Raina- An Eternal Love Story (Raj and Naina)part 72 updated pg 21 - Page 15

**Raina (an eternal love story)**

PART ...71

Raj enjoys this sweet moments with his lil daughter ...nd udhr naina apne hi khayalon mai gum thi vo ab kal kya hoga uske bare mai soch rhi thi ...


Next day ::::

Khan aata hai naina ke room mai

Khan : to naina kya socha hai kya chahiye tume tunara desh ya fir tumari 1 saal ki choti si bachii agar desh chahiye to apni beti ki kurbani deni padegi ...

Tabhi naaz aati hai

Naaz : abbu aap bhi na vo bechari bolegi kaise uska mooh to band hai na

Khan: oh han hum to bhool hi gye the

Khan jata hai nd naina ke mouth par se tape nikal deta hai ( ofcouse raj jane se phle naina ko fir se bandh kr gya tha ) ...

Khan : to bolo naina

Naina : dekho meri beti ko kuch mat krna tum jo bologe mai vo karugi

Khan : ab yeh hui na samjdaro wali baat chlo ab ache bacho ki tarah hume triggers la kar de do kab aur kahan yeh hum batayege ...

Naina : thik hai par meri bhi ek sharat hai phle muje meri beti chahiye uske baad triggers

Khan : impossible

Naina :to triggers ko bhool jao

Naaz khan ko side mai lekar jati hai

Naaz : abbu aap kya kr rhe hai usko uski beti de denge to vo hume triggers de degi

Khan : nhi beta aap usko nhi janti yeh bahut smart hai kuch bhi kr sakti hai

Khan to naina : vaise to tume sharat rakhne ka koi hakk hai nhi fir bhi hum ek vaada krte hai jaise hi tum triggers dogi tune tumari beti mil jayegi manjoor vrna hum triggers to hasil kr hi lenge ...

Naina : thik hai manjoor hai ...

Khan : to thik hai thodi der mai hume bahar milo nd yaad rakhna tumari beti hamare kabze mai hai to koi hoshiari nhi ...

Khan jata hai nd naina peeche se smile krti hai

Naina : jisko tu apni jeet samj rha hai vo teri sabse badi haar hai khan ...

Khan : rehaan kahan hai naaz

Naaz : vo bs aa hi rhe hai us bachi ko lekar humse nhi sambhali ja rhi thi vo ...

Khan :thik hai tab tak hum neeche chlte hai car mai baithe hai ...


Khan aur naaz jate hai nd raj bhi vahi aata hai aur raina uski goad mai hai

Naina aati haind us car mai baith jati hai raj front seat pr hai aur naina back seat par naina ke pass naaz hai nd khan ..

Naina : ab to mai tumara kaam kr rhi hu to muje meri beti ko choone to do vaise bhi mai yaha se kahi bhagne nhi wali ...
Raj : tum bhaag sakti bhi nhi tumare saathi aalekh ne bgagne ki koshih ki thi usko humne uda diya ...

Naina : whattt no aisa kaise jar sakte ho tum ...

Naaz : jyada chillo mat vrna teri beti ka bhi vahi haal hoga us se milna hai ja nhi ...

Naina chup ho gyi aur raj ne raina ko naina ki goad mai de diya naina raina ko hug karke silently ro rhi thi ...

Tabhi alfaaz aata hai

Alfaaz : sir vo dusra aadmi bhag gya jo inke saath tha

Raj : kon alekh usko to humne

Alfaz : nhi nishant vo hsmare aadmi ko chakma dekar bhaag gya ...


Khan : koi baat nhi bhasg ke jayega kaha hahahaha .naina singh tum to bhagne ke bare mai sochna bhi mat jaha hum ja rahe hai vaha mere aadmi hai aur hamari car ke peeche meri aadmio ki 10 car hai bhaogi to marogi ...

Naina : mai tumlogo ki tarah buzdil nhi hu ...

Naaz : kya bola tune

Raj : rehne dijiye naaz ab yeh majboor hai apna gusa bol kr hi nikalegi na alfaz car chalao jldi pahunchna hai hume

Alfaz : but sir vo nishant

Raj : kuch nhi kr payega vo jab tak vo base camp pahunchega humara kaam ho chuka hoga ...

