~*~Life~*~pt34 pg109 Finale - Page 59

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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG kartiks got angad in with him aswel...? ...cool!
very... entertainin part 😆
i wana no kartiks plan tho - krish's loser!
gr8 part Dii!!! 😛
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey RAch di...thatw as awesome and congrats on completing 100 pages.....and plsu I wanted to ask that you are liek so uummmm.....kind of inactive these days I mean it's been a week I've notice that you update your fanfics but I don't see you at the Kumkum forum (the place where I actually met you and read your fanfic)......are you still busy or something.....i mean it's no fun without you too you know.........if possible then you can....you know PM me too.....I'm just a little curious coz didn't see you much for a long time........I'm sorry if it sounds like as if I'm interrupting you somehow......but hey I DO LOVE YOUR FANFIC...and you know that moer than anyone!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice part 👏 👏 👏
that stupid Krish I just hope hell be the one, who gets kicked out of the house 😆
lol anyways continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
jst cot up ! ur fan - fic is amazing !! 👏

gr888 parts !! 😃 😃

n congratulations on cmpletin 100 pgs !
😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

i thikn it'll seeem like he is on krishh's side but really he is on karthik's side.. rite..

cuz i was thinking of the last line of part 28 and it w as about how he will seperate from her if it means protecting her..

prove me wrong by not seperating them but plz make angad on karthik's side!!! and let karthic avenge krishh!! i dont like him or his motive!!!!!!!!

continue reallyyy soooon!!!!

hmmmm interesting prediction.....im not giving anything away......i know, evil of me😃 but yea you'll find out in the next part, I was meant to update last night but i went sheffield yesterday and got bak round 8pm so i was tired and just went to bed, but next parts coming up😊
Thanx

Originally posted by: HardRock

Wickkkkedd!! 😈
Wonder watz d plan...keep writin 😉

Thanx a lot....hmm ull find out in a bit

Originally posted by: Numera*

yay!!!!!!!! angad's with karthik!!! im soo happy!! krish is such an ***!!! omg i bet he doesnt want karthik to any propoerty thats y krish doesnt want karthik to stick around! HOW DARE HE THREATEN ANGAD KHANNA!!! that boy needs a good beat down LMAO!! karthik is soo awesome, im happy he is defending krips and angads love!! i think krish will try to get krips and angad broken up, but karthik will just have to come to the rescue!! y does kripa even love krish he is such a JERK!! their parents are JERKS!!! u cant believe they didnt even say sorry to karthik or treat him special, its like they dont even care he's alive, like his death didnt affect them at all and they just left him there to die!!! continue soon!

wowwww long commment........hehehee yea karthik n angad working together.....lol erm their parents.....well i guess some parents r like tht....n kripa loves krish becuz at the end of the day hes her brother n its not like he acts like a jerk in front of her.....he tries to put on the perfect brother and perfect son image in front of them which is why they love him

Originally posted by: bhumishah

awesome part
cont soon

thanx

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome part
i hate krish

thanx
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

awesome part plz cont soon. 👏

thanx

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

AWESUM part!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 hope u can continue soon!!!!!!! 😃


p.s. i have a request...... can u kill Krish????? 😆

lol thanx.......hahaha erm.....i dunnno i'll seee😆

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... i relly really h8 krissh 😡 ... Im sooooooo glad karthick n angad joined together.... the 2 good guys against the 1 evil lil urghhhhhhhhhh 😡 Loll Pls do cont soon... cnt wait to know their plan loll 😆

lol yea im kind of getting that vibe from everyone......lol yea continuing once ive done the comments

Originally posted by: del_geo

awesome part Rach. continue soon

thanx a lot

Originally posted by: memze

awesome part and this krish god hes so annoying thereatning my poor angad,anyways loved the part and cant wait to see kartick and angads plan bet its gonna be awesome but i just hope it doesnt hurt kripa cuz then angad might actually get a one way ticket 😛

thanx a lot
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanx

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome he should have got a punch and man krips parent are blind or what they dont care much abt karthik or kripa just loved the part

thanx

Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG kartiks got angad in with him aswel...? ...cool!
very... entertainin part 😆
i wana no kartiks plan tho - krish's loser!
gr8 part Dii!!! 😛
xx Saz xx

awww hunnni thanx a lot....lol next part shud b up soon

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

Hey RAch di...thatw as awesome and congrats on completing 100 pages.....and plsu I wanted to ask that you are liek so uummmm.....kind of inactive these days I mean it's been a week I've notice that you update your fanfics but I don't see you at the Kumkum forum (the place where I actually met you and read your fanfic)......are you still busy or something.....i mean it's no fun without you too you know.........if possible then you can....you know PM me too.....I'm just a little curious coz didn't see you much for a long time........I'm sorry if it sounds like as if I'm interrupting you somehow......but hey I DO LOVE YOUR FANFIC...and you know that moer than anyone!!! 😉

ooooo thanx a lot hunni, ive sent u a PM so reply when u can😊

Originally posted by: popgirl

👏 👏 Gr8t continue soon!!

thanx

Originally posted by: Mulle

very nice part 👏 👏 👏
that stupid Krish I just hope hell be the one, who gets kicked out of the house 😆
lol anyways continue soon 😉

thanx a lot

Originally posted by: lildude13572003

jst cot up ! ur fan - fic is amazing !! 👏

gr888 parts !! 😃 😃

n congratulations on cmpletin 100 pgs !
😛

thanx a lot
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ayt guys, next parts coming up 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
cool cant wait!! i hope krish's real chehra comes infront of kripa soon cuz i hate the fact that he is like acting like he can do anything and get rid of angad lol who does this kid think he is!! angad's our hero, just love him man!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

~*~Previously~*~

A - i know her......if we mess with Krish....then its likely she will get angry

Ka - i'm sure you have your.....ways of persuading her?

