Arshi FF-Falling in Love Again- Ch15-19 upd 16/11 - Page 8

prologue- awesome... Lots of pain resides in her... She bite him hard... !!

Originally posted by: ArshiHameshaPM

Really nice update👏

A different yet gripping.I love the way you are connecting dots of their growing relationship and that shows how well your writing and your thoughts are.Well done dear😊 finding each historical event and putting it together with Arshi chapter.😊

thank you so much dear ...ur appreciation is like boosting my thoughts more to deepen the mystery.

Originally posted by: as-Sweet

nice update... She is very hurt.. Infact hurt is small word to describe her anguish & inner turmoils... He is there, i guess guilty.. !! Well written.. !!

THnak you dear.

chapter-1 first bite then slap... In that state too she was protecting him... Like the 1st & last part.. He showed stars to that rogue..!!

I like the chapter name Broken moon... Thanks for pm prologue & ch-1 ... !!

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Amazing chapters...

Seems he did something really big to deserve such hatred from her... totally different and beautifully written.

The mystery will be revealed by chap 5 .

He did soemthing really wrong. He deserves this and more...

thank u dear.

Originally posted by: lovetoread08

Hey, I read the story your writing shows much care and thought put into it as a result the chapters feel very polished. In prologue and chapter one the surroundings are described so vividly. Also in chapter one the past and present scenario is perfectly written.In one scene I liked the comparison of Khushi's emotion with river Yamuna, also there are couple of words such as "Broken Moon into many pieces" which really shows how khushi is shattered rather than hurt. I loved the dialogue in chapter two it says" The horizon.. the orange sun was about to go to sleep... It was a big round orange sun,here it reminds me the vision of sunset. I loved the use of "feeble" here, since the " f " gives the perfect synonym to word weak. Thanks for the PM.

Thank you so much dear for ur indepth reading and analysis.

glad, that you enjoyed the symbolic connection with her emotions and the surrouding meaning the natural elements playing a vital role.

the substories will continue for another two chaps.

Broken moon one of m fav books from a Tamil author.. his book was inspiration for thsi story.

Thanks again for ur deepest comments.

Originally posted by: ArshiHameshaPM

Really nice update👏

A different yet gripping.I love the way you are connecting dots of their growing relationship and that shows how well your writing and your thoughts are.Well done dear😊 finding each historical event and putting it together with Arshi chapter.😊

Thank you dear. Ur appreciation means a lot. Im trying out connecting so many things to make a simple story into a symbolic sweet swtory..

thanks dear once again for ur deepest comments.