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Chapter 3 :

Can Stones Cry????

Kushi was recollecting yesterday's event how Arnav had proposed to her.. She recollected his foot being hurt on the process while he climbed the temple which was on the mountain to bring the Marutis Saffron..

Though Kushi pushed him off and came she was in her thoughts thinking about him and missing him very badly..

She was crying very badly..She couldn't control her tears.. It was night at 9 .. she got a call from Ashram..Suman Aunty called.. Kushi beta we have planned for a trip to near by beach ..Do u want to come ? She asked..

Kushi thinks for a while and says Yes..

The reason .. She wanted to move away from Arnav and his haunting thoughts and acts.. She just wanted to run away where no body could find her.. She thought this would be a try and he will not hound her..

She slept in little bit peace after the call and bit of sobbing.. But dint realise when she slept.. The alarm rang at sharp 5 am..She woke up and in hustle bustle she took her hand bag and walked out of her home informing her Aayi that she is headed to Ashram..

The securities were sleeping .. as they never dreamt that Kushi would leave the house very early when it was still dark..

She took an Auto from the nearby Stand and reached the Ashram..All her friends including Suman aunty welcomed her with whole heart and all shared their happiness and love and excitement with their hugs... Yes All the elders loved this kido as their own...

They had hired a bus and they were leaving to Ganpati Hule Beach...

***

Arnav was in his room.. He was pacing from this end to that end .. not knowing how to convice Kushi and win her back.. He was angry on himself.. He had hope that he will win her back. By hook or crook.. No.. not his time as he dint want to play .. He wanted to be real.. as he loved her immensely with whole heart..

He some how managed to close his eyes thinking for a new day.. the next day..

***

He was sound asleep...he heard a voice say by 6 am.. Arnav wake up.. pls wakeup.. U need to travel to Kolhapur for the meeting..U asked to wake me up and finally still sleeping..

Oh..Kushi.. Pl stop it na.. I want to sleep and he pulled her hands and she fell on him ..Arnav dint let her loose .. he hugged her and brushed his lips on hers while his eyes were shut.. That was the only way he could shut her nonstop chatter box wife.. He kissed her lips with his passionately and she was pushing hard to get rid of him .. from his firm gripped clutches. But as every day routine she failed.. She and he ended up making love ... and she running to washroom for second round of bath.. as she had to be in pooja..Arnav opened his eyes.. cooing ..Kushi Kushi..

He opened his eyes and found nobody around.. He hands were hugging her pillow ...He rubbed his eyes for better vicinity.. No..Nobody was around..Oh.. it was dream..early morning dream.. he thought that early morning dreams will come true..he chuckled himself and went to the washroom for his bath..

While walking.. he wanted to feel the fresh air .. he went near the window.. Suns rays were peeping thru the window.. A small stripe fell on his face.. it was 6 in the morning.. The sun was moving slowly.. It was orangish.. The big one..It was a very beautiful scene...

He prayed to the Sun God that .. he wish to have his gal by his side forever.. he saw the sun and he was boosted and fully charged..

Sun ..yes..Sun they say Sun has four characteristics.. By Name he was the male ..But by the personality Sun has the females characteristics.. Yes.. Patience, clarity , Anger and Shyness.. these were the features of the Sun..He rose in the morning..he burnt in the afternoon.. he set in the evening.. finally disappeared as the moon started its way to soothen the night..

Sun was very patient in the morning early hours.. He was very clear in the sky by 9am.. Angry and burning in the noon time..Finally by the dusk he was Shy and trying to settle in the sky...

The Sun so bright and clear can he be wrong in any event.. All humans or living things do commit mistake..Can the Sun rise and set in one place..Normally the saying is "the sun rises in the east and sets in the west" .. But sin rising and setting in the same direction is it possible.. Or say if the sun was clear and patient , Angry and Shy..why and how can it have the contrast characteristics with in itself ..

The Sun rise and Sun set in India we can see in one location..It is the Kanya Kumari.. Where the Sun rises from the Sea in the morning and he sets in the same place in the evening.. My Sun here Arnav though Strong and Clear and patient how did he loose track or go wrong...Yes he went wrong in one area...