Naina : hum ja kahan rahe hai

Naaz : jaisalmair vahi hai na triggers so vahi jayege na

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AFTER 13 HOURS ::::

Khan aur baki sab jaisalmair pahunchte hai tab tak khan ke aadmi usko batate hai ki unhone nishant ko pakad liya hai khan sab ko lekar ek guest house mai rukta hai vaha kareeb 30-40 log honge sab andar jate hai

Naina : tum yahan kyu lekar aaye ho hume to triggers lenw jana hai na

Khan : itni jldi kya hai capt thoda tamasha to kar le phle ...

Khan sab ko ek room mai lekar jata hai jaha aalekh mra pada hai ya fir marne ki acting kr rha hota hai nd uske saath nishant to baandha hota hai

Khan : naaz raina ko le lo is se

Naina : bilkul nhi mai tumara kaam kr rhi hu na fir meri beti ko kuch mat krna ...


Khan raina ko naina se cheen leta hai aur naaz ko padkata hai aur naaz ko ek chair pr baithne ko bolta hai naaz baith jati hai ...

Khan : isko baandh do aur ha saath mai bomb bhi lga do ...

All are shocked unhe samj nhi aata yeh kya ho rha hai itne mai khan ke aadmi naaz ko pakad ke baandh dete hai aur uske saath time bomb fit kr dete hai raina naaz ki goad mai hai ...

Naina : tum kya pagal ho gye ho usko kyu baandha aur meri raina ko chodo ...

Naaz is totaly scared

Naaz : abbu yeh aap kya kr rhe hai mere saath ...

Khan : kaun abbu agar tum hamari beti hoti to hamare dushmano ka saath kabhi nhi deti hume lga tum humse pyar krti ho par tum apni ma ki maut ka badla lene aai ho yeh nhi pta tha ...

Kisi ne bhi yeh expect nhi kiya tha ki khan ko sach pta hoga but fir bhi naaz ne pucha

Naaz : abbu yeh aap kya bol rahe hai ...

Khan : chup ek lafaz aur nhi varna yahi par goli maar dunga jaise teri maa ko maara tha ...


Raj khan ko marne aane wala tha but khan ke aadmio ne usko bhi pakad liya ...kafi der dhishum dhishum chlti rhi par end mai ek ne raj ke head par rod se var kiya aur vo apna balance kho baitha aur gir gya ...

Khan : itni jaldi kya hai major rajvir hahahahahaha thodi der ruk jao fir khud mar dunga tune mai...

All are shocked
Naaz : aabu yeh rehaan hai ...

Khan : bevkoof ladki tume kya lga tha tum hume bevkoof banaogi aur hum ban jayege hume pta chal chuka hai ki yeh rehaan nhi hai tumare vi bevkoof chote bhai behan jinko tum apna maanti ho noor aur uska bhai unko do thapad mare aur sab bol diya tha unhone yeh rehan nhi hai hum tabhi se jante hai jab se yeh naina pakistaan aai hai ...tume kya lga natak sirf tum kar sakti ho hum bhi kr sakte hai ...

Khan : isko bhi baandh do

Khan ke aadmio ne raj ko pakad ke baandh diya aur bomb fit kr diya ...

Naina : u basterd i kill u

Khan : nono no naina g gali dena achi baat nhi hoti tumko kya lga tum log natak kroge aur mai pehchaan nhi pauga itna kacha khiladi nhi hu mai ab muje to triggers chahiye kisi bhi kemat pe aur mai janta tha ki tum aise to manogi nhi to kyu na tumara natak cont kyu jaye aur maine kiya is mauke ke liye ...ab tumare pass sirf 90 minut hai ...bacha sakti ho to bacha lo sab ko ...jaise hi triggers mere haath mai dogi mai bomb ka remote tumko de dunga aur yeg band ho jayega varna sab kuch blasst ...

Naina : tum aisa kuch nhi karoge

Khan : i can do everything naina mai abni biwi aur beti ko maar sakta hu to tum logo ko marna koi badi baat nhi hai so apna time waste mat kro ur time starts now ...hurry up aur ha triggers lekar yahi aana yaha se vo jagh 30 min ka rasta hai so be quick ...nd ha hamare aadmi tumare peecge hai bhoolna mat tumare har moov pe meri nazar hai ...

