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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mojgan

Hey ma belle,

I got two questions for you (That's how my students ask me questions) :

1- when will be your next update for this awesome story of yours? 😉

2- When will be your next update for that awesome story of yours? 😉

PS1. 1- TAU
PS2. 2- TWR

An extra PS: I heard India is getting very hot these days. Please take care of yourself!


Mojgan you are too too sweet...I love reading your PS'es...hehe
Posting the teaser for THIS story right now!
Next update for THAT story...probably in 2 days

EXtra PS- India is too hot right now...moreover people are dying in Hyderabad because of heat stroke...!
Extra Square PS- You be careful while you travel to our country 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

THE ALTERNATE UNIVERSE



TEASER FOR CHAPTER 14


"Chote, Aman's distant relative has passed, so we are travelling to Lucknow", Anjali said with a sad smile on her face, "we can't go to the school trip now."

"Too bad di" Arnav shrugged casually, without taking a glance away from his laptop.

"Yes, but on the brighter side, you get to take them"

He stared straight ahead from his laptop, his expressions looked like someone had cracked a joke and he was expected to laugh out loud.

"You are kidding, right? Of course you are", he began, but then trailed off, because her sister actually had sported a grim expression, "What the di! I have told you I am never taking Ashu out by myself until she is at least ten! I can't handle kids' bathroom rituals!"

"Mamu, Chote is also coming with me...and he is like four & a half now and I am almost five & a half", Appu rolled her eyes on giving the only rational explanation when none existed, "So if you put us together...we are ten years old!"

"But, I don't go to the bathroom without mumma", Nikhil crowed at the prospect of his favorite people accompanying him on the trip.

"Perfect. We will call Khushiji too", Anjali voice glowed instantly, however she pouted on remembering what her friend had told her, "But she mentioned it's difficult for her to get leaves from office"

"Nothing is impossible di. Give me her number. I will sort this out"

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In Gupta house, the mobile phone rang. She stared at the unknown number, tension screaming along her nerves.

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Here is the teaser...hope it teases all you lovely people sufficiently until the next chapter is posted. I am keeping busy in AD and also in filtering out my buddy list...I have removed 75 buddies who are not following this piece of fiction since like Thread 2...! Yes, I was surprised too that I had been sending so many unnecessary PMs! Well, now no more PMs to them 😆

Adieu!

PS- Chapter 5 of The White Rainbow is posted!

Edited by shalini.ranjan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It feels so good to be first on your thread again.

Arnav and Khushi are going to camp together...lalalalalala

He is going to figure out that Appu's Chote is his Jr...lalalalalalalala

Force Khushi to give Divorce to creepy Jha...lalalalalalalala

then roka, mehendi, sangeet and Shaadi AUR suhaagraat...lalalalalalalalala


THE END. (BUT NOT THAT SOON LIKE MY SONG OK.)
Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
now its going to be sort of
waiting for update eagerly...

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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG... i am loving this story...
Nikhil and Appu r too cute..
but my heart goes for Nikhil more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow nice teaser!
so now Arnav and Kushi will be going together with the kids...
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dil dhadkne do...
Dil dhadkne do...

Super teaser...
Nik is Cho cweeet... Bina maa ke voh bathroom nahi jata 😆...he is a mamma's chamcha..
It remind me of my 16 yr old cousin brother...who is Mamma boy..still eat from my Bua's hand.. 😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
Well ma belle Shalini!

I am too teased that I cannot sleep! It is not fair to stop the teaser before Khushi picks up the phone. This is how I look like ☢️ at this moment. Plz plz plz write the whole chapter before my trip varna! Nothing of course :-)))
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow nice teaser.
Hope after that they come face to face.

Love apu theory .

Such a cute baby .


Arnav is calling khushi
Will she recognize his voice.




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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW...TEASER...BUT I WAS SO WAITING 4 UR UPDATE...BUT UR TEASER MADE ME MORE CRAVE 4 D UPDATE...
EAGERLY WAITING...

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