Kanya Kumari.. also meant as Virgin and Pure Lady..This is the place where Parvati prayed for Lord Shiva to be her husband.. It is the place where the Indian Ocean, Arabian Sea and the Pacific Ocean Meet.. It is other wise called the Cape comerin..Trisangam.. where three water beds meet..

Kanya..also called as Su- Kanya.. Pure Virigin Gal.. can she be blamed as A -Su- Kanya - Impure.. is it possible.. If so how should the Husband or protector of her protect..Arnav was the Sun here. He was to protect her..but dint ..what had happened.. in mid.. that both had to split...

*****

Arnav came out of the washroom ..He has been calling everyday morning to check if Kushi was safe around..She was not picking the calls though..

The Phone after several tries dint go thru.. it was giving the message as it is not available.. Arnav gets angry .. and tries the securities.. They wake up from their small nap by the contionous phone rings..After getting shouts from Arnav they go in disguise as milk wala and news paper wala to run through where was Kushi..

They were clueless..Arnav is now worried a lot.He put on his Jacket and took his keys and started the engine of the car.. He rushed into the car and was rushing all over pune.. like a mad guy..

It was now 4 in the evening... No clues about Kushi.. Arnav was literally in tears.. he had got Kushis landline Tapped.. But for his bad luck no calls or trace about Kushi.. It was 5 in the evening .. Kushi calls her Ayi to inform that They were returning the next day..

The securities inform Arnav the message and the where abouts of Kushi..She was in GanpatiPule beach in Pune.. He makes his way to reach her to the beach..

He reaches by 5:30 pm. In the evening.. Suman Aunty and all other mates with Kushi are having fun time..Kushi was having very good time.. yes.. Why shouldn't she.. She has been crying all the nights after the incident..I think this was the time when she had laughed out loud in many years.. She was playing with the kids and enjoying and happy as ever.. She was back to her innocent days.. They played Chuppa ..Chuppi.. She had her Gol kappes..She played her beach volley ball.. She was back to her smiling days with out any barrigade drawn..Slowly the Sun started setting.. and in the dusk slowly the clouds became darker.. The Moon arrived with fellow mates Stars and twinking..Kushi and her friends sat there and were watching the setting Sun..

Arnav was watching like the Tiger hiding behind the bushes for waiting to catch its prey.. Did he succeed.. Kushi and her friends made their way back to hotel by long walk on the shore.. she enjoyed the breeze and the water hitting her legs slowly and her duppata flying in many direction and she trying to catch hold of it.. The hair locks flying all over..The gaze of the wind kissing her cheeks and sending a chill in her body.. She and others were enjoying.. They selected a lonely spot where not much of people were aroud.. Kushi was relaxing her mind too and finally after campfire enjoyment she dozed off.. waiting for the next day ..

*****

Though her eyes rested for sleep was she able to sleep in the night.. No .. she was wobbling and her thoughts were wriggling of the pain caused by him.. She was crying... but slowly.. that non could hear...

Can Stones Cry ???

Was her un heard cry of the strong feeling less heart similar to the one of the cry of the feelingless stone story of Shirin and Barkats - Love story where the sculpture only remained to share their Love story as of today...

I guess so.. Let me share..

The Chisle's Sound of a Sculptor..

This is a country where the Perfumes are produced where there is not a single bit of water. It is rich in Petroleum and dates. Filled with deserts and sanddunes.. In that country too there were the flowers and a big green garden..But it was not the common mans .. it was the Kings..

Yes.. The king ..His Name was Kusru Parvez..he was the king of Arab Country.. He woke up daily and saw his innocent,nave,beautiful daughters face every body before even God..

The kings Proud Asset was Shirin .. his daughter.. Shirin was very pretty and Gorgeous.. The king made all the facilities for her Inside the palace itself.. She was sixteen..The king built a garden inside the palace for her to play ball along with her friends ..the servants.. When the sun saw its dusk .. she and her friends came outside and played in the garden..The Garden though had flowers , plants and trees the king felt that it was not fully done.He calls the sculptor and requests to sculpt some good statues allover to make the garden more beautiful..

