Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7

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pree2605

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Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Superbb one..

Loved both d chpts..

Thnxx fr pm

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Sorry for late comments...still on summer vacation😃

Fabulous chapter with an interesting flashback & cute arshi moment

He is ASR..Arrogant, Stale piece of Raisins...Wow! What a perfect name"👍🏼😆

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Aryancha

@Aryancha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#783

There are so many intertwined stories to Arnav's life. Are their pasts also somewhere connected? Only u can clarify that in the upcoming updates.Loving the growing fondness in both of them for each other.Also that Anjali realised about them even before she met Khushi. Wonderful update😊

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Mukta

@Greys_Anatomy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#784

"There are many who don't wish to sleep for fear of nightmares. Sadly, there are many who don't wish to wake for the same fear."

So true ...nice update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#785

Wow great story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and I really hope everything is going to be ok with arnav and his family soon

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#786

Beautiful update.

Full of arnav Khushi romantic moments. Loved it. He didn't even care that Aman and others could be seeing his little romance. I can feel their emotions too.

He is past full of pain. Now Shyam is out and he going to join his uncle to attack on arnav again. Maybe that's what those men were talking about when Khushi hear them. Hope arnav is prepared this time.

So she is going to meet his nani. How will she escape now.

Looking forward to their dinner date.

Thanks for lovely update.

Thanks for pm too.

Edited by archnahardik123 - 10 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#787

awesome and lovely lovely update...i am in love with both arnav and khushi here...they acting pretty mature here...not like hiding the emotions from each other...both know that they wanted each other but yes wts this pull is called ,they need to pin point that...i am sure soon woh bhee hojaye ga :)...

arnav anjali past painful...so akash such a good friend of arnav that to save him from danger he bought sheesh mehal on his name...and later that enemies of arnav...shyam how he trapped anjali,poor girl...and his truth out within a year...acha hoa...he out of her life soonish..no dragging there...

loved the way u have shown khushi working with colours beautifully :)...every one is impressed and above all arnav care for her and his concern ,beautiful beautiful :)..

the kiss they shared was very passionate...and in the end anjali meeting khushi and talking with her and other end arnav noticing khushi smiles and the red back on her.. :)...awesome awesome...faiqa lovely update dear...enjoyed it loads

not to forget ...arnav bestie already gone..hi sdog saved his life...awee

and mojo ...the great dj...awesome pick of song again :)

Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago