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sirivalli

@sirivalli.t

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome concept!!!!

Prologue n CS was superb...

Loved it...

Eagerly waiting to read more...

Plz continue soon...

Thanks for d pm:)

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Anushka

@anushka12345

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

OMG!!! It was amazing...FABULOUS!! 👏👏

Just some days back you asked for this story and today you updated😛...Awesome!!

The plot and the story seems very interesting...

Prologue was such a different one from others and it's awesome...

Finally a fiction by you which I can follow right from the start...😃

Though I follow most of your Arshi FFs but couldn't follow any right from the start...😭

I am so excited for this one...

I am eagerly waiting for your next update!!!

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deesha1989

@deesha1989

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Nice prologue and character sketch. Looking forward to the first chapter.

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pree2605

@pree2605

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Interesting prologue..

loved it..

thnxx fr pm

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Anushka

@anushka12345

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

The story is very interesting...I just love the concept...

I feel like Khushi had played with feelings of love in past...I think Arnav was to related to her bitter past...

"A playgirl in the past who changed her completely out of redemption."

She has changed due to redemption!! Does that mean she did something really wrong in past maybe during her college days...

May be Arnav was in love with her - "In the bottom of his heart there is the image of a girl which no one can erase, but it got faded away due to pain in her love"

The girl is Khushi right?Most probably she must have hurted him...

What had happened to them in past???

Sorry for irritating with my crazy assumptions...

Just waiting eagerly for your next update...

Please continue soon...😛

And Thanks for the PM

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Wonderful start yagya... keep updating asap...

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome prologue and cs dear plz continue soon

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sadiasaba68

@sadiasaba68

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

omg what can i say yagya??
each of ur story is different.. just superb 👏
words are not enough to praise ur work...
keep rocking sweety
another awesome story is on its way... can't wait so update asap ⭐️