Here comes the sculptor Barkath.Our Story Hero..His work was unique and different .He made the Stones talk..He made the birds Chirp..he made the fishes swim..he made the parrots talk..he made the statues dance and sing..

Since in the day time It was hot Barkath used to come in the dusk and work all thru the night till dawn.. so he dint get tired and sweat in the burning heat. He works were one in a billion and the true word for Art..

One day it was by 6 Shirin came to the garden.. She tells her friends instead of playing with the feather ball why don't we play with the flower ball..All accept and they pluck all the flowers from the garden and tie into a garland..Shirin goes to one particular plant and tries to pluck the flowers.. But she is not able to..She reaches it but cannot catch it .. From far her father sees and approaches.. he starts laughing at her daughters jump and trial for the flowers..She asks her Dad.. Oh Daddy why are u laughing .. can u pl explain the message after this..He explains saying that it is the feeling less flowers carved on the stone..It is so real that all think it is true..

She was amazed by the work and asks her whose work it is .. He answers it is Barkaths. As soon as she hears the name Barkath she gets a chill and unknown happiness all through the heart..

She wanted to meet the life giving sculptor.She came to garden daily evening by 5..but he ended up coming by 6 or 7..One fine day by evening 6 as usual she came and was stunned to see her figure in the mirror.. Yes the before day Barkath had seen her foot print so unique and different from the group of other foot prints he carved a statue resembling Shirin.. Shirin was standing next to her statue and wondering the reality of the sculptor and work of art..

Barkath enters as it was 7 pm.. He sees how there are two of the gals. I did one and one more is it a ghost or so.. He comes closer and wants to feel the real one and the reel one..He touches the real one ..and gets a different feeling in his body..

Their eyes met.. Their feelings also met..They fell in love.. They met daily in the evenings.. Their Love story developed.. It reached the ears of the King.. He told his daughter to forget him..She says he is my oxygen and my life.. How can I forget him.. Barkat was prisoned.. the king had hurt him the other day on his shoulder when he found out..He woke up in the cell after gaining consciousness with a pain on his shoulder and memory of his love..

Each cell and the brick of the kingdom was made of the warriors of the country..On each persons death a stone was marked on his name and the kingdom was constructed.. When the people of The country came to know the truth they stood against the King for releasing Barkath ..The king knew that he cannot win against the people strength..They say all the kings have this super plan under them where they show the other side of their face.. yes this king though portrayed a kind and gentle face.. he did have the wicked and cruel side too..

On one occasion he called Barkath and Shirin in the peoples court and said that he can marry Shirin...but you have to fight.. The king did have a trick..underneath..Barkath took the sword and asked the king whom do he fight..The king says it is not the fight between two rival countries but it is ur fight with ur work of art .. Our country doesn't have water even a small drop.No rains..Only drought through out the year..

You have to carve and dig as single man with no help the Pesudan Mountain ..behind that is the pesudan river.. If you dig the mountain we will get water.. and all of us can live.. Barkath nor Shirin didn't understand the trick behind the plan..The king was a btd as thought..By the time he digs and finds the way he would have been dead ..he thought so..

Shirin kisses Barkath and says to fight.. and gives him courage to fight.. for their love.. Did he do so.. Yes.. Barkath started hitting the mountain with his chisel and hammer.. When ever he was tired he thought the life and smiling face of Shirin and got energised.. He carved the mountain..What did he carve.. was it plain or what did he do..He carved every where Shirins smiling face in different postures and expressions..he was living more day by day..he dint have any food .. They say the sound of the chisel and hammers meet was echoing as SHIRIN SHIRIN.. yes.. his love gave him so much courage and her innocent smiling face gave so much confidence he found the way and he dug a path towards the river..

