Arshi FF #2 - My Imperfect Mr Perfect (Chapter 34 on next thread)

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Sanjana Seth

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Just now came across this story...

Brilliantly written and totally amazing my dear...

I just sooo totally loved the concept of this story!

Now I am eagerly waiting for the file to be opened...

N u have given such clarity to arnav and khushi's characters that it's just superb!

Can u plz pm me for future updates my dear?!

Thank you...

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hydsri

@hydsri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

thanks for sending me the link. Just started reading and have quite some catching to do. please add me to your pm list.

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radhika007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Waiting for the next update

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Just finish reading all the pasrts. It's a beautiful story & the storyline is quite interesting.

The only problem I have is, yeh tumhaari Khushi bohot zyada roti hain. Baat baat pe roti hain. Itna rona - dhona mat karo. Bring in some action.

By the what is with this Shyam ? What is his role in threatening Khushi's life.

This L75, if he want to kill Khushi , like her parents (as he claimed), then why did he left Payal ??? After all if his ultimate mission is wipe out entire Khushi's family, then why leave Payal out of it ?/ She is Khushi's sibling after all.

& why is somebody causing threat to Khushi's life. You need to get on that track as well.

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

beautiful jst read all part thnks for pm

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Brilliant👏

Love Akash here.

Arshi romance is portrayed so beautifully! Khushi tried her best to show uneffected yet couldn't resist his charm. Their spending time with each other and loving every moment is the best.

Now I am eagerly waiting for the file to be opened..This file has the key of hearts .The way you have given such clarity to arnav and khushi's characters simply superb!

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Aww Arshi romance portrayed beautifully! How much Khushi tries she can never really resist him can she? And its not just the physical intimacy, its also talking and spending time with each other and loving that. Thanks for making this love so palpable. Was reminded of Tagore: 'we smiled and talked to each other about nothing and I felt that for this I was waiting long...'

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Amira

@amira039.303

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Hey guys, I'm sorry I'm a little late with the update. The chapter is coming out longer than I expected and I had promised that I will definitely reveal what's in the file in this chapter, so I need a little more time to do that.

I will try my best to finish the update today but if not then I will definitely post by tomorrow.

Sorry for the delay and thanks for your patience.

Love

Amira

Edited by amira039.303 - 10 years ago

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aspatel2

@aspatel2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Nice FF. I really like this mystery parts.

Waiting for next part!

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Nice..
Loved it..
Read all parts in one go...
Amazing ...
Very intriguing...
Waiting for mystery to reveal...
Loved arshi's bond starting from friendship to love..