Raj : no naina iski baat mat sunna isko triggers kabhi nat dena

Naina : sry raj par is wakt mere liye aap jyada imp ho ...


Yeh bol kr naina triggers lene chali gyi ...

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Naina base mai enter hui nd vaha normally behave kiya jaise k vo ek checking ke liye aai ho vo apne cabin mai gyi aur vo secret cards uthaye jin se us chamber ka door khulta tha jaha triggers the ...

Vahase cards lekar vo nikli aur thodi der baad drive krne ke baad ek toote phoote khandar ke bahae car roki

Vo andar gyi ...

After 15 min naina ek bag ke saath bahar aai to usne dekha ki sach mai khan ke aadmi uske peeche the abhi bhi 20 min baki the so vo jldi se car mai gyi aur drive krne lgi ...ab raj aur baki sab ki zindgi usje haath mai thi ...but shit road par trafic jam vo bhi itba bura aage kisi ka accident hua tha ...to road clear hone ko hi 1 ghanta lagega but uske pass bas 15 min the ...

So usne car ko vahi pe choda aur bhaagne lgi thodi door hake usko ek bike wale se lift mil gyi aur vo apni destination par pahunch gyi par tabhi usko ek blast suna its a bomb blast ...

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Naina ne time dekha 2 min baki the usne blast ki pRwah nhi ki aur bhaagi is se phle ki khaan remote ka button press krta naina ne remote cheen liya

Khan : wow capt suna ta tum time ki bahut pKi ho aaj dekh bhi lia ...

Naina : mere sabhi saathio ko chodo

Khan : phle triggers to de do

Naina : nhi phle bomb defuse kro ...

Khan : tumare pass meri baat maane ke elawa koi chaara nhi hai ...agar triggers nhi dogi to mai bomb blast kr dunga mere pass dusra remote hai...

Naina ne apni pocket se gun nikali

Naina: chaara hai tune kya socha naina singh itni aasni se tere jaal mai phas jayegi tu blast krega aur idhR mai tuje shoot krungi aur phir khud ko phir narak me jake le lena triggers ...

Naina ki eyes fullangry thi khan samj gya ki she is not joking so usne asli remote usko de diya aur badle mai naina ne usko vo bag jisme triggers the ...


End of part 71 ..

**Raina( an eternal love story )**

PART ...72

Recap :: ( khan naina aur baki sab ko lekar jaisalmair aata hai triggrrs lene ...khan ko naaz aur sab ki sachai pata chal gyi hai usne naina ko sab ko bachane ke liye time diya tha ...naina kisi tarah pure time par vaha aa gyi aur khan se bombs ko defuse krne ka remote le liya aur usko triggers wala bag de diya )

NOW ::::

Khan ne Triggers wala bag liya aur khol ke dekha usme sach mai triggers the ...

Naina : ab yakeen ho gya na tumko k triggers asli haiab phooto yaha se

Khan jane lagta hai but tabhi naina uske head par gun rakh deti hai

Khan : mai janta tha tum aisa hi kuch karogi is liye mere sar se gun hatao aur peeche dekho mere aadmio ne tumare raj aur sab ka kya haal kiya

Naina : peeche tu dekh khan teri galatfehmi door ho jayegi ...

Khan peeche dekhta hai ki vaha kamsekam 10 log army uniform mai hai aur uske sare aadmi mare pade hai ...khan bhagne lagta hai

Naina : koshih bhi mat krna bhaag nhi paaoge yeh normal army wale nhi hai commandos hai agar hilne ki koshih bhi ki to tumari gardan uda denge ...

Khan : mere aadmi puri building mai hai tumare yeh 10 commandos kuch nhi kar payege ...

Naina : army ne is pure area ko seal kr diya hai yaha kareeb 300 army wale honge so kya kehte ho bhaagna hai abhi bhi...

Khan : impossible aisa nhi ho sakta tum jooth bol rhi ho alfaaz ne khud tumpar nazar rakhi thi thi tumne to kisi ke baat tak nhi ki thi fir army wale yahan kaise aa sakte hai ...

