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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 14


He keeps staring at her, encouraging her just by his stare, to say what she wants to say. As he waits for her to speak, he notices her eyes turning from a relaxed posture to a confused one to a thoroughly pissed off one. Shifting her vision, she shakes her head, closing her eyes she declares "main ye nahi kar sakti!" saying this she gets up and leaves the room. Rajveer gets up too and follows her to stop her but by now he knew that no one can change the mind of a determined Naina. But unable to understand how he can stop her, he grabs her by her right arm, her back turned in front of him and says "Naina please".

Naina shifts her vision to look at his hand, holding her and finds, him wearing a silver watch. A fade memory stops her from attempting to rescue her arm from his hold. 'Maine ye ghadi kahin dekhi hai pehle' she thinks, then diverts her attention to Rajveer's hand holding her. Turning back she looks into his eyes "Main yahan ek soldier baney ayi hun Sir. Aur jab main kisi kaam ko karne ki thaan leti hun ussey pura karke chorti hun", Naina challenges Rajveer.

Smiling, Rajveer says, "bilkul Cadet Singh! I trust you on that!" Reading his eyes that he really does trust her, makes her heart to melt. She shifts her vision to elsewhere. "Waise aap ja kyu rahin hain? Kya maine ab tak kuch aisa kaha jo mujhe nahi kehna chahiye?" asks Rajveer, his innocence visible in his voice and eyes. She looks into his eyes, her eyes are on the verge of getting teary. Rajveer's eyes do not miss that. Taking a deep breath, "mujhe nahi lagta ki apka mujhe yahan bulane ka koi bhi motive tha", she announces. Smirking, in a healthy way, Rajveer says "Trust me Cadet Singh, motive tha, aur solve bhi hua". Looking into his eyes, Naina smiles and says "mera bhi"! Rajveer for a second thinks about what does she mean but then he let go of the topic. "Main chalti hun" and she leaves.

Naveen's voice over -

Captain Rajveer aur Naina ki mulakat mein waise to koi khaas baat hui nahi, jaisa ki meri behn Naina ne expect kia tha! Par shayad Naina ko abhi Rajveer ko samjhne mein waqt lagega.

Smirking, Naveen continues -

Ussey kya pata, inn choti-choti baton ko bhi Captain Shekhawat bohot gaur se sunn rahe the. Aur na hi uski baaton ko balki Naina ke body reactions ko bhi Captain Shekhawat ek true soldier ki tarah read kar rahe the. Naina bina kuch kahe bhi bohot kuch keh gayi.

Ab dekhna ye hoga ki Captain Shekhawat, Naina ki baaton ko, kis tarah apne use mein layenge.

In Naina's room

Jahan tak meri behn Naina ki baat hai, wo itni bhi bholi nahi ki ye baat na samajh paye ki Captain Shekhawat ne ussey kisi maksat se wahan bulaya tha. Unki baatein bhaley hi normal thi, par wohi baatein Naina ko ye sochne par majbur karti hain ki Captain Rajveer ka ussey yun apne kamre bulane ke peeche kya maksad ho sakta hai. Captain Rajveer ke barey mein Naina ne jitna bhi samjha hai, wo ye baat samajh gayi hai ki Captain Rajveer har baat bohot soch samajh kar aur aagey ki strategies bana kar karte hain, ab dekhna ye hoga ki Naina kis tarah se unke strategies ka jawab degi aur apne maksat tak pohnchne mein kamiyab hogi.
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kark12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice updates ..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kark12

nice updates ..
plz continue soon


Thank you 😊 Will continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
14:nice update..
Nina much Kane hi kuch kehedi nainane ..
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jus read dis ff in one go its jus amzing. Thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

Jus read dis ff in one go its jus amzing. Thanks for the pm


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heartbroken1

awesome!!!!!!!!

great!!!!!!!!!


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
honestly speaking i didnt watch this serial
but i wouldd love to read ur story
just give me some time
i will reply with my feedback
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
I liked the story line... I suppose watch has to do something with Naveen... Therefore Naina is suspicious about it...

Please update next part soon and also a larger one...
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Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi

Nice update...

I liked the story line... I suppose watch has to do something with Naveen... Therefore Naina is suspicious about it...

Please update next part soon and also a larger one...


Thank you so much for liking the update well talking about the length, I normally give a short one! 😉 But I hope you'll enjoy reading 😊

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