The king got agitated.. He did one more plan..he arranged a old lady.. the old lady wen to Barkath and yelled from outside.. Barkath ..Barkath.. He dint reply.. Finally the old lady went near Barkath and said.. Hey Idiot what are you doing here.. Shirin Is no more and she reached heaven one month back..

Barkath was agitated by hearing this.. He couldn't and didn't want to live in this world anymore.. he took the chisel and hammer and started hitting on his heart very hard.. Yes.. he etched on his heart.. each and evey hit .. he died at the next moment uttering Shirins name till his last breath..

Yes..Barkath did carve a Statue of her for his love..he did carve a mountain full of her faces and found a way to reach the river .. He did carve the Pesudan mountain..finally he did carve and hit his own heart at the last moment with his own hands with this chisel and hammer and did carve a epic story ... for many hearts..

Shirin was living in the kingdom thinking that Barkath will come one day to marry him..

Finally she also died in the process of her fathers betrayal for her love..

*****

The cry of the mountain or stone or sculpture and Kushi's stone heart - crying were they similar..

I felt so.. they are similar..she has cried now for so many years that her heart has become numb and strong day by day..

Now she was the hard core.No more she was the sensitive and obedient.. She was strong and free.

****

The next day... early morning she came out of the hotel and went to beach to feel the breeze.. and the wind..

She forgot the time.. It was 9 am.. Some kids were playing with pails and spades..They were making sand castles..

Even Kushi Joined them.. She was playing with them building sand castles..

She was playing with the water reaching the shore .. dipping her legs inside the beach end.. when the waves came to her legs for touching she came running to the shore..She was happy then ever..

Now Arnav comes and holds her hands..Kushi was thinking that she would have some peaceful days without his interference.. But no.. he was there ..

She was happy for a moment inwardly but dint show..her heart was aching..but mind was controlling.. she listened to her mind.. he says..Kushi pls..listen..give me one more chance..Pls.. she ignores.. him.. royally..

From nowhere a guy in the horse comes..She moves the kids aside the sand castle saving the kids.. The horse destroys the sand castles and disappears far away..

She looks at Arnav and says .Our love was like this Sand Castle..It was not for permanent time..Our past marital life was like the building with no strong foundation.. Only the walls and roof was there.. if the foundation was week then the entire building had to crumple and fall down.. Ours was so Arnav... Like this sand castle.,,the main word called as TRUST , FAITH AND BELIEF..

She showed her foot prints near the shore.. A wave came and erased the foot prints and went ..she showed that too.. Yes.. my print or memories in ur life or the memories you in my heart are like this..With one wave . ...it erases and it has already erased the impression ..

He stood there still... She turned to see the kids.. the next moment she turned to see Arnav .. Arnav had disappeared .. after sometime ..says 30 mins she hears a sound calling Kushi from up ...from the sky .. It was Arnavs.. He was in a chopper.. He had hired a chopper ..The chopper disappeared..behind that was

.. A WHITE COLORED DUST WITH ALPAHABETS OR WORDS .. SAYING..

**** I LOVE YOU KUSHI !!!! WILL YOU MARRY ME AGAIN ??? *****

This was his new Proposal for her up in the Sky...She was surprised from underneath .. but felt pity for Arnav.. She couldn't control anymore.. She waved from down asking him to join him down with her..

He did come down with a very positive eager ness..She uttered a reply though..She was silent..She dint yell at him.. She dint slap him..she dint hit him..

Did she hug him..Did she cry a lot..

No My Kushi was now like the Stone , the mountain, the Wave..the lighter one?? No she was the strong tide and the Storm.. She was the heavy current and the cyclone..She was the lightning and the thunder.. She was the dark clouds..bringing heavy rains..

She loved the clear sky.. But she liked the clouds..

Yes his proposal to was like that only.. Each Alphabet was like a small and scattered group of clouds.. After some time.. did they Join or it got scattered more...Or since it was the dust in the air it disappeared and dissolved and mixed with the air..

It disappeared actually.. But the work of art in the sky of the different and unique proposal remained in her heart though..