A voice : hum batate hai


Naina dekhti hai aur khan bhi vaha ranveer khada hai ...

Khan : tum

Rv : ha mai kyu koi shak hai

Khan ko 440 volt ka jhatka lga coz vo aadmi koi aur nhi alfaaz tha

Naina : tume kya lga yeh tumara aadmi hai yeh indian army ka ek spy hai ranveer jo piche kuch saalon se tumari gang mai kaam kar raha hai alfaaz bankar ...

Khan ko ab samaj mai aaya ki naina aur raj us se 4 kadam aage nikle vo alfaaz uska aadmi nhi tha balki army ka officer tha jisko vo apna bharosemand samjta tha ...


Tabhi vo commandos raj aur baki sab ko khol dete hai

Raj : tum khud ko bahut smart samjte ho na khan par yeh jaal humne 8 saal phle se bichaya hua tha tume fasane ke liye ...

All are shocked
Khan : u r joking


Raj : m nt joking khan sahab vo AK urf col rai bhi to tumara hi ek aadmi tha na

Naina is also shocked usko bhi yakeen nhi hua jis AK ka case usne 2 saal phle solve kiya tha vo is se is tarah connected hoga ...


Raj : aise hairan mat ho khan tumari talash hume tab se hai jab se kma mai triggers chori ka ilzaam naveen par lga tha ...

Aalekh nd naina shocked ...


Raj : kma ke triggers chori , naveen ka fasna , niar aur bhargav ka isme shamil hona , lala tumara ek mohra tha , aur col rai urff AK tumare liye kaam karta tha hai na ...

Khan : tum

Raj ; kya mai yahi soch rahe ho na k mujko kaise pta chala ...tumko fasane ke liye maine naveen ne insab ne aur na hane kitne officers ne apna time lagaya hoga ...ek ek karke kadi judti gyi aur chehre saamne aate gye hamara maksad tha india mai terrirism failane wale gang ke leader ko pakdna ...tabhi humne 8 saal phle ranveer ko bheja tha us group mai shamil hone ...


Ranveer : 8 saal lage muje tunara bharosa jeetne ke liye par desh ke naam 8 saal to kya 8 janam kurbaan hai hamare ...aur rehaan kon hai jaana nhi chahoge jiska naam kabhi naaz to kabhi raj ne use kiye ...

Khan : kon

Rv : mai hu rehaan

All are shocked specially raj

Rv : maine aur naveen ne tumare gang mao shamil hone ke liye kya nhi kiya tha vo aamir bna aur mai alfaaz ...tum tak mai pahuncha ...naaz se rehaan bankar mai mila muje lga tha vo bhi teri tarah hogi par nhi vo to bahut alag thi us liye maine uski zingdi aur barbaad nhi hone di aur rehaan ki maut ka natak kiya tha ...firse alfaaz banke tunare saamne aa gya aur finally hamari mehnat rang laai tumko pakad hi liya...


Khan : itna bada dhokha hamare saath par agar tum alfaaz banke naaz ke saamne ghoomte the to usne tumko pehchana kaise nhi vo to bahut emotional hai in mamlo mai ...

Naaz : bas yahi galti ki aapne muje kamjor samjne ki raj bhai me mujpar bharosa karke muje sab bataya aur maine unhi se seekha khud ko kaabu karna mai janti thi alfaaz hi rehan hai aur rehan koi aur nhi ranveer hai par khud ko itna majboot bna liya tha k chahe jaan chali jaati hum sachai tumtak nhi aane dete ...



Ranveer : ur times over mr khan ab sari zindgi jail mai sadna


Khan :tume kya lga major rajvir ki hume itni aasni se hara doge kabhi nhi . Aisi koi jail nhi bani jo hume kaid kar sake ...yeh din tumara aakhri din hoga ...but hume tume nhi tumari beti ko marege tum dono to jeete ji mar jaoge hahahahaha ...


