NEW ARSHI FF: DOLI UDEGI...???! Last Chapter - Pg: 71

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bellarosa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

love it so much

wonderful

fabulous one

but please for the indian parole do a english translation

please continue soon

thanks for pm 😊

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daljeet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

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@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Really good! 😊
Nice progress between ArShi!
Toh this is Malik's blood? Revenge in such style! I must say, interesting!
Well but Arnav bhi kam nahi hai! He has his way of getting things done! And i so love this guy! ❤️
So Arnav is not okay with Viren? Arnav might be angry but then Viren has changed, hasn't he? He is the one consoling Anjali to give time to Arnav! But can't blame Arnav too!
Sometimes, all you need is a situation to understand a person! Hope that situation comes soon!
Wonderful update!

Edited by .LadyHitler. - 9 years ago

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Superb update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

finally... so arnav was not in love?

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

interesting how Arnav didn't like the fact khushi was angry about him being sick on her

looks like our handsome male nurse already harbours feelings for khushi

would make sense considering most of his teasing is flirty

have to say khushi using work to get some payback wasn't very professional n was quite childish

like how Arnav made her stop by using the idea of them being a couple

now they r friends cant wait to see if Arnav tries to take it further

n to see what happens at the picnic

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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bellarosa

@bellarosa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

awesome update

continue soon

thanks for pm 😊

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ship13

@ship13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Firstly sorry about the late reply for the last 2 updates. Secondly both the updates were fantastic. Totally love the way you are shaping up this story. It was hilarious that arnav threw up on khushi after troubling her so much at the party. Love the ca and mouse game between arnav and khushi when each is trying to outdo the other !! Looking forward to the truce and hopefully some action between arnav and khushi in a positive way. Love this story. Please update when you get a chance. ⭐️

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Loved the character sketch even though its convoluted and gave me headache trying to remember who is who...I am not sure whether i got it all...but loved the last line,..wining 7 women is not an easy feat...and looking forward to see how you will make a traditional minded girl fall in love with a younger guy...

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Nutcase

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Prologue...was delicious like the cake...I liked the style you applied here...for a light read its good...the conversation between the reader and Khushi...it had a nice feel and flow...And Arnav...well, the end part was bit rushed i feel...like Khushi, I felt Arnav also should have been given an introduction and then the conversation between should have happened..or whatever you wrote should had an extension or interlude to Arnav's thoughts when he saw Khushi and asked her light the candle when he made the declaration..just a thought...