SS: The Ultimate Love *CH 14 Part 2* (10/OCT/2017) - Page 65

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Posted: 8 years ago

WOW!! Beautiful update...

loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
March aa gaya humara next update kab aayga
Waiting for next bomb
Please update soon 😳
Edited by great.dreams - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm Posting This Story On Wattpad So Vote Their Too Friends... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
loved the update ^_^ After so long, you updated or should I say, I read it. amazing update, pata nahi kya hoga, bahut locha hai yahan but I trust uday :* he is love. please update soon sis.
Edited by Ana.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
so finally i am commenting on your ff after a long time and im realy sorry for that... since i read and commented till part 11 before im happy that i am not that far away from the ff

so coming to part 12: it was awesome... i couldnt believe unnati slapped manyata even uday was shocked... unnati was hurt with what vijay had said to her but i was also happy how uday took a stand against manyata and told unnati not to behave like that...and again unnati misunderstood manyata thinking she is the reason for ruining her relationship with vijay and uday...liked manveer convo especially when he came to her room and held her hand but how she removed it...manyata broke down in front of uday but what came next made me blush by how uday kissed her and didnt let her go event after she moved away...damn prithiv had to call at the wrong time uday has a plan but manyata took it the wrong way but uday couldnt tell manyata whic hurt manyata more thinking uday doesnt love her as before both manveer crying individually... i wonder who uday called up...i wish if uday knows that manyata exactly loves him the way he does...liked mathili and abhayender scene and then how mina tease mathili...ohhh god the servant broke the vase and manyata got hurst seeing that she decided to pick up the pieces herself ...loved how the old servant was consoling manyata...damn i wonder what unnati si trying to do over hear i hope she relaises soon manyata is not the cause for all her problems...was happy to see how unnati remembered her friendship with manyata... glad how unnati asked manyata the question of y she divorced uday and her answered confused unnati... for once unnati thought about what manyata said and was not sure if she would beleive it... happy that atlease uday hear manyata and unnati convo...i wonder who came as uday was not happy to see them...ohh so those two lady r udays naini and mami... didnt like how nani sa spoke to manyata...haha poor nani sa and mami sa couldnt utter a word when they heard uday speak and how he held manyata hand infront of them...liked how uday answered back to them both and gave justification...these two women r so evil that they poured a powder in manyata tea glad that uday was watching them from upstairs and he called manyata up...haha shame on nani sa she tried to spike manyaa dream and what happens she ends up drinking that tea...uday wants the besto for manyata but he had to pretend to behave rudely with her and told her to stay away from his family and him and unnati which hurt manyata even more...liked how unnati was slowly starting to support manata but uday now he was more angry as manyata showed those fake ppl her concern..manyata was really heart broken and when she broke down even i felt sad...thank god unnati heard and how she knows y manyata had divorced uday...finally unnati relaised what manyata meant before really loved both manyata and unnati scene and it had so much pain..uday was angry on himself for hurting manyata that he hurt his hand...so murari actually changed his indetitiy?...i wonder what these hidden secrets r and was murari actually sanjay and pretended to be murari or was he murari but changed his identity to sanjay... ok baby next chapter will be comment tomorrow.
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Posted: 8 years ago

ok so like a i promised in my last comment that i will comment for the nnext chapter here i am... tbh it feels good reading your story after a long time. now since i comment on chap 12 few days ago here is my comment for the next one and sorry lol i know my comment was long for part 12