Naina : chu ke to dikha meri beti ko tujko zinda zameen mai dafan nhi kiya to bolna


Tabhi khan bhaaga uske hath mai gun thi jo usne raina ki taraf ki

Voice : a gun shot ...then one more shot ...
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Today is new year ...3 months ho gye the raj naina ko vapis aaye huye sab happy the but naina vo to jaise kho si gyi thi ..khush hokar bhi khush nhi

Naina crying silently ...

Raj comes nd sits near her

Raj : kyu ro rhi ho ...kuch nhi hoga usko vo vapis aayegi hamare pass bahut jald dekh lena vo humko chod ke nhi ja sakti ...

Naina : agar nhi aai to

Raj : jarur aayegi abhi chalo sab wait kar rahe hai neeche...

Raina** (an eternal love story)**

PART ...73 (LAST PART )
ITS 31 DEC NIGHT MEANS BEGiNING OF A NEW YEAR


Sab log raj nd naina ke ghar par hai its new year night to sab ne celebtation ka plan kiya tha kisi disco ya fir club me jakar party karne ki jagh in logo ne socha kyu na apno ke saath apne hi ghar mai new year ki shuruaat ki jaye ...

Its time for grand celebration for all of them unhone itna bada case jo solve kiya tha desh ke sabse bade dushmano ko pakda tha aur ITG group ko destroy kiya tha ...


Sab log party preprations mai lage huye hai ...

Huda : oye kaidi hum ne to sari tayari kar li par yeh phoolan aur rajvir sir kahan hai yr ...


Aalekh : honge yahi pe vo naina ka mood thoda off hai na par tension mat lo sir usko le aayege yr ...


Tabhi peeche se kisi bache ki aawaz aai ...

" AALU " nd yeh sun ke sab hasne lage

Aalekh us bache ke pass gya

Aalekh : oye naina ki bachi i mean raina tu mujko mamu nhi bula sakti jab dekho aalu aalu bol ke meri izzat ka kachra karti hai

Raina makes a very cute face nd all laughs raina ko neelu ne uthaya tha

Aalekh : haso mat tum sab isne sab ke naam rakhe hai fir mere naam pe kyu haste ho tum sab


Tabhi raj aata hai nd naina bhi



Raj : kya hua meri princess ko hmmm 'aalu ' ne daanta kya

Aur sab fir se hasne lage

Aalekh : sir aap bhi aur yeh raina sab ke naam rakhti hai but mera naam aalu kyu ...

Raj : aalekh ka short form aalu

Nd once again all laughs but naina nhi hasi vo sad thi


Tabhi ek ladki aati hAi

Huda : oye tum sab ko kisi se milwana hai yeh tanvi hai meri gf

All : what

Huda : ha yr vo mai isko kafi time se janta hu tum sab ko batane ka time hi nhi mila

Raj : huda tum is bar serious ho na

Huda : ha sir aur maine to mummy ji se bhi milwa diya isko

Raj : chlo gud

Tab sab tanvi se milte hai but naina abhi bhi sad hai
Sherry naina ke pass gyi

Sherry : naina kya hua tum aise sad kyu ho

Naina : tum janti ho sherry mai sad kyu hu hum sab yaha khush ho rahe hai md vaha vo kuch bol bhi nhi sakti yeh sab hamari wajh se hua agar us din vo aage nhi aai hoti to vo kMina khan meri beti ko maar deta ...

Raj: naina kyu ten le rahi ho vo thik hai yr aur doc ne bhi bola hai ki vo jaldi thik ho jayegi ...

Tabhi pooja ali yudi aate hai unke saath sare bache hai naveen ki beti pooja nd ali ka beta ...jai nd veer ...aur baki sab bhi sab bahut khush hai ...


Pooja : oye naina tu abhi tak us hadse ke bare mai soch rahi hai dekh kuch nhi hoga naaz ko ...

Naina : kaise bhool jau vo din pooja meri wajh se naaz is halat mai aai thi ...

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FLASHBACK ::::


Jab khan raina ki taraf gun lekar bhaaga usko pata tha ki vo nhi bachega magar vo chahta tha ki vo marne se phle raj aur naina ki zindgi ujaad de unki beti ko unse cheen le kyunki aaj raj ki wajh se hi uska mission fail hua tha vo gun lekar raina ko shoot krne laga ...

