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Posted: 9 years ago
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Armaan Ka Dard Dekha Nehi Jata Yaar, shona Kabhi Wapas Nehi Aayegi Kya Uski Zindagi Mein, Please Yaar Usse Wapas Laao, Awesome Part, I Wish Shona Zinda Ho Aur Wo Jaldi Ammy Ke Zindagi Mein Wapas Aaye...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"SAJNAA"

PART 3

Armaan : SHILPAAA...

N he drop down on his knees on those broken piece of glasses

Or in a second wo puri tarah road par hota he, he fell unconscious...

Baki kisike kuch samjh nahi aata ki ek hi pal me kya ho gaya armaan ke muh se shilpa ka naam sun sab shocked ho jate he they never think ki armaan is waqt is halat me shilpa ka naam lega instead of riddhima

All are more them shocked but wo log kuch react kare isse pehle armaan zamin par gir padta he or apne hosh kho beth ta he

Use is tarah dekh sab present me aate he n all run towards him

Armaan ke dono knees se khoon nikal raha he due to glass pieces n uske forhead par bhi cut he with that broken pieces of glass only

Sid , atul, rahul, abhi armaan ko uthate he or car me shift karte he

Armaan ke face par pani chidakte he use hosh me lane ki koshish karte he but no use

Sab armaan ke liye tense he or unke dimag me ye baat bhi he ki armaan ne shilpa kyu kaha

But they left that thought there only becoz abhi armaan ka hosh me aana jyada jaruri he

Sab sanjeevani ki taraf proceed karte he

Sab sanjeevani pahuchte he or armaan ko ICU me shift karte he

Its an hour but armaan ko abhi bhi hosh nahi aaya sab barah uske hosh me aane ka wait kar rahe he n inside its seems ki he himself don't want to wake up

Tabhi kuch voices aati he

Voice 1 : ummm kya kar rahe ho stop

Voice 2 : what stop tum apna kaam karo or mujhe mera kaam karne do

Voice 1 : hehehehehe... its ticklish hehehehehe... armaan stop"said while laughing"

Voice 2 aka Armaan : umm no I am enjoying this"saying with he again starts his work"

Voice 1 : hehehehe... please hehehehe... armaan ur beard hehehehehe...

Armaan : ufff tum chup chap so nahi sakti kya"irritately"

Scene 2

Voice 1 : wooo... I won I won"happily"

Voice 2 : that's cheating, u are a cheater, armaan is a cheater"said with pout"

Armaan aka voice 1 : oye mene koi cheating nahi ki ok I won ab tumhe wahi karna hoga jo me kahunga

Voice 2 : no u cheater tumne mujhe distract kiya that called cheating"with pout"

Armaan : everything is fair in love n war now accept ur defeat n complete ur challenge

Voice 2 : you...

Armaan : oh just shut up n kiss me"naughtily"

Scene 3

Voice 1 : ohhh tum dekh kar nahi chal sakte"angrily"

Voice 2 : tum bhi to chal sakti ho"with same anger"

Voice 1 : you... apne aapko bohot smart samjhte ho

Voice 2 : correction samjhta nahi hoon hoon hoon

Voice 1 : ohhh how I wish to kill u

Voice 2 : u already killed me sweetie

Voice 1 : armaan..."shyly"

Scene 4

Voice 1 : acha to kitna pyar karti ho mujhse

Voice 2 : bohot bohot jyada, armaan malik me tumse duniya me sabse jyada pyar karti hu jitna pyar me tumse karti huna koi nahi kar sakta acha tum mujhse pyaar karte ho

Voice 1 aka armaan : me pyaar tumse ohh please"teasingly"

Voice 2 : to iska matlab ki nahi karte"said sadly"

Armaan : sirf pyaar nahi ishq mohabbat love u r everything to me jaan sab kuch ban gayi ho tum meri"emotionally"

Voice 2 : I love u armaan"filled with love"

Armaan : I love u too

Scene 4 ends

Armaan ko ab bhi hosh nahi aata sab bohot ghabra jate he so they entered in all try to wake him up but no use

Suddenly armaan gets restless his heart starts to beat very fast bas dar jate he all are getting panic kuch armaan ke paas bethe he trying to smooth him koi uska BP check kar raha he

Scene 5

Voice 1 : lets get married

Voice 2 : eeeuuu ye kesa proposal he armaan ladki ko propose kar rahe ho thik se karo na, lets get married"she intimate him"he kya tha

