~*~Tumhe Dekho Naa~*~ {Fall-Page10}

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tumhe Dekho Naa

Love is what I have for you

But you don't for me

Will you ever understand

What I don't understand is

Why don't you

Look at you seeing them whether their

Good for you or not

The way you touch them or they to you

Hurts

Look at you telling your friends

I have know meaning in life cause I have no one

Or no one will come to me

It says you'll never be mine

Showing it in front of me that I'm not good for you

Or maybe I don't deserve you

I've never ran behind you

But you would never look back

One day I'll make you run behind me

Making me fall for you

All over again

Love is shown in many ways but love here is completely vain. They look at each other showing love but when you come here your confused whether your meant to be or it was just a mistake. Here are dorms in ever dorm room something happens something that makes you happy or something that hurts you dearly or something shocking that's never supposed to happen or is it. Here people are nice, here people are mad, here peoples are friends, here people are enemies. This is where you come in where you have to chose whether your friends or your enemies. This the world where everything is complicating whether you want it to be or not but this is where you go through life testing yourself whether this is right or not. Here everything is used for perception never deception.

Here is a story about two individuals who have nothing to do with each other but are sworn enemies. Here is a story about to individuals who fall at school at school learning how you have to suffer life with each other no matter how much you hate each other but you still have to face life. Here is a story about Angad and Kripa two individuals who learn to be friends instead of enemies.

Prologue: Page Four

Promo One: Page One

Promo Two: Page Two

Chapter One: Page Six

Chapter Two: Page Ten

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Attention

My new ff I will post one long part every week there will be no character analysis because every character will be explained in the story.

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab starting!!!!!!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo One

You see a guy walking down an empty hallway he opened a door and saw a girl hugging her knees sitting on her bed crying she looked up you still don't see her face but you could tell she was crying like forever the guy looked at her and gave up an evil smirk "see I told you don't mess with me or else I'll crush you and look at what your in now" he said "I hate you how could you do that to me I trusted you" she said in a low tone.

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice promo.. i cant wait till u put ur LONG part for this week.. or is it next.. o well
continue eseoooooooooooooonn..

wonder wat angad did to krpa..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachandeep

fab starting!!!!!!! continue soon 👏

thank you
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

nice promo.. i cant wait till u put ur LONG part for this week.. or is it next.. o well
continue eseoooooooooooooonn..

wonder wat angad did to krpa..

wow was it that obivous that angad did something to kripa anyways thanks😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 fanfc i cant wait till u continue and i hope angad dint do nuthin anyways keep it up and good luck fro the next part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome promo!

cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo Two

You once again see that same girl crying in front of three dead bodies once again her eyes were red except they were worst the before next to her was a guy and a girl who were also crying "its all because of you I hate you I promise I'll make your life a living hell I'll destroy you completely for taking away the people I loved the most I promise I won't leave you one thing that makes you happy or even smile."

Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago

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