A voice of gunshot ...

Sabhi darr gaye commandos khan ko pakadne ke liye bhaage kisi ko kuch samj mai nhi aaya ki kya hua ...raina gunshot sun ke bahut zor se rone lagi ...


Khan ne dekha raina zinda hai to goli kisko lagi

Nd then ranveer ne dekha naaz zameen par padi thi khoon se lathpath raina ko goli lagti is se phle vo saamne aa gyi ...

Then one more gunshot ...

Ranveer ne khan ko goli maar di magar uske haath pe aur vo neeche gir gya ...

Naina raj nd all run towards naaz
Naina : kyu kiya aisa tumne naaz agar tumko kuch ho gya to mai khud ko kabhi maaf nhi kar paaugi

Naaz : bhabhi to kya is little angle ko kuch ho jane deti vo to insaniyat bhool chuka hai pR mai nhi naaz mar jayegi par apni bhai ki aankho mai aansu nhi aane degi itne time baad unko unka parivaar mila tha kaise kuch ho jane deti ...

Raj is crying silently aalekh ne jakar raina ko sambhala nd commandos ne khan ko pakada ...

Raj : mere liye mar sakti hai par agar tujko kuch ho gya to tere us bhai ka kya hoga ...

Naaz : kuch nhi hoga aapko ...

Naaz ko bolne mai kaafi problem ho rahi thi

Naina : plz isko koi jaldi se hispital lekar chalo ...

Naaz : no bhBhi mere pass time nhi hai ...ranveer

Ranveer naaz ke close aaye he is also crying

Naaz : m sry ranveer i knw tum sirf apne mission ke liye rehaan bane the par ...par is naaz ko agar zindgi mai kisi se pyar hua hai to vo tum ho

Ranveer is tooo strong army officer but first time in his life he is crying loudly coz he cant control his emotions ...

Ranveer :m sry naaz

Naaz : no sry mat bolo tumari koi galti nhi hai mujko nhi pta tha tab ki tum rehaan nhi ho par muje tumari sacahai se pyar hua kyunki tumne khud muje bta diya tha ki tum kon ho aur kyu aaye the meri life mai ...

Raj naina nd all also dnt knw ki naaz ko phle se hi ranveer ki asliat ke bare mai pata tha ...

Ranveer : ha jooth bola tha maine ki mai rehaan hu par naaz i really love u pta nhi kab tumse pyar ho gya tha is liye mai nhi chahta tha ki tum kisi dhokhe mai raho is liye jis din raj tumko zakhmi halat mai mila tha aur usi din maine tumko sab sach bata diya tha aur fir rehaan ke marne ka darama ...mai bas is wakt ka intzaar kar raha tha ki kabtume sach mai apne dil ki baat batauga ...par tum aise muje chod ke nhi ja sakti ...


Naaz : ranveer

Bas itna bol kar naaz behosh ho gyi ...sab bahut darr gaye the naaz ko jaldi se hospital lekar gaye ...

Peeche se army ne sari buliding ko seal kar diya khan ne jithe terririst ko apne saath bulaya tha sab maare gaye .har tv news channals par yahi news thi ki khan pakda gya air sab is baat ke liye army officers ko thanks bol rahe the ...



Udhar hospital mai doc naaz ko operation ke liye le gaye the 8 ghante tak operation chalta raha ...doc ne bataya tha ki goli naaz ke dil ke pass lagi thi is liye usko bachana mushkil tha ...naaz ko life support system par rakha gya tha ...


FLASHBACK ENDS ::::

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AAJ 3 MOnths ho gye is baat ko lekar

Naaz aaj bhi life support par hai ranveer ko yakeen hai ki uska pyaar naaz ko vapis le aayega aur naina usne to shyd khud ko hi doshi maan liya is sab ke liye ...


Pooja : tu ten mat le naina bhagwaan itna bura nhi ho sakta ki naaz thik na ho vo jarur sahi ho jayegi ...


Tabhi nishant sameer nd aamiya aate hai( sameer nd aamiya ka character kafi chota tha is fic mai jitna jaruri tha utna hi so hope u ppl dnt mind )

Sameer : bhagwan bura nhi hai pooja ji unhone aapki sun li hai naina

Naina : kya

Aamiya : ha naina naaz ka life support aaj hata diyA gya nd she is able to survive without it...