She did say silently that she rejected and hated him to the core and walked a head ..Standing tall... like the china wall..

Arnav was he disappointed ?? or he was agitated.. or did he become numb like the Pesudan Mountain..where he had sculpted only her sculputres as undying memories in his Undying heart or the try for Yielding her again in the feeling less heart to bring in colors..

Time will tell...

To be contd...

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Chapter 4

RAMA'S AGNIPARIKSHA .

Kushi was in her room.after that day she dint want to go out of the house for sometime.it was the weekend. She was helping her mom with the house hold chores and her dad with his filing.Aju was sitting near the window and trying to concentrate and read the bagavad gita.

Kushi after her work she climbed the stairs to go to her room.gauri came in and hugged from her behind.Kushi was in awe and shock would be less of a word. After the dark incidents which happened in the past she has been scared for a while even a person touches her.here gauri hugged her from behind and Kushi shouted as some new feel or touch of other hindered her body to feel sensitive and shocked.

She gained her consciousness and wanted to give back at gauri for scaring her.but she dint. Kushi finally came to her senses and hugged gauri back.gauri,how are u?she questioned.im fine said gauri.and she started , i know Kushi what had happened .im sorry and i have come here to take u out from this miseryand pain.not sure how it is gonna help but i want to try to be supportive and try to erase some of the pain.

Gauri started telling, we are going on a trip to shakleshpur.only me and few of our college frineds. Priya and pooja are too coming.pl join.she pestered. Kushi thought it would be a good change for her and accepted the offer.The next day Kushi got ready early in the morning and left with gauri and friends.she changed her mobile number and gave a new sim to her parents too, since she knew that Arnav would trace her where ever she was.

They left to sakleshpur.it was more than a days ride.train and bus.finally they reached sakleshpur. A big tempo traveller was waiting to pick them up. Gauri and team they had booked a estate bungalow. The bungalow had many rooms and typical mountain side kinda houses. The art form on the walls , the plants surrounding the house , a private hut for night dinner, the house being situated in centre of the farm house and at the middle of the mountain, surrounded by thousands and thousands of trees.

Kushi was very happy and hugged gauri with a tear in her eyes. They reached in the evening hours. By 5pm it was already dark. Kids and people from work they were returning to their homes. The place was very peaceful by 7pm.Kushi got into one of the rooms and got herself ready with in no time. She clipped her hair and wore a t shirt and a jean with her canvas on her legs ,she took a shawl and covered herself and came out with her slr. To click some pics.while she stepped out gauri noticed her face full of happiness. She called up and conveyed to Garima that Kushi was happy here.

Gauri insisted that she would come with her. But Kushi rejects and says i will explore alone.im going too far.im here near by with in the estate. I want to see the trees and plants and feel the breeze and see the fireflies.please she insisted and started to walk a head.she was wearing her monkey cap and her gloves.yes it was very chill by seven.not to many houses ..sorry too many huts near by.only the rich here can afford estates and bungalows.they were called the coffee planters.

She started to walk inside the estate. Everywhere coffee plants and silver oaks with Jack fruit trees.. Full of Lush Greenery. On the silver oaks were the Pepper plants and the Vanilla creepers.The coffee plant was holding its berries.She was clicking on the bees on the Jackfruit.The monkeys ooh.. aah sound were giving her company saying ..we are here ..u are not alone so don't worry we are here to safeguarad u.She went near the Dahlia plants and smelling the fragrance.The people staying In hut were looking amused.she waved her hand .saying hi .. the little kids waved back..She started getting little bit deeper into the forest. It was foggy and chill passed all over. Cars in the road were crossing with their loud honks an fog and flash lights on indicating that we are here and are travelling.

She was inside the fogs and checking on the leaves.The dew drops from previous days rain on the leaf.. She took a single leaf and tasted the water. It quenched her thirst.Drop by drop.She was taken aback now.She was down memory lane with her honey moon trip to Darjeeling.How she hugged Arnav and slept the whole night because of cold.

