~*~Tumhe Dekho Naa~*~ {Fall-Page10} - Page 4

Originally posted by: sweet honey

wonderful cnt wait 2 read ya ova part 😛

thanks😊

Originally posted by: unum ali

Wonderful Promos very interesting

thanks😛

you kow maybe i won't continue this since no one likes it other the three people who read it 😡

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

you kow maybe i won't continue this since no one likes it other the three people who read it 😡

no u have to continue.. i just read it and is wow.. cant wait for u to continue!!!!!

Awesome!! 👏 👏

Plz continue this ff!! Eagerly waiting for the first part!

milly!

ur a wayyyyyyyyyyyy betta writer than me! 😆

keep it up!

kanwer 😳

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

Ya I know it was boring but it was supposed to tell you what her thoughts were and what's gonna come up in front of you hope you like it next part will be longer I'll post it tomorrow since it's gonna be a half day and I'm gonna go see what I got on my report card I know I failed I have know self confidence in me anyways tomorrow.

Great intro and wow it's a half day for me too tomorrow😆

awsome but when are u planning to con it feel so sad and i really love the prologue pls con soon 😛

Tumhe Dekho Naa

Chapter 1

You hear a beautiful tune of a piano play nice and softly then you see a girl standing in the dark in a beautiful black sari that had white beaded work done on it she had dangling white earrings on nothing on her soft bare neck with black/white bangles on her left hand and a white bracelet on the other. Then you see her eyes that had like a light white eye shadow on then you see her lips she which were nice and glossy but she wasn't smiling. Then you see someone coming close to her from the back he had a black suit on with a white shirt under he was smiling he stopped in front of her and you see his face it was ANGAD you still don't see the girls face he wraps his arms around the girls waist brining her their hearts were pounding near each other she put her hands on his chest her eyes were now closed he bought his lips closed her and their warm soft kiss had turned intense soon they broke a part and looked into each others eyes "ANGAD ANGAD GOD DAMN IT" then from the ceiling a bucket full of water fell o his head soaking him wet before you can see the girls face Angad pops up on his bed "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what the hell is wrong with you what are you in my room and why'd you drop the water on me" he said then you see Angad on his bed shirtless in a pair of pajama bottoms wet from head to toe" he said real angry.

"It isn't my fault today we go away to school far far away from here" said a girl in a completely destroyed white mini skirt with a white tube top and a pair of white flip flops.

"Aaliyah ki bachi chup hoja aur abhi isse waqt mere kamre se nikhal jaa warna tu school toh kya zindiki bhi nahin deke ki now out" he said pointing by the door.

"Oh really come on bhai is it a promise or a threat" Aaliyah said with an evil smile on her face she dipped another bucket of water on him and ran out of there.

"AALIYAH YOU ARE SOOOOOO DEAD" he screamed picking up a towel and running behind Aaliyah while drying himself he crabbed Aaliyah from around her waist and picked her up he opened the front door and you see it raining outside "bye bye my sweet little annoying sister" he whispered near her ear then dropped her on the floor went inside and closed the door Aaliyah who was shivering and rubbing her bottom since he dropped her hard then you see three girls standing in front of her one around 13-14 another around 16 and last one 17-18. "Milly, Shaz, Kripa umm hi uhh I'll be right back" she said looking around.

Milly:

Shaz:

Kripa:

Angad:

fine i won't continue this time since i only got one comment from last night 😡