Naina yeh sun kar bahut khush ho gyi nd raj bhi

Raj : sach iska matlab ab vo thik hai

Tabhi ranveer aata hai

Ranveer : ji ha naaz bilkul thik hai nd ab doc ne bola hai ki usko kisi life support ki jarurat nhi hai mai khud hairain hu ki ek hi din mai yeh kaise ho gya shyd uski will power bahut strong hai is liye ...


Raj : m soo happy ki naaz thik ho gyi hai naina ab to tum khush ho na


Naina : ha raj bahut nd naina hugs raj

Tabhi raina neelu ki lap se jump karke raj ke pass aa gyi ...

Aalekh : yeh dekho inse bardasht nhi hota ki unke papa ko koi dusra hug kare ...


Alll laughs at this ...

Raj : chalo guys ab party ke liye ready ho jao sab nd ha rv plz agar naaz aa sakti hai to usko le aao i promise koi shor sharaba nhi hoga jisse usko koi pro ho ...

Rv : sure raj nd vaise bhi naaz madam apne bhaiya ke bina reh nhi sakti so mai ke aauga usko . . .. .


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PARTY TIME ...

yeh party sab se different thi na koi shor sharba na loud music na koi hard drinks ...kuch tha to bas apno ka saath ...dosto ka saath aur sab ka pyaar ...


Sabhi taraf flower decoration thi nd lights bhi... pure hall mai andhera tha roshni thi to bas deo aur candles ki jo water nd rose pettles ke beech mai jal rahe the sab ki dressing na to casual thi na koi theme ...jiska jo man tha vo vo pehn ke aaya ...raj aur naina dono indian outfit mai the naina in beautiful silver sari mai nd raj black shervani mai ...


Raina little se white color ke dress mai bilkul little pari lag rahi thi ...

Huda joker bana tha to yudi bear ...jinko dekh ke sabhi bache bahut khush the ...

Aalekh nd neelu basanti aur veer bane the nd pooja nd ali heer aur ranjha ...

Is party mai naveen nd asstha bhi the nd they both became love birds ...



Nishant prince charming bna tha nd sherry sindrella ..

Sameer md aamya dono daaku ban gye hehe

Sab little kidooo in sab ko delh ke bahut happy the ...


Tabhi ranveer aaya naaz ke saath naaz bahut weak thi chal nhi paa rhi thi is liye rv usko utha ke laaya tha


Pooja : oye hoye kine sohne lag rahe ho tum dono

Rv ne naaz ko couch par bithaya

Raj uske pass gya nd kissed her forhead

Raj : kaisi hai meri chutki

Naaz :achi hu bhai aap kaise ho aur meri rainu kaisi hai...

Raina ne naaz ko dekha nd jhat se uske pass chali gyi naina bahut haapy thi naaz ko dekh ke vo dono baate kar rahe the ...

Tabhi huda aata hai

Huda : oye suno sabhi 12 bajne wale hai aur new year hai to yeh bacha party bhi nhi so rahi hai ...


Yudi :arre huda yeh bache bhi life enjoy kar rahe hai aur hum bhi ...


Raj : rv naaz we r happy for u both

Naaz : thanks bhai

Tabhi 12 baj jate hai nd all r cheer up happy new year sabhi taraf lights hai aasmaan mai fireworks ho rha hai its a new year of new hopes, new duties nd a new life ...

Tabhi naina ek song gaati hai nd sabhi ek circle mai khade hai ...

Naina :: (to raj nd raina )
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Naveen :::
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Aastha::
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( nd all starts moving in circle nd all s hands are in each others hands)

Alll ::::


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Naina ( to raj )...
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Alll toghather ::::
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Naaz ( sings nd comes in center of circle)
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Ranveer comes nd wipes her tear away
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All toghather ::::

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All sings nd dance toghather nd welcoming a new year with lots of happiness ...


Sach mai zindgi pyar ka nagma hai maujon ki rawani hai zindgi kuch aur nhi teri meri kahani hai ...