She saw the trees and tears started pouring from her eyes.The Color green they say it is for fertility.That is why the Hartaalika fast is done based on Green as theme.The Trees are strong .compared to God .where the Hubby is equal to God.Here Arnav was the tree .Kushi was his branches.She was carrying his seed when that horrible incident happened.

The tree bears the flowers , they turn to fruits, finally the fruits after drying turn to seeds and again after planting forms new gen trees..Not only that the birds, animals, insects,other organisms ..for these The Tree was the protector and gave shelter without any expectation.I used to think what if greenery was not there.what would have happened to the human race. Can they survive?They cannot.

Kushi always thought Arnav was her Banyan Tree or Kalpavriksha tree.Where her wishes came true for having a baby.Kushi and Arnav were like that .becuase of the branches the tree got its beauty and more appealing.The Tree Arnav here was huge.But his heart was not so. She was into him like the fluid inside the body of the tree giving life to the tree. But somehow it dint work.

She now crossed the road and went to the other side of estate.It was 7.30pm.It was utter dark. She was leaning on tree and tears were coming out of her eyes without her knowledge.

From nowhere two strong hands came and hugged her.She felt something on her body was strange and a new sensation but a known sensation and opened her eyes.She was that person .Whom she hated to the core.Standing in front of her and caged her with his wide strong chest. She opened her eyes and with a broken voice yelled.Arnav leave me, I need to go..Leave me Arnav.He caged her and dint leave her.

Arnav uttered..No Kushi, Im not leaving you. I will not leave you forever.She slapped him and started hitting him on his chest.Leave me u idiot. Im gonna yell.she gave a warning and was about to yell..he cupped and closed her mouth with his hands and pinned on the tree.She couldn't take it anymore.She bit with her strong teeth and left a temp mark on his hand. He squealed in pain but dint leave her.

How dare you touch me.Leave me I Said .. she yelled.he dint bother , ignored completely and was about to open his mouth and utter, She gave a knock on his man hood with her right leg and got herself released and was about to walk further. He screeched in pain ,but caught hold of her wrist tightly not letting her go this time.

She started yelling as HELP HELP..PL SOME BODY HELP ME..

The winds they say they carry messages in fairy tales ..but this is not a fairy tale.it was real .Her Yelling was it confided to the current location ..Do the winds whisper ??Were the wind whispering with the trees or did it carry the message..

Not sure.. But in the past ..some thing ..relating to Wind.. or say Something bad .. it did travel more than a whisper but like a FIRE..

****

Yes they say one small spark of matches will spread the fire in the whole forest and destroy the whole forest , like wise one small spark of gossip or blame or shame ,the news will spread like wind all over and spread like fire to the whole world.

I can relate to one story here..The good news to travels in the wind like fire.The Bad news travels like a bomblast ..burning the entire area in one sec.

*****

KAMBAR( KAMBAN)THE POET - WAS HE AN ASSASSIN ?

The story is from 12 century. Kambar is great tamil Poet.He learnt Tamil and Sanskrit .They say he is from a lower caste but due to his knowledge and poetic talent he was made the Palace poet..Raja Kuzhothunga Cholan was the king. In the kings court Kambar reinged the kingdom with his wise knowledge and poetic skills on everything lived and non lived.

He was welcomed with Royal treatment and made the MAIN POET IN THAT KINGDOM AND treated with all respect as how a king was treated. He wrote VALMIKI RAMAYAN in Tamil and Sanskrit .In TN we follow Kambar Ramayan..They say next to Thirukural and Silapathi karam ,Kamba Ramayanam took place and served as the nectar world wide on Tamil epics.

He was shining like a star.He had a son ..He was also not less than father.He was called AMBIKAPATHY.When Kambar had gone out to stage his Ramayan ,his son was appointed as the teacher by

Knowing his talents ,he was asked to teach the princess AMARAVATHY the language and meanings . He was her teacher.. But instead of learning the poetry they learnt FALLING IN LOVE. Their eyes met , their lips sang, their body danced, they sang together the song of love in the air.

