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A_BA

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Caught up from Chapters 46 to 54 - here is my comment:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/126666154

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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

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What an update Jen...am spellbound..I was in tears reading Kushi's letters and Arnav's guilt & suffering.Finally Kushi loosing all hope and throwing shikara was so sad.. good that Kushi moved out and she didn't tell her parents about her breakup..Sujatha would have forced her to get back with Aman..!! Akash is the savior..I didn't get wether Anita purposely sent Arnav to South Africa..!! thats bad if she did..I hope she won't annoy him much in India..she better not meddle much in their relationship..from the beginning everyone messed up with them..finally its time for them to solve their differences together..
I liked the fact that Kushi agreed that even she was at fault..wish Arnav had read the mails sooner..why did Kushi ask Arnav's permission to come to his apt? she could have just walked in..

Finally coming to Sujata...till now I didn't blame her 100% because thats how most of the desi mothers are..but now she has crossed all limits..better for Kushi to move out..but looks like Sujata assumes she has moved in with Arnav :-))

loved the update Jen..hope to read the re - love story start..Anita will need Arnav's help to patao Aman ;-)

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

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I just read it during my lunch break in school. I became so impatient and was checking every now and then whether you updated it not.

Thanks a lot for updating whereas you are so occupied with your baby.

I'm just amused again by your writing. How do you write so beautifully! Awesome depiction of intricate emotions of Arnav and Khushi.

khushi's emails are all master piece. How a person can bear any grudge how she pleaded him, expressed her feeling, apologized him for everything. She poured out her myriad love in her every word. She literally compelled Arnav to feel guilty for avoiding her. No wonder why he became so desperate to get her back in his life. I just loved his determination and desperation. Yes he indeed loves her, immensely.

Arnav actually was going on the right track to find khushi. But poor fellow even could not imagine that khushi hid her break up from her mother. It surprised me that she even didn't tell her about her whereabouts. She must have lots of grudge against Sujata. And I think Sujata deserves it. She failed to understand her daughter, moreover she misjudged her and mistrusted her as well. It was good that Arnav also did not clear Sujata's misconception. His next attempt to knock Anita though gave him some clue, but it also failed. But why Anita didn't give him the right info?. I guess she also wanted to punish him to give her sister so much pain.

Finally he made the right decision to contact akash. when all the door closed then God shows us the hidden door. Akash indeed was his life saver.

Khushi is bearing lots of pain and agony in her heart. My heart cringed for her. She though was trying to move on but her heart is still encompassed by Arnav.

I just can't wait for the much waited reunion and see how Arnav wins her back.

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Fau Zi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Finally read it, amazing, just amazing...reminded me of a time from my own past, esp the letters where Khushi pours Her heart out!!!!😉

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BarunFan1212

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Un res👏.

After a very long waiting and stalking your page everyday im so happy to see your update. It was like having hot chocolate (my favourite) on a very freezing winter day. 😛.

You made me cry reading this update. I felt so bad for Khushiy. What a golden heart she've got. All her emails wow they are so insight full and very touching. Hats off to u👏.

Damn you Arnav u should have at least just glanced at them to see what she wanted. Or written . Now see u r paying the price by running continent to continent. You fool how can u thing u could live without her or vice verse.

Jenny you always amaze me with your writing and no wonder you did it again.

Excellent update. But not enough for this hungry soul who missed it so much.

Waiting to see how Arnav will woo khushi!

Until u post again i will stalk ur page everyday😉

Thanks for the PM.

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

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Ek taraz-e-taghaful hai wo, woh un ko mubarak,

Ek arz-e-tamanna hai so Ham karty rahen gy.

Sujata indeed disappointed me for not understanding where her daughter's happiness lies. I thought she would take time to come to the terms that Khushi is irrevocably in love with Arnav and they are destined to be together. She had left no choice for Khushi and eventually she lost all her hopes that someday her mother will give her blessings and accept Arnav for her. Sigh'

I can't believe this why Khushi's mother doesn't know about her whereabouts. She took an assignment of MSF, on the contrary, it got canceled, and by the end she reached India to attend a wedding with Anita and her mother don't know at all what's going on in her daughter's life??? That's unbearable!!!

