[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by jduke - 10 years ago

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