Armaan aka voice 1 : acha mera proposal eeuuu tha to tum batao na ki kese propose karte he

Voice 2 : okie abhi batati hu pehle apne knee par betho

Armaan : bolke nahi karke dikhao u see practical

Voice 2 : okie okie hmm to pehle apne knee par betho is tarah"with this she sit on her knee"

Armaan : ab kya karu

Voice 2 : is tarah haath apne haatho me lo"n she take armaan's hand in her"

Armaan : fir

Voice 2 : or fir kaho I love u sooo much me tumse bohot bohot pyaar karti hu I want to spend my whole life with u only, kya mujhe ye haq doge ki meri har subah tumse shuru ho or har raat tum par khatam, kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge will u marry me

Armaan : yes

Voice 2 : kya yes"confusingly"

Armaan : are wahi tumhare proposal ka jawab"With this she starts to laugh"

Voice 2 : you looser"angrily"

Scene 6

Voice 1 : armaan

Armaan : hmmm

Voice 1 : don't u think ki hume sabko bata dena chahiye

Armaan : are bhai itni badi khush khabri he or tum chahti ho uhi bata de tumhara to pata nahi but I am THE ARMAAN MALIK ab me tumhare jaal me fas kar ab tumse shaadi karne hi wala hu to apni barbadi ki khabar bhi grandly hi batauga na yaar

Voice 1 : what mene tumhe apne jaal ne fasaya you mr. looser malik

Armaan : oh hello thoda soch samjh kar agar me mr. looser malik hu to tum bhi to would be mrs. Looser malik hui

Voice 1 : STOPPP...

Armaan : kya kya hua bike kyu rukwai"worriedly"

Voice 1 : armaan mujhe baraf ka gola khana he"said cutely"

Armaan : WHAT !! isliye tumse bike rukwai u r impossible"with disbelief"

Voice 1 : are wo sab chodo chalo khate he"she ignore him"

Armaan : are but wo road ke us par he chalo kahi or se kha lena

Voice 1 : nahi mujhe abhi khana he or wahi se hi khana he"she said stubbornly"

Armaan : ufff OK OK chalo turn karke jate he waha

Voice 1 : are armaan turning nahi he yaha uske liye half kilometer aage jana hoga dekho wha thori si jagah divider ke paas waha se chalte he whats say

Armaan : okie let me park this bike first

Voice 1 : okie love u"happily"

Armaan : pagal

Armaan bike side me lagata he n both starts to move

Voice 2 : hello mr. ye bike park karne ki jagah nahi he

They both turns n see ki unki bike ke pas ek traffic police khada he

Armaan : sir bas samne tak ja rahe he abhi 2 minute me aa jaenge

Traffic police : 2 minute ho ya 2 second ye yaha nahi chalega

Both armaan n the traffic police are talking

Voice 1 : armaan tum yahi ruke me le kar aati hu"with this she move towards that gole wala"

Armaan ko sunai nahi diya usne kya kaha becoz uska dhyan us traffic police wale par tha

Yaha ye dono argue hi kar rahe the ki tabhi ek zor ki aawaz aati he

Armaan turns there uski duniya uski aankho ke samne is tarah ujad gayi

Armaan : SHILPAAA...

With this armaan wake up armaan ki shout se sab uske paas aa jate he

Riddhima : armaan armaan sab thik he armaan dekho meri tarah armaan yaha hum sab he armaan

Muskan : hero tu thik he na hero

Sab usse baat karne ki koshish karte he but armaan wo in sabko nahi dekhta wo continuously bed ke aake ke floor ko dekh raha he

Armaan ek dam se bed par se uth ta he n moved towards floor wow aha floor pe ek dam se beth jata he baki sab use dekh rahe he but kisike kuch samjh nahi aa raha

Armaan : shona shona aankhe khuli rakho dekho tumhara armaan he tumhare paas shona dekho tum mere saath esa nahi kar sakti shona shilpa baby please tum tumm mujhse bohot pyaar karti hona to please

Armaan bas yahi bar bar bole ja raha he wo floor par is tarah betha he jese uski dodh me kisika sar he

Sid : armaan armaan ye kya keh raha he armaan shilpa yaha nahi he armaan use guzre 3 mahine ho gaye he armaan hosh me aa"he went forward n shake armaan"