Anita, she is darling. She sticks with her sister's side through thick & thin. BTW, where her story reached with Aman?

Khushi, her e-mails which she sent to Arnav, make me very emotional. A parent is supposed to be someone who sticks by you, through thick and thin. And they just let her go, to struggle with heartbreak and a disappointment. Jenny, you breathtakingly portrayed Khushi's emotions in those few emails. This chapter was so gripping and engrossing.

I actually felt Arnav's remorse in those moments when he read her e-mails and his helplessness & fear for Khushi when he came to know about the incident that happened in Boguila. My heart was broken along with Khushi when her all hopes slowly turned into ashes when Arnav hadn't replied to her emails.

I loved that moment when he swears to himself that this MSF assignment is going to be her last, and he'll make sure of it. That was a very sweet moment. Now Dr. Arnav is going to woo his doctorni Sahiba. Let's see how he will woo Khushi. Excited to know what you have in store for us.

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sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

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This update was very different...
Khushi ' s emails were a much needed explanation to Arnav...!!! But she suffered too much...
Though she was wrong...but reading the emails...my heart went out to her...!!!!!
They both suffered too much emotionally...!
But I love one thing about them...that even after so many ups and downs they still love each other... They are waiting fo each other. ...
Now finally they r going to meet...
Arnav has a lot of pacifying to do... Khushi won't give in easily I think...
Waiting waiting. ...Eagerly waiting. ...
Very beautiful update Di...
Very well written as always. ...
Plz update the next soon...tc

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maina95131

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

What an emotional chapter...

Finally arnav reads the emails...he better be ready to grovel.

I can't help but feel disappointed in arnav regarding his behavior. He should have been supporting khushi while her dad was going through health problems.

Khushi had to deal with so much from all directions.

They both have suffered I hope happy days are here again for them.

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Lovelyday

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

I have plenty of things to say.. Don't know where to begin .. Let me begin by agreeing with khushi that she does have a skill in writing and y won't she? She's got ur fingers and head now, doesn't she;)? She really moved me with her emails.. It's a wonder how well a lot of us can express while writing and come across as confused and unclear verbally.. I m glad she wrote. She was really getting on his nerves with her touch me not attitude without giving proper explanations at that time ( when he was desperately holding on)... Atleast it's clear now . I think khushi loves completely .. As in when she loves , she gives her all.. She's compassionate and caring .. She wants the best for everybody.. Even if it's a rival.. Her moral compass is always at an all time high.. I can't imagine the heart break and heart ache that she endured when her emails had no replies .. Arnav , on the other hand, is more scarred and more complex here I think , thx to his complicated past.. I did admire him though at the time when he kept it all together even when she was being stubborn.. But where he lost it was after the break up.. It seems obvious bcos he just was put thru another bitter relation ending not too long ago...
What worries me is the fact that while Arnav is at the state of 'late reaction' to her emails right now ,,, she is at the state of his 'don't bother me' and her heartbreak of the girl's voice at his home.. They both r at different levels.. He might have forgotten the club scenario while she might be focussing only on that...
Oh how I wish I could get them both in a room and make them talk , even if I have to tie them down!!! So many things to clear.. So many miscommunications.. So much heartbreak.. So much lack of trust.. So many insecurities ... BUT .. As they say , love conquers all.. They r in deep love ..
Can't wait for more..
I have to say Sujatha is one of the most disliked fictional character for me.. She is an example of how a mother should not be.. I hope she does care for her husband and not argue him to a point of anything major..
Loved how Arnav was made to go on a wise goose chase .. I would have sent him to Europe next before letting him know where she is..

One more thing --- I love your writing pace.. U write fast paced updates .. Lovely to read them.. Months pass in an update.. Although I m sure it must be torture in reality , to be in their state and weeks pass with no respite from their misery ..
Loved this amazing update.. Now, will it be too early if I ask when ur next update will be?!? It would keep me sane and I would stop stalking ur ff in case I had some idea.. Knowing the next update will be critical, I will go nuts if I had no idea ..

Edited by Serene77 - 10 years ago