A - i'll try.......so what's the plan?

Ka - listen up........

~*~Part 31~*~

Angad stood outside Kripa's room while she got changed. They had made plans to go out to dinner....well it was more Angad's idea so that Karthik could keep an eye on Krish, after five minutes the door opened

K - im ready!

Angad turned around and stared at Kripa dressed up in an elegant red dress with her hair let down. He smiled and kissed her cheek

A - you look gorgeous

K - thank you my darling

Kripa kissed his cheek and linked arms with him. They went downstairs and were about to head out when Krish spotted them

Kr - where are you two going?

K - just out to dinner bhai.....

A - any problem?

Kr - ........

K - dad, we might be late don't wait up

S - ok Kripa

Kr - dad, you're just going to let her go out? at this time of the night?

A - dude its only 9PM

S - yes Krish and in any case, she's with Angad, I trust him

Kr - but dad......

A - dude chill out, Kripa lets go

Angad put his arm around Kripa and led her out but not before giving Krish a cheeky grin and winking his eye. As they shut the door, Krish began protesting to Suryaban

Kr - dad seriously, Kripa shouldn't be out this late, something could happen

G - Krish son....if anything does happen then Angad is with her, he will protect her

Kr - and what if Angad does something?

G - Krish! Angad is a good boy, he loves Kripa, they have been together for almost a year now so please don't say things like that

Kr - he could be after her money!

Krish stood there as Karthik spoke behind him

Ka - i doubt that very much Krish.....seeing as Angad is probably more richer than us, right dad?

S - yes Karthik is right

Kr - i still think she should have stayed home

Karthik came forward and put his arm around Krish

Ka - it seems as though not only do you not trust Angad, but you don't trust Kripa, your own sister

S - im afraid i have to agree with Karthik on this. Krish you are being too insecure about Kripa, she is a grown woman now and is with someone we all trust, now please no more discussion on this topic

Kr - but dad.....

Ka - he said no more Krish

Krish looked at Suryaban and then at Karthik, who gave him the same smile Angad did. Krish began suspecting something was wrong so he decided to look in Angad's room, after searching for a while he found a peice of paper saying "Hotel Blue Diamond, room 205, tonight" Krish put the paper in his pocket and began heading out of the room when he caught eye of Angad's mobile phone, he saw that there was a new message so he began reading

"Angad, hope everything is set for tonight, Kripa won't know what hit her, make sure its a night to remember"

Krish looked at the number but it wasn't listed in Angad's phone

Kr (thinks) - Angad is up to something.....with my sister, i can't let it happen

Krish took the phone and left the room and ran downstairs to Suryaban, who was reading a newspaper with Karthik

Kr - dad, come with me

S - what? where?

Kr - Hotel Blue Diamond

S - why?

Kr - because i think Angad is taking Kripa there and might take advantage of her

S - oh no not this again Krish!

Ka - what is wrong with you man, can't you leave them two alone

Kr - she's my sister! If i think something is going to happen to her, you expect me to just sit here and relax like you?

Ka - fine.....dad if he thinks Angad is going to do something, lets go with him

S - Karthik not you aswell

Ka - dad, unlike some people (glares at Krish) I trust Kripa and Angad, but for Krish's sake lets put his mind at ease and see what they are up to

Kr - i'm telling you dad, Angad even got this message off someone

Krish shows Suryaban the message who stands up and gets his coat

S - ok, I'll go with you, lets go

Karthik stood up

Ka - i'm coming too!

Karthik went into the kitchen and told Gayatri where they were going and then left with Krish and Suryaban to the hotel.....when they got there......Krish went up to the receptionist

Kr - excuse me is there a booking under Angad Khanna?

R - one moment sir........yes there is, room number 205

Kr - thanks.....see dad

S - we don't know anything yet

Kr - why else would he bring her to a hotel?

Karthik shook his head and went upstairs with them.......soon they arrived to 205 and Krish opened the door wide to see....................Angad and Kripa sitting at a dinner table having dinner with the room decorated with flowers and balloons. Kripa stood up and looked at Krish

K - bhai, what are you doing here?

Suryaban and Karthik stepped into the room, Suryaban looked at Krish

S - is this what you wanted me to see? Them two having a nice quiet dinner?

Kr - dad....i swear.....

S - just shut up Krish, you've said and done enough, now lets leave these two alone, lets go

Kr - but

Ka - Krish, that's enough now. I told you Angad wouldn't do anything......you are way too insecure

Kripa faced Krish

K - you thought Angad bought me here to........oh my god you're sick! thats disgusting, Angad would never do anything like that!

Kr - but i saw the message on his phone.....

A - where?

Karthik took the phone off Krish and showed him the message, Angad shook his head

A - this message was from my friend Rishi because I told him I was taking Kripa out to dinner here

K - I never expected this from you

Kr - but

Ka - you've ruined their night enough now don't ruin it anymore, lets go dads waiting in the car

Krish went out the room, Karthik walked out after him........later that night Kripa and Angad had arrived home and Kripa was sound asleep in her room, Angad had finished getting changed when the door to his room opened, he looked and saw Karthik standing there, he came in and sat on the bed

Ka - how was the rest of the dinner?

A - it was good

Ka - did she suspect anything?

Angad sat next to Karthik

A - no.......she would never have guessed that was a part of our plan to make Krish look bad

Ka - you should have seen his face when he was trying to get dad to go with him, i tried my best not to laugh

A - and his face when he saw me and Kripa having a lovely dinner together.....that text you sent was quite convincing

Ka - yea that played a major part in the plan

Karthik put his hand on Angad's shoulder and both laughed with each other

Ka - so thats us 1 and Krish 0

Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago

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