But armaan wo wahi floor par betha he

Armaan : shona jaan hume decide kiya tha na hum sabko apne bare me bataenge acha thik he koi grandly nahi jese tum kahogi wese hi dekho aankhe kholo u love me na dekho tum mere saath esa nahi kar sakti tumne wada kiya he tum mujhe chod kar nahi ja sakti shilpa shilpa"armaan saying all this to his imagination"

He think ki shilpa uski baaho me he

Armaan look towards others n says

Armaan : please do something TUM LOG ESE KHADE KYU HO DEKHO MERI SHONA KA KITNA KHOON BEH RAHA HE KOI TO HELP KARO SID YE YE TO TERI DOST HENA, RIDDHIMA RIDDHIMA TUMHARI BEHEN HE PLEASE KOI TO HELP KARO TUM LOG KUCH KARTE KYU NAHI SHONAA..."he said angrily n crying bitterly"

Armaan : KOI KUCH MAT KARO UHI KHADE RAHO MERI SHONA YAHA LAD RAHI HE OR TUM LOG MUJHE KISIKI JARURAT NAHI APNI SHONA KA KHAYAL ME KHUD RAKH SAKTA HU"with this he try to stand with the imaginary shilpa in his hand"

Armaan shilpa ko ICU se bahar le jata he towards OT

Armaan ko is tarah dekh sabki aankho me aansu aa jate he isse pehle koi kuch kahe ya kare ya armaan ke piche jae ek thad aawaz aati he

Sab piche mudte he to dekhte he ki riddhima bed par behosh padi he

Sid :RIDDHIMAAA...

SO HERE IS THE UPDATE DO TELL ME GUYS HOWZ IT M WAITING FOR UR REVIEWS

LOVE U ALL

RAMYA😊

Edited by arsh4heaven - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

sorry dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Awesome update 👏
Seriously i loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
oh shit...poor arman
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Wow very nice update
Its getting more n more interesting
I m totally involving in this one
All fb scenes were very nice.
Its liye we know all their past
Omg shil dead n that's why he is like this
Ohh how much they love each other
Armi got mad after her.senseless broken man
Ridz faint. But out of jealousy or something else
Plz tell me she knows before shil is her sis or not
Good don't know how you bring her back
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsommmiiieee!! I knew it, I knew it, I just so knew it that Armaan's becoming all Devdas is because of Shilpa. So Armaan fainted being injured and all were confused as to why he took Shilpa's name instead of Riddima, well he was admitted in ICU and all were worried. Armaan seems to have flashback of his moments with Shilpa and they were so cute and in-love was clearly visible. But seems like no one knew of their affair and Armaan woke up and had a wild reaction seemingly in the time of Shilpa's accident. Well it was pretty shocking for all that Armaan and Shilpa were in love and they had plans to get married was too much for all to digest as they had no idea about any of these...well I felt very bad for Armaan, clearly jaan bas ti thi uski apni Shona mein and she died in front of his eyes and he too died along with her...now what is left behind is a fading man waiting to get faded away in time. Well hysteric and delusional Armaan ran out of ICU and before others could follow him, low and behold ladies and gentlemen the forever dramaqueen, Dr. Riddhima Modi fainted...pata nahi how this woman every time manages to get on my nerves.



Well I could guess that this is finally the time for everyone to know what was actually between Armaan-Shilpa and how their love story got a tragic end. But I don't know what is stored for Armaan..either he'll go mad with Shilpa's loss, he is on a self-destruction path or he'll also died due to heartbreak of losing his Shona. Let's see if this Armaan-Shilpa would get the epic Romeo-Juliet ending as Juliet aka Shilpa is already dead and how long our Devdas Romeo is able to drag his existence without her.


Update next chap sooon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Awesome part
So Armaan-shilpa was in love and going to get married...
But Shilpa met with accident...
Poor armaan...
He is seeing shilpa every where...
Feeling bad for him...
Plz jaldi btao na ki shilpa zinda hai...
Plz update soon next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
So emotional update
All scene is wonderful..specially propose wla
Armaan in soo much pain
Shilpa sach main maar gai kyaa??
If yes.. Then story shilpa k bina kese proceed karegi...???
Really curious to know that aage kya hoga..
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
loved it
omg shilpa is dead n arman heart broken
update soon
thanks for pm

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