Arshi New FF - 'One in a Million' - chp 1 - 11/7 uptd

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Brishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Looking forward to how you present this topic. Thanks for the PM.

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shalbi

@shalbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

the entire update was past, I mean before the baby is born..

it actually gave a very clear picture that arshi is so in love couple..

Liked reading the facts of the kid in the womb..

Continue soon

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: shalbi
the entire update was past, I mean before the baby is born..
it actually gave a very clear picture that arshi is so in love couple..

Liked reading the facts of the kid in the womb..

Continue soon

The baby is yet to be born.

it is in the present. flashback is abt past.

tks for ur comments dear.

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: brishti84
Looking forward to how you present this topic. Thanks for the PM.

thank u bristi for ur loving interest.
it will go fwd on the kids struggle and we see thru the parnets eyes abt reality what all challenges they face in society with the child around .

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Thank u all for liking this story.

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Anonymous_K

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Thank you so much for PMing the link to this marvelous fiction else I would've missed the joy of reading such a beautiful fiction.
The concept is unusually exquisite with a deep abyss of emotions.
Chapter 1 itself was a roller-coaster ride of emotions for me especially the way the chapter began, I started doubting Arnav's role here as an indifferent and careless husband, rather father but as the story progressed further it had my heart-wrench at Arnav's predicament. But I'm glad how it ended with a moment of bliss.
So, Khushi is 9 months and 2 weeks pregnat.. Uh-oh!! This had me curious. Can this be the possible reason why Arjun will be a special child??
Anyways, a fantastic beginning!
I'm certainly looking forward as to how this story will progress further.
Do update soonish!

Regards
K

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

nice prologue... Hmmm.. Special persons... Waiting for the story to unfold... !!!

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Aaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

chapter-1 its different.. They are love couple.. First i was confused about arnav's character but You depicts the character well.. !! The most awaited baby... !!