~*Dhoom Machale*~Chap 4 Pg 28 - Page 14

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

umm how am i ment 2 knw where u r...i cant c where every1 is 😆😆😆ur probably at home planning on how 2 make angad fall 4 u or else at the beautician😆😆😆j/k found a place 4 u but 4 that u have 2 wait 2 or 3 more partshmmm shuld be funny

heheh very funny! 😆 lol ok ill wait.....ab jaldi se update kar😡 lol😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

~*Chapter 3: She's a Devil Continued~*

Kripa looks down at her top in anger while Angad stares at her gorgeous face.

K: (furiously) OMG this is my favourite top

A: (dreamily) Your soo beautiful

K: (shouts) WHAT

Angad comes out of his dreamworld and the rest of people in the airport look at them.

Kripa shouts at the person next to her " what the hell you looking at man MYOB (mind your own business) you idiot. The guy just walks away from there and the rest start doing there own thing thinking that she's mad.

Angad was like "this girl has temper but she's hot"

K: oye you tramp are you gonna apologize or not…I don't have all day you know

A: What am not gonna apologize it was your fault so you're the one who needs to apologize

K: (pointing at him) no it was your fault

A: (pointing at her) your fault

K: your fault you idiot

A: no yours

K: your not gonna apologize like this…wait a minute I'll come back

A: I have better things to do other than wait for you

K: I said a minute for godsake not a year

A: (grumpily) okay but only a minute

Kripa walked of to the caf and Angad was like with. One minute later Kripa came back with two cups of coffee. When she was 3 foots away she acted like she tripped on something and spilled the two cups on Angads shirt. Kripa started smiling like crazy while Angad was angry.

K: oops I must have tripped on something

A: what the f****** hell..you did that on purpose

K: aww I didn't know that you were smart enough to notice that

A: (angrily) why the hell have you done that for?

K: (equally angry) I told you to apologise for ruining my favourite top but you didn't so I was just settling scores here but seems like I haven't finished setting my scores coz that shirt doesn't mean anything to you. Don't Ever Mess With Kripa Sharma or else you'll regret it Understand. your lucky coz I wont be able to finish settling my scores with you.

A: erm did you say your name is Kripa sharma

K: no I said my name is Hitler…duh my name is Kripa sharma

A: (thinking) if you're the Kripa Sharma I know then you're like Hitler.

A: Kripa, Aaliya Khanna's friend innit

K: Ya why…are you the driver but I thought the drivers were meant to have special uniform

A: am no f***ing driver..Angad Khanna Aaliya's brother

K: omg you are Angad Khanna…nah man don't believe it I know Angad…he used to be so fat (Kripa looks at him up and down) nah no way

A: Oh god I really am…u want me to prove it

K: umm what did I used to call you

A: Over-Fatiyicshuubiesh I can never forget that…its used to be soo annoying

K: omg I cant believe that its you

A: well I can believe its you...you have not changed one bit

K: But you changed soo much…anyways can we go now I'm tired of standing here and yeah your not lucky anymore…since we will be living in the same house…oooh beware Angad

"OMG am dead" Angad thought. It was not like he was scared of girls or like that but Kripa was different. They went to the car park and Angad took out his car keys.

Note

i knw i havent lived up 2 my preview. I was gonna make this part longer but i hav 2 go (again seems lyk weneva i start writing a part 2 this i always hav 2 go somewhere ugghh) i hav this basketball thing 2day. as usual waitin 4 ur comments n hav no idea wat the next parts called yet.

Umm i am gonna start a new ff on christmass. i have 3 idea in my head and i can only write 1 so i'll put the concept here and u can choose wich 1 i shall cont (they all consist angad, kripa, sujal, kashish😆)

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part!!! kripa will annoy angad haha..... 😆 ..and kripa dropping the coffee on angad was funny...lmao.. 😆 ...cotn soon 😛
Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part n the nickname that kripa gave 2 angad is so big n funny
nice part
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
2 good gr8 part... 👏 ..kripa annoyng angad...nice...n continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 heheh very goood part!! lol kripa was so funny 😆 lol poor angad 😭 lol cool part cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome prt plz cont soon poor angad 😭 kripa 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
haha that was halarious! I loved how Kripa spilled 2 cups to set scores with him 😆 . Cant wait for the next part, cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part..
ooo.. beware!!lolzz

cotninue sooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: erier101

gr8 part!!! kripa will annoy angad haha..... 😆 ..and kripa dropping the coffee on angad was funny...lmao.. 😆 ...cotn soon 😛

tnx😆😆😆

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