Arshi FF : Merger Thrd #3 Chp 34 - Pg 86 - 2 Posts - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Caught up with the story after a long time. Superb story. Especially the last few chapters are wonderful!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates..!! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is marvelous writing, I think even this doesnt define how magical the chapters were... Im reading this FF after sometime, and I have stopped commenting on IF due to various real life constraints but I felt mean and selfish to not to appreciate such a lovely update hence this comment :-)

First of all I totally adore this Arhi they have their own share of past demons and other infinite number of problems but they are quite sensible when it comes to dealing with each other I feel... Even though they are going through a phase going against their own perceptions still they are putting a lot of effort to understand each other and convey what they feel trough their actions, they are not shying away from displaying their feeling, if they are like this now I cant imagine how they will be once they confess their feelings! Now the most important part of this update; the debate about love n marriage, I gotta say the whole conversation gave me an insight too! Cauz this 'trust' is something I keep asking from my mother and its one of the major issues I consider when it comes to getting yourself committed to a relationship... So the words you have expressed through nani and Arnav were very very beautiful and honestly it gave me a new direction of thought, since I happened to be a very adamant person when it comes to this topic so thanks a lot 😊

I totally loved mami! I really cant blame nani since I feel she is also one of the victims in this whole ordeal, after all she lost her daughter and she definitely will be biased towards her deceased daughter's plight though she is not aware of the real facts... And I feel like her outburst towards her grandson was a result of all these Im pretty sure she didnt intend to hurt him intentionally. But over all its pretty inevitable everybody has been entangled in their own grief forgetting about the young 14 year old who was suddenly forced to grow up and behave like an adult... It seems like mami always knew Arnav's plight but kept mum fearing about the well being of her family...

Last scene was just out of this world, splendid and etc! Seriously it was written beautifully... Khushi's overwhelming need to absorb the lost 14 year old's deep rooted sorrows and then Arnav's relief at finally after more than a decade someone understanding his state without verbalizing anything. That was just beyond beautiful 👏 Now as devi maiya stated this can be considered as their re birth, still Khushi also has to shed her past and share her pain Im sure it is not that far... An excellent take on the real life issues, a big round of applause for a beyond beautiful update👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for long long update. Loved way khushi understands him and want to be with him. Nice update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well I have goosebumps all over...if I have to praise the update properly then I will have to quote every sentence u ve written...n I don't have that much energy left in me ...so all I can say is it was awesome👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Enjoyed reading different views about love and marriage.

Nani went overboard Everytime. Manorama is a sweetheart. She stood up to Nani to protect arnav. Liked her very much.

Arnav and Khushi in the end.,, finally arnav is grieving for his parents. Hope he reveals everything soon.

Nice chapters. Enjoyed reading all parts. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome and emotional updates
Arnav & khushi in sink with each other and love blooming
I don't understand Nani, why is she so harsh on Arnav and does not want to know the complete truth
Love this akash
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomely written 👏👏
Loved it
Nani i dnt like her but get the point as she is old age she gives more importance to society thrn family
Good tht Mami stood up
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
1st post...

Nani watch and view on arshi and akash guessing
the family dinning moment good

the topic on love and marriage

went arnav knew his family been feeding khushi wrong info
while his patience running low
to confess his family
just making it harder..
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello!! Seriously yaar.. How nicely you have built up this story.. I honestly dont remember the last chapter number I read..or after how long I am here on IF.. but right I read these two latest that you have put up and the feeling of knowing that how lovely this story is going to be that i had that time , seems to have been true.
that was such a plethora of emotions and I didn't want the chapters to end. Really good. Loving where they are right now in this "relationship" .
Eager to read more!!

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