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Info: Can a broken heart be mended? Can the damage be reversed? They say time heals all wounds, just like glue can put broken a mirror back together. But you can always see the cracks. Nothing is ever truly fixed. Follow a journey of self- discoveries, heartbreak, joy, loyalty, betrayals, and trust.

Sorry guys, Is story mein agar character sketch de dia to story bigad jayegi. To abhi ke liye sirf naam. End mein, sab character sketch aur ek proper summary de doongi.

Characters in the story:

Taani Shekhawat

Reyansh (Rey) Singhania

Swayam Shekhawat

Sharon Rai Prakash

Asha Negi

Rithvik Dhanjani

(And the usual Characters from the show, but will let you guys know if I add anymore important characters)

Story shall be updated later today or tomorrow. I'm typing the first two chapters now.

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY GUYS!!!

Aap sabko Swatantrata Diwas ki bahaut bahaut shubhkamnayein! I promise I'll update the other story soon! As usual, let me know who all want updates for this story, once I post the chapter of course. Usse pehle bhi boldoge to thik hai. :) On a side note, guys! Shantanu and the whole crew of Desi Hoppers in in the USA!! I wish I could go see them, but I'm a broke high school student. Like most broke high school students, I have no life. But wish them best of luck okay? World of Dance mein pahaunchna easy nahin hai. So, GOOD LUCK DESI HOPPERS! JEET KE AANA! Bindass Naach!
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CH1

"Tumhe koi haq nahin hai use milne ka!" Asha screamed at the man standing in front of her.

He swiftly rebutted "Mujhse haq ki baat mat karo! Bhai hoon main uska!"

This made Asha stare at him incredulously, "Bhai? Don't make me laugh. Parson hi tumne usse saare rishte tod diye the na? Yaad hai? Ya fir yaad dilaun? Ab tum yahan se niklo. Rithvik aa gaya na to bahot maarega. Tum nikal jao humare ghar se.

"Rithvik? Voh Taani ka naya dost? Aane do. Dekhta hoon mujhe meri behen se door kaise rakhta hai" Swayam said

"Kitni baar kahun? Voh tumhari behen nahin hai! And rahi baat Rithvik aur Taani ki, to voh dono ek dusre ko saalon se jaante hain. Agar tumne Taani ke baare mein khayal kiya hota, toh tumhe pata hota. Ab jao."

Now, he was down to begging to see just a glimpse of his sister "Please, mujhe usse ek baar milna hai. Please. Phir main chala jaunga."

*Rithvik comes out of the kitchen*

Wiping his hands on a towel, Rithvik does not notice Swayam at first. "Asha yaar, namak kahan rakha hai? Paani Puri ke masala mein daalna hai Taani ke liye." He spots Swayam at that moment. "Asha, yeh yahan kyun aaya hai? Taani ko aur chot pahuchane aye ho kya? Tum logon ko sukun nahin milega kya, jab tak tum use poori tarah se tod na do? Voh aur nahin le payegi. Bahut mushkil se sambhli hai voh. Please. Humare ya tumhare liye nahin to uske liye, yahan se chale jao. Sirf ek baar nicely bolunga. Nikal jao mere ghar se aur Taani ki zindagi se. Voh tumhari kuch nahin hai. Nikal jao warna mai kuch kar baithunga.

Looking at Rithvik's face, Swayam realized that the man would make good on his threat and would not hesitate to hurt him. So, he made his exit, mumbling to himself "Taani, maine tumhe hurt kiya hai. Sabse zyada. Ab mera kaam hai tumhe manana. Apni behen ko ghar laana. Aur main tumhe ghar laakar hi rahunga. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye"

Thoda short hai yaar. But that's the hook. Thoda suspense to banta hai boss. Next chapter on 20 likes! Or at least 10 yaar.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting chapter
continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dam interesting what gang did
To taani Awwe ashvik taking care
Of taani love Rithvik thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really vry interesting concept dear
wanna read
plz update soon
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
interesting concept
nicely written
update it soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was lovely update
Loved it
Want to read more
Pls update ASAP
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds Interesting...šŸ‘šŸ¼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

PM me when u update next part...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CH2

*Rey POV*

(flashback to 2 days earlier)

"Irritate karti hai voh mujhe. Use sirf tolerate kar raha hoon kyunki voh Swayam ki behen hai. Mere best friend ki behen nahin hoti na, to kab ka chod diya hota. Ab kya karun Sharon? Uske dimaag mein kahin se shaadi ka bhoot ghus gaya hai. Shaadi ke baare mein chup hone ka naam hi nahin leti. Main aisi ladki ke saath nahin reh sakta. I think I need a break from her. Par main use kuch keh bhi to nahin sakta. Agar use kuch kaha to voh roti hui apne bhai ke paas chali jaayegi. Aur Swayam mere liye sirf mera dost hi nahin, mera bhai bhi hai. Main humari dosti par chance nahin lena chahata. Lekin main Taani ko bhi aur din bardasht nahin kar sakta. Kya karun main Sharon? Tum hi kuch batao." Rey vented out his frustration to Sharon in the Rehearsal Hall.

Sharon turns to look at Rey and quickly notices Taani at the entrance of the Hall. She gives Rey a tiny od to show that Taani has heard what he just said and they could continue their charade. "Rey main Swayam se is baare mein baat kar chuki hoon. Agar tumhara aur Taan ka breakup ho gaya to voh kise support karega? Aur pata haiusne kya kaha? Taani toh meri sagi behen nahin hai, lekin Rey mere bhai se bhi badhkar hai'.

Rey looked at her incredulously. Sharon, yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? Voh Swayamki behen hai. Swayam aisa kaise keh sakta hai?

"Rey, usne jo mujhe kaha, maine tumhe voh hi bataya. Rey, Swayam won't care. Tum break up kar lo. Us ladki se sabko chutkara milega. Mere to sar mein dard ho jata hai every time she calls us down for a GS, AGS, CS, ACS meeting."

"Par Sharon, main kaise karoon? Har baar use milta hoon toh voh mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahin deti"

"Bas use keh do Rey. Voh kar bhi kya sakti ai? Royegi? Bas, itna hi na? Kuch farak nahin padta mujhe. I'm sure tumhe bhi kuch farak nahin padta.

(End Flashback)

Mujhe maaf kar dena Taani. Mujhe yeh karna pada. Main dance aur tumhare beech mein choose nahin kar sakta. Main abhi bhi tumse hi pyaar karta hoon, aur tumse hi pyaar karta rahoonga, lekin tumhe apne aap ko pehle realize karna hoga. Tumhe dhoondhna hoga ki Taani kaun hai. Uski pehchan kya hai? Voh life se kya chahti hai? I'm sorry Taani. Main yeh tumhare bhale ke liye kar raha hoon.' He walked mechanically to his room and collapsed at the foot of his bed, tear streaming down his face. Memories raced through his head. The time he fought for Taani, when she said Shivam was her boyfriend so that he wouldn't get defamed. When she bandaged his injuries, their first date. He kept mumbling, "I'm sorry Taani. I'm sorry. Mujhe maaf kar dena. I'm so sorry. Main tumhe hurt nahin karna chahta tha. I'm sorry" He tired himself out, sobbing and crying and fell asleep with tear tracks coating his face.

I'm back guys! Thanks for the amazing response! Love you all! PMs will go out soon! 3rd chapter is ready! 20 likes at least and you'll get it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice
emotional
waiting for next part

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