Inki yeh zindgi bahut se toofano se guzri bahut se dard saath dekhe aur bahut se khushiyan ...aur zindgi bas yun hi chalti rahegi hamesha ...agar kamzor padege to apno ka saath aur pyar sambhalega ...aur fir se har museebat ko haste haste paar kar jayege ...so yeh to thi hamare raj aur naina ki kahani kuch suni kuch sunani ...

A perfect happy ending ...

Hope u all love my writting bahut si galatia ki maine isme first time tha but aage aur acha karugi kaisi lagi meri yeh choti si koshih hamare raj aur naina ko milane ki jarur batana frnds achi ya buri aapke cmnts bahut keemti hai mere liye ...

LOVE U ALL

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LOVE RN FOREVER ...


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ARRRE kahan chale aap log itni jaldi hamare rn ki aage ki life ki jhalak to dekh lijiye ...


AFter TWO YEARS ::::

naina hospital mai thi aur raj room ke bahar bechain hokar tehal raha tha raina abhi chalne lagi hai aur papa ke saath equally tensed hai kyunki papa tensed hai na ...

Raina : papa aap daro mat mumma lo kuch ni hoga vo hamare liye angel lekar aayegi ...

Raj : ha beta i knw but papa bahut excited hai samaj nhi aa raha kya kare ...

Raina : chup karke baith jayie varna daant padegi

Aur raj bechara chup ho gya par excitement mai vo bench pe baitha baitha uchal raha tha afterall naina is giving birth to their second child ...


Tabhi doc bahar aaye aur raj bhaag ke unke pass gya


Raj : kya hua doc jaldi batao

Raina : doc uncle papa ko mat batana mujko batao hamari bet lagi hai mai mumma ki side hu bolo na baby girl hai ya boy ...

Raj : doc plz jaldi bolo

Doc : relaxe col rajveer congrats aapko beti hui hai ...

Aur yeh sunte hi raj hawa mai uchlane laga

Raj : yeahhh

Raina : papa chup ho jao varna log aapko marege ...

Aur raj chup ho gya thodi der baad baki sab bhi andar aa gaye ...

Raj aaya nd naina bed pe leti hui thi raj ne naina ke maathe pe kiss kiya

Raj : thanks jaanu meri 2nd princess ko mere pass lane ke liye

Naina smiles

Raina : cheating cheating aapne bola tha mai princess hu

Raj : aap bhi ho aur bo bhi aap badi princess ho na aur vo choti ...

Raina : yeahhh m big princess ...


Naina : ab aap khush ho na aapko to shuru se hi lagta tha ki girl hogi ...

Raj : ofcouse vo to tum aur raina hi bol rahe the bhaiya chahiye huuu meri princess ne mujko phle se hi hint de diya tha ...

Naina smiles vo raj ko aise dekh ke bahut happy thi

Sab ne dono ko congratulate kiya

Aalekh : sir iska naam kya hoga

Huda : ha sir ji raina to aap dono ki union thi RAJ+ NAINA = RAINA ab isko kya bulaoge...

Raj apni beti ko haath me lete huye


Raj : yeh bhi meri aur naina ki union hai iska naam hoga

NEERJA yani ki NAINA + RAJ = NEERJA


Meri do princess RAINA & NEERJA


ALLL ARE HAPPY ESPLY raj with his two daughters ...nd his life is complete nd his family tooo



HAPPY ENDING ...

LOTS OF LOVE ...crystal

Good that you are continuing it.

i finished it dear ab nxt start hai

Awesome awesomely superb update😛😛😃tooo good plz continue soon thanks for pm😉😉😉

its complete story dear i dnt knw ur name 0913155

Read in all go
Lovely story
Amazing ending
Loved it.
Write more. Stor in rajveer. And nania in LRL track

Originally posted by: AimanAsim

Read in all go
Lovely story
Amazing ending
Loved it.
Write more. Stor in rajveer. And nania in LRL track

thamks dearr here s my new ff
www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4535637&TPN=31&#p132400083

Thanks 4 d pm kinu
Bt i had already read ur ff on Facebook
It's awesome fanfiction dear
U had great worked
Luv yuhh
Millee 😛