A Multi-Fandom D3 Fiction : The Bereaved. [Thread 2]

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Hello Guys,

I have been working on this fiction for some time now, I have had low response there. I figured it may better if I shifted it to the fan fiction's section from the Writer's corner.

SO, we rewind back to 12th January when Swayam plans to leave the college.This one is sort of depressing, so if you don't want to read, you should exit now. But yeah, it has other characters also.

It's not based on any couple but basically the main focus of the limelight is on Swayam.

Well, frankly [no-offence to SwaRon lovers], up till now I have thought that the character of Swayam hasn't really been give much importance. His decisions always revolve around Sharon, which I specifically and personally don't like!

True, now the CVs and Palki are doing a splendid job on both the couple and the individuals. But this was just a random thought! I wanted to do my own justice to him and his character, and build up a new image of him. I hope I succeed in it.

All the fan fictions and ideas are my own ideas. Please do not copy or steal. All the works are copyrighted under my name under the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988. No story or chapter may be copied, published, reproduced or transmitted on some other website or social network. People who try to copy or claim my work as their own will serve consequences.


Cheers,

N.



P.S : I want to make one thing clear, that this fiction is not specific to any couple, be it Swayam-Sharon or Kria-Reyansh. So please do not expect me to focus on any one of them. And if you had something like this in mind, this really is not your calling. This fiction will focus on ALL characters from the show.

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Rockingbhardwaj thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I so loved the story..

This is great..

Do update soon dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...

Continue soon...

Will be waiting for both ur updates :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I logged in after 1 year just to read the updates on your work...please update soon..
pratik...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A/N


There are some key things that I want my readers to understand, given that this matter, nearly became a battle ground on my previous thread. I respect all of your views, and really, even if you criticize, I shall stomach it, given it limits itself to constructivism and does not amount to bashing of my story or my characters.

I have personally come across so many fictions where the characters only have the name and their personality differs like sun and stars. I have changed the way Swayam is, and I hope you respect my characterization and my imagination. Also, it is my call who gets what screen space in my fiction, and really, you cannot comment on it.

I really hope you all will empathize with the amount of efforts that goes in writing. I will take criticism in it's true and healthy spirit, and again, bashing of my writing and my characters would not be tolerated.

If you look forward to mush and romance between Sharon and Swayam, and other couples too for that matter, I say, please read some other fiction. Also, please read up the introduction of my fiction, which it clearly says, "I wanted to do my own justice to him and his character, and build up a new image of him. I hope I succeed in it." him as in Swayam.

I have always, and always refrained myself from writing mush, and there have been some times I have wrote it, but never liked so much so. So please, if you look out for that, I would have to politely let you go from here. This is my writing style and my way of imagining the characters, and I shall not change it.


I hope this comes across clear.
N.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey following ur write ups from a long time...nd u do write very well...nd bereaved is onecof its kind ff on d3's characters...nd specially swayam...this a very welcum effort...i just saw that thr wa s some issue...not wanna say nythng on it...just one thng...there areany here who are waiting for ur updates...so do cntinue it nd dat too soon...nd update exiguous too...nd accept my buddy request...nd pm me wen u nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.
I am planning to update in a few days of a time. Let me know if my efforts are worth it.

N.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome ff
read all the parts in two days
i loved swayam's character the way you have described it
every part has its own beauty
would love to read more from you
please update asap
ps- ur an amazing writer :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz update
w8ing eagerly :)

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