coming to chap 13 part 1: thank god rajat asked uday if he asked manyata about the kidnapping thing before but uday was too angry with his princess that he didnt ask her...i just hope manveer clear their misunderstanding uday still thinks manyata will lie if he ask hers...liked manyata and vijay convo...i liked how manyata went t check on uday when she saw his room door open and how uday pinned her against the wall...and whe uday was telling manyata to look in his eye but when she didnt and he angrily told her to i also liiked that...finally uday asked mnayata on y she signed the divorced papers...manyata was stammering and uday knew she is surely hiding something..manyata told uday there was another reason but she didnt tell him what it was but i hope udays finds out some way...liked how manyaat took a step and kissed uday when he asked if he is an stranger to her...liked how manyata told uday that she loves him and how udays hugged her tightly...omg who was that person that saw manveer together and called prithvi...liked how uday carried manyata inn his arm and took her into his room and how he locked the door and layed down on the bed with her but was scared me was that he cut pritvis phone and switched of his mobile ...slowly slowly manveer r clearing some of their misunderstanding and i hope soon their clear all of their misunderstanding...yes im so happy manyata finally told uday on y she signed the divorce papers and uday was really shocked to know...and finally uday relaised also that the roof he got against manyata was all fake...liked how uday checked on manyata before leaving to go and meet prithvi,,,I wonder if prthiv actually sent those reports or is it someone else... I wonder what udays plan is...omg so those reports was tannus...poor unnati she tld vijay she knows the truth but vijay still went away who was that old person that spoke to unnati...poor manyata she actually vented out all her frustration on uday but udays is helpless as he cant tell manyata about his plan..omg i wonder what msut have happen to giriraj...thank god i hope giriraj health got worse but he finally came out of coma...thanks to raj giriraj actually got saved otherwise he would have died in that bomb blast...i hate this prithivi so much uday is right because of him everything thing got ruined in two familes but i dont want uday to marry minaxi...thank god rajat said how this would hurt manayat more but in wonder how uday will manage all this...oh god manytata didnt eat breakfast or luch and uday was about to go to her that the evil prithiv had to come but happy how he sent a message to unnati to make manyata eat...oh god where did manyata go now...thank god manyata was safe and she only went to devgarh mansion but uday is not happy that she went without informing...liked how manyata shared her feelings with vijay and how the three siblings ate together...so ds finally saw that uday cares for manayta...uday told ds the whole truth but ds was very angry after what she heard and poor uday got slapped...ds was actually going to tell everyone the truth depsite uday pleading her so many time but when he said about death she finally stopped...finally ds is with uday in this plan...haha when they both came out pretending to be angry...i just liked how uday pins manyata to the wall everytime...uday gave a hint to manyata that just like how she protected to him but singing on the divorce papers so s doesnt lose him just like that he has a reason tto stay away from her and not express his love in front of everyone so that she can be safe but manyaat is too stubbron to understand that i liked how uday made a deal with manyata that infront of everyone he wont be her uday so that people dont suspect that they cleared their differences... liked how manyata was teasing uday...liked manveer hug...liked how uday told manayat that shhe has to tell him if she fnds anything doubtful...liked how manveer teased each other bought a smile on my face..oh god rajat called at the wrong time was loving manveer romance but then he actually got a useful information...cant wit to read the next part ... . But I will have to wait to read the next part as its 1am now but im loving the story chotti. Amazing work

Edited by preya_radev - 8 years ago
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Chap 13 part 2: im back was waiting to see when I could finally read this part... coming to the update im shocked prithvi and murari/sanjay planned manyata kidnapping when she was small keeping her away from her family for so many years.. remembering the scene where manyata lost her baby actually made me emotional again...so uday is finally back to his mission again and called minaxi bf rohan I wonder what he has got up his sleeve. I liked how uday called manyata mrs udayveer singh when she called him...liked how uday asked manayata if she took medicine and had her dinner... poor manveer couldn't have dinner as uday had to go to prithvis house...thanks god manyata finally had her dinner and medicine after unnati pleaded her for a long time...liked how during that time unnati said sorry to manayata and they finally became friends like old time...omg the way uday said he would make passionate love with manyata as she still thought he didn't love her and stayed away made me blush...haha manyata was scared when uday said that...I liked how manyata was taking steps backwards while he was walking towards her...its sad uday will making last love to manyata before she starts hating him as he will break her heart the next time but I hope manyata remembers udays words about trusting him and knows that he wont deceive her...loved manveer love making altought it did make me blush... poor manayat she wants to be a mother again...liked how uday again supported manyata...ok now next part will read tomorrow

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Posted: 7 years ago
Arre dear when are you going to upload the next part its been so long

Please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

its okay will be wtng




Thank You... 😊😊😊
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

hey dear how r u? Heyyaaa... I'm Fine.. What About You...😊😊😊


its been longtime I haven't seen u Yuppp Nowadays Posting TUL & LSOY on Wattpad with some Changes... 😊😊😊



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