Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharlini

I didn't receive the pm for chapter 4, 😭😭😭glad that I visited the page and found the update. 😊

somehow Italian touch gives the posh feelings. Feel elated that Khushi is half Italian. You know that sounds and behave so sweet. Here Khushi has feelings for Arnav but very reluctant to show or may be she didn't realise much. But Arnav is full on swing to show his likings.
I'm quite shocked that Arnav shouted at Khushi for trying to share his pain. Knowing about his parents death anniversary.Even though he didn't know about khushi's parents, that's a bit harsh. On top of that she was injured on her head. Realised it later and followed her thinking of her safety.
Percap was interesting. Chopper ride. More arshi moments.
Looking forward to it.
Even if you forgot to send pm, I'll track it down.😉


Aww Shalini dear🤗

In red , doesn't he always do that ? He always realizes his mistakes later and feels remorseful later too.Lets see how does he make it it up this time.

In pink, so sweet what you have said and that is why she is different than the other family members.She found a father in Shashi Gupta and seeing Payal she called Garima mother.Here is her story starts and now it will progress and u will see soon who is she?

Yes she is feeling it but she won't accept it and he is feeling hard to resist.He is making her irritate to just to see his effect on her .Very much IPK version but my way.

haha, aww I updated late and didn't send PM to any one including my dear Shalini...muahhh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hararnav

small request... if possible cud u use different colors for past and present pls


I didn't get what do u mean dear...as flashbacks are very less and those are in blue and important dialogues are in orange

What past and What present? Would u plz elaborate a little so I can fix it .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.






awesome...comment Gowtu...love your questions...everything will be answered soon one by one.

Thnx





Haha I think so 😳 😆
I knw u won't reveal a small thing now.. But I ll wait..
Aapko kitni khushi milti hai hum Sab k edge pe rakhke nai !?
Waiae u r r8.. Nai tho mazaa kis baat ki 😳

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Crap Arnav and his foot in the mouth diseasedisease
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats on the new thread dear...
That was once again a superb update from you...
Loved it
and eagerly looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pmohan89

Simply Superb!⭐️

This update is turning this story over a new turf.Khushi's past is cruel.Her father was killed and now that makes sense why she was attached to Sister Mary and all .Her nervousness is attached with her shaky past.Must say Shashi and Garima really took care of her more than real parents.👏

So she saw someone who killed her father?

Yes she saw her father's killer and you really summed up well Khushi's state of mind associated with fear and all.

Shashi really took charge of his situation and made sure that family never come close to raise a finger at her because of property.How cheap society's thoughts are?Really😡

Society and people think and act because they never came out of that narrow minded soch...

Other side Arnav's past with Sheesh Mahal is coming up.Who wants to damage Sheesh Mahal and Him?Some one from his own family.?

hmm...coming updates

Khushi was helping him,but he and his anger.I imagined the whole scene in front my eyes.How scared she must be? Oh Arnav , damn your anger😡

😆 Everyone is so angry at him

I know things will be fine because your Pre-Cap is again hyperventilating 😳 There you again teasing us and we have to wait whole week.Damn this week😡😆

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Thanks for the dedication dear❤️


Thnx Priya😊

Loved ur deep thinking over Khushi and Arnav
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Posted: 10 years ago
Simply amazing👏
Story and it's pace is really appealing.Makes you come back, makes you urge to know what happened to Khushi's childhood, what happened to Arnav's childhood?
Her fear , his fear are so bonded.Her is seeing loved one died and she learnt how to love because she found a great father and a lovable mother.

He saw his loved one died and hated to love or to be love because he didn't find any unconditional love and here comes Khushi.Her touch, her innocence.her unconditional love .

Beautiful flow must say.👏

His anger is just his care for her .He didn't even thought of himself for even a second.

Looking forward to more

P.S. Thnx for the dedication dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

congrts for new thread
tanx a lot to dedication u mk my day
butiful part
i lov khushi n shashi bonding
their bonding remind me my father who left us five years ago
anyway i feel bad for khushi hw arnav react rudely with her
i.want c hw he apologize
precap is asom
waiting for next part
tanx for pm


U R VERY WELCOME SUTAPA😊

awww, so so sorry to hear that Sutapa.Hope time is becoming a healer.

Arnav always hurt her in his anger and then realizes it later.Lets see how will he make it up with her.

Thnx dear always for a lovely comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetydoll32

I feel that khushi's parents murderer and the guy planning something in arnav's absence are the same.. Awesome update dear please update soon..


Thnx Sweety 😊

You will find out in upcoming updates dear.

Thnx for ur time for reading and commenting.Really Appreciate that
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Relatives like these r useless...better people don't have any...it's his money...his choice to give khushi or not...Y poke nose in others lives...

Who is planning against him...

Feeling bad for him n esp khushi...regarding parents issue...khushi is lucky to have such a loving family


Thnx maanmeet😊

Well said dear, what is teh use of relatives if they have only HURT in their plate,but we all have these kinds of ppl around us.

Underlined u will find the reason of it in upcoming updates.

Khushi is really lucky to have parents like Shashi and Garima.

lets see how he manofy her this time


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