Kambar came to know that they both were in love. HE SAW THEM TOGETHER AND PICTURISED THEM AS RAMA AND GEETHA AND CALLED THEM GEETHA RAMAN.. They were the Godly pair. Yess they were the Godly pair according to him.He warned his son to stay away till things settle. But no .. he said ,father im not doing anything wrong and we are in love.We need ur blessing.

The king came to know about this thru Otta Koothar. He was also a poet in the kings court. But not as talented as Kambar.He laid eyes on Amaravathys love for Ambikapathy.The king came to Princess room to check if his news was it true. Ambikapathy was singing about the beauty of Amaravathy, describing about her and her love towards him..The kings understands what he was and how he was falling in love. Kambar comes in time and saves his son , giving a new meaning for the verse which he sang some time back.

How ever the king waited for sometime to know the truth. He was sent faraway. Ambikapathy had a twin sister called Kaveri.She was made as the princess support - domestic help. She was a look like of Ambika pathy. Amaravathy was very happy and she started sending messages to her lover thru his sister.

They did the Twelfth night act here. Ambikapathy came in disguise as Kaveri and saw one day night and met Amaravathy.They were in love.The king got a hunch and came and saw Ambikapathy instead of Kaveri. He got angry and was sent to prison ..Kambar pleaded .Not a single day Kambar had bowed down due to insult ,but that day the shame and blame and the insult made him bow down his head for the first time. He pleaded as a good father to the king for his sons release. The people were supportive for the poet.

The princess was in love and she openly shared the news to the whole public. The king with the other poet did a trick .Asked Ambikapathy to sing a song of 100 verses in the field of Puram, dealing with war and politics, but not the field of Aram - of love and romance. Ambikapathy begins the test in the King's court with an invocation to God. Amaravathi, who is keeping the count, mistakes the invocation as a poem and counts it as poem number one. When he has sung ninety nine Puram poems, she thinks he has completed the task and signals to him that hundred poems have been sung. Declaring victory, Ambikapathy sings of his love for her and thus fails the test. He is executed by the king. There in home when kambar was in the kings court, Kaveri his daughter was raped Kings son Vikraman. She dies killing herself saying, how do I face my family now.

Ambikapathy was executed. By hearing this Amaravathy to killed herself and died. Kambar was agitated. He left Cholas kingdom ,challenging that Can a Donkey know Camphors importance ..meanign the king being donkey and the Camphor being the ingredient which gives light and spreads light and life every where with a fragrance /fresh air. He lost his children and daughter in law.EOD, Kambar instead taking the pen took the sword and killed the king and his son too, who raped Kambars daughter. Finally Kambar killing himself.


The next kingdom king was the best friend of Kambar. He got know the truth and destroyed the chola kingdom. History says so.

Though the people are dead. Still their story and the poetry remains. Why in all love stories there is a villain. sure. What about the songs or poems spreading wind as sweetest fragrance. If the same news which was ill, did it spread like mild wind or the storm.

Good news spread fast. Bad news spread faster..


The Story why I chose is.. the Tamil literature here if he had stopped accepting defeat from King Chola that would have got stopped there. He wouldn't have come out and spread world wide his knowledge and wouldn't have got a story of Ambikapathy or Amaravathy or Kamabar Ramayan.

The LANGUAGE TAMIL was spread every where..Its sweetness in each and every word.. it tasted like honey..

But in EBP story...

My Ambikapathy was the Rama and Amaravathy was the Seetha..

Kushi was the Seetha.Arnav was Rama ..Seetha was abducted by Ravana and kept in Lanka. After Rama fought with Ravana and brought back Seetha from Lanka to Forest and from there back to Ayodhya after the Vana vasa Period. The whole people and crowd and so called society in Ayodhya doubted purity of Seetha .Rama though not willing just to keep others mouth shut asked her to do AGNI PARIKSHA.. TO walk in the fire to show and clear the doubts that she was PURE..

But in my Story the so called Rama - Arnav..WAS HE REALLY Rama or Duruyodhana.. I think he was Duru yodhana .. who called Seetha and made her PAANCHAALI..

