arshi 5 shot: There's always a twist darling

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Arshi 5 shot : there's always a TWIST darling

Shot 1

Seeing her 11 year old baby sister sobbing akaash ran to comfort her.

Akash :baby what happened .why are u crying dear?

Khushi: (showing him a book,still crying) this say that by too much care sia( the female lead of the book) becomes very arrogant and to teach him the value of life her brother marries her to a poor man and sends her away from him forever.

When I'll grow up ,will u do the same with me?

Akash : (hugging khushi tightly)haww I will marry my princess to a prince .He will be the best of all .he would be even richer than us.

Khushi: but u will send me away?

Akash: no never u will always stay with me .the boy can come and stay here but my doll will never ever go away from me.

Khushi: promise.

Akash:pakka promise.

Khushi:her brother blocks her credit cards too.

Akash: ( smiling) but darling u don't have credit cards .

Khushi: I want them.

Akash:okay u will get them tomorrow.

Khushi: golden shinning one.

Akash: I will give u a platinum one.

Khushi: no its not beautiful .i want golden one .

Akash :okay golden one.

Akash received a phone call and was about to answer when

Khushi: dada I promise I will never become bad ,I will talk politely with every one so plzzz never send me away from u .

Akash: I will never send u away .princess u are the only one in my life ,dad has given me ur responsibility ,I will never let u go away from me.

Akash hugged her sister and kept hugging her till he heard her snores .

Akash was the heir of Gupta empire , one of the greatest empires of the world .His mother died at the time of khushi s delivery and her father was got himself busy with his business to get distracted ,so at the age of just 7 akash became khushi's mother .After an year his dad too died in an accident and so they two were left for each other.

There business was handled by akash dad's best friend harsh raizada .He was a very honest man and was waiting for akash to grow up and take over his business.

Time passed in a blink .Akaash became the most successful businessman of india . His protectiveness towards khushi had changed into possessiveness ."See my girl and u are dead" became his motto .He was very wise in business but when it comes to her sister he was the most ruthless.

...today her sister had completed her 12 and had to go to USA for further studies .

Khushi: (hugging him) dada u promised u will never send me away from u .but now u are breaking ur promise

Akash: princess the best college for u is there. I promised mom to give u the best .do u want me to break mom's promise and make her upset?

Khushi:never

Akash:doll its matter of few years and then u will be back with me .we will together take dad's business to new heights ,and then I will never let u go anywhere.

I took ur care for years when u will be back then u would have to take my care.

Khushi: (sobbing) I'll miss u.

Akash:I will visit u every weekend.

Khushi:I will be alone there.

Akash: no will never be alone . Arnav will be their for u .

Arnav was akash s best friend and harsh's son. He was a very intelligent and fun loving guy .2 years ago he shifted to usa and established his business there .now his business had an annual turnover of millions. Akash trusted him a lot .

Khushi :u are doing the same as sia's brother.

Akash: (hit her head lightly )pagal.

Accha don't bother arnav much .behave at his house and if u need anything ask him .okay.

Khushi:okay .

With that they reached the airport and khushi headed for us.

a/n:hope u all liked it.

for pm buddy me.





INDEX:

SHOT 1: Pg 1

SHOT 2: Pg 7

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sahanamurugesh thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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nic shot..waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting...hope Akash doesnt beat Arnav for falling for Khushi...
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Originally posted by: sahanamurugesh

nic shot..waiting for next update


thankyou

will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow sounds intrstng
Loved the starting
Awww aakash loves khushi so much
So protective

Cnt wait for arshi encounter

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjs

interesting...hope Akash doesnt beat Arnav for falling for Khushi...



thankyou

umm for that ...u will have to wait for next part😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Wow sounds intrstng
Loved the starting
Awww aakash loves khushi so much
So protective

Cnt wait for arshi encounter

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling



thankyou dear

my loyal reader😊

will give it very soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excellent and cute start! Something tells me that all promises are going to be broken 😆
Waiting for the next shot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod

Excellent and cute start! Something tells me that all promises are going to be broken 😆

Waiting for the next shot.


thankyou😊

i too think that promises are meant to be broken.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mika17

Awesome start to ur story



thankyou dear

love u.

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