When Did Seetha become Paanchaali.. On the surfaced thought ..Paanchaali is word used for a women having and shared by five husbands .My Seetha complete Pati Vritha ,why she was called so by own Patni Vritha Rama who was alias Duruyodhana or Ravana ( his anger and cruel thoughts) why so..Again the spread of shame in the wind spreading like fire.. burning her fully ..internally and externally ...by her own .. how can she come out of the tragedy and pain caused by him and how..

The poets story is for the WIND .. OR HIS TALENT BEING SPREAD ALL OVER THE WORLD.. THE Goodness OF HIS SKILLS.. AMBIKAPATHY AND AMARAVATHY FOR THE LOVE EPIC ..

The news may spread in Air .. Good and Bad.. Bitter and Sweet.." The Bitter spreads faster .. like in Astronomic speed. ".It did spread like that.. the bitter lies.. about her.. he blamed her.. with all wrong things.." Was she that ! what he thought"..Was there anybody behind this..Yes there was .. no were somebody behind all this..

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Present ..

She bit him and moved away.. running.. But he came behind her and both fell on the floor by hitting on a stone.. She got wounded and was falling in a dizzy..her head was hurt and he went near by got some green herbals and tied on the wounded part of hers. The whole night she lay there leaning on the tree and fell asleep... she blabbered something..Arnav..u cheated me.. u cheated me fully...

U killed me and tore me to pieces when I was alive.. why do you have to come now and tear me into pieces again and again.. Pl leave and go away..She was blabbering this in her sleep..Arnav who was supporting her by his chest ...shed tears and was feeling ...so much more than her now... as how much he had hurt her..But will he leave her and go away..No I don't think so.. He made herself supported properly on the tree trunk..He took two sharp stones and went on carving on one tree ..

" I LOVE YOU KUSHI "

God knows how time passed.. Next day morning by 5.30 am she woke up with pain on her head.. She saw her leg bandaged and she resting on his chest.. Arnav .. she yelled and pushed him of.. Oh .. Stop it Kushi.. he yelled back..She slapped him and got up ..With so much pain in her legs ..she limped and walked a head.. Her eyes settled on the tree she was leaning..soem time back..

Stop doing these silly things.. Im not going to come back.. she furied her anger and started walking a head.. He got up and pulled her back.. she dint budge.. She turned back and showed him..See the carving now..Ants have surrounded the carving .. they were feasting on the juice out of the carved portion..U did blame and the carving or the scar left on my heart It cannot be erased Arnav...like the Ants sucked the juice from the carved portion and pricked each and every protion , you did suck me with ur bitter allegations and you did say that ...I was the feast of one or many ...

How can I ??

He was standing feeling less..how he had uttered those words before and how she would have felt..He bowed his head now.. BUT Dint want to keep his foot back..

He came forward and pleaded for forgiveness..Will she.. this time not sure.He dragged her and went and showed the entire area.. For more than 300 trees he had carved "ILU KUSHI.."

This was his new proposal.. He loved her .. and the trees carved wordings will not erase..They will stay for years together..

But what ever .. Ramas Doubt .. I Guess..Rama should do the AGNIPARIKSHA NOW.. as he did Doubt his Wife.. AGNIPARIKSHA - OF HIS HEART TO BURN WITH PAIN OF LOOSING A PRECIOUS ONE AND DIGUST OF UTTERING THAT WORD OR THINKING OF WHAT SHE WAS NOT...

How did she react for this proposal ??

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AWESOME UPDATE. ..
POOR ARSHI ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
wonder what khushi will do now
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sad and lot of explanation about their emotions...
what arnav did...
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Mindblowing updates
Loved them
Well written
Thanks for the pm
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i like the info about taj and rome... interesting...
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so khushi was pregnant and lost her baby coz of arnav...


a lot of bitterness...

really want to know... what happen...

for khushi to hate arnav this badly...
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Wonderful story
well written
Arnav hurt khushi so much in past that she unable to forgv him
waiting to their past unfold
tanx for.pm

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