D3 FF : Bereaved [Multifandom] #1 - Page 2

yup...nyc update add me to ur pm list!

Interesting read it was ... I know I shudnt b expecting anything positive..but thatz ok since u write so well...liked the way u hav mixed up characters and handled the script

hey this is so cool plzzz continue soon n waiting to know what happened to swayam😲

Hello Peeps. 🤗

I have finally come up with the update with loads of editing, re-editing and more editing. I hope it is up to the mark.

One more thing, here we suppose all what has happened up till now has already taken place, but with a few changes.

1)Kriya hasn't left ever since; she and Rey are officially a couple.

2)Taani is just Swayam's sister.

3)Rey hasn't been suspended and he is still the GS with Kriya as his assistant.

4)Weaklings won the Footloose and weren't disqualified, leads to no Face-off!

5)Sharon and Shivam did not have the tiff. Dazzlers had won the eliminations. So therefore, they are still friends.

6)SwaRon are not in any kind of a relationship, and are sour with each other.

7)Smriti knows about Kria's dancing and Rey and she is okay with it

8)Sharon is Kria's younger step sister. That is, Gautam's second marriage with another girl who died, Smriti the first and a divorcee. They have patched up and 4 of them live together.

Without any further ado, read and I hope you have a nice time reading it. A lot of effort has been put in it.

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Okay! So that was bad! Really abhorrent. I am highly disillusioned and disappointed with it.

Though I had something really anomalous in my head. And this is completely conflicting.

I know, too much hair splitting. But this is all I could manage after my Maths SA and before my science.

So, I now sign off as I have to go and study the worst created subject ong the Earth : Science.

It's really mind boggling and everything goes over my head.

Anyways, I guess this one will turn into 2 more parts.

So, I might change it into an SS! What do you say?

And.. Don't expect the next update before Friday.

It might take me ridicoulsly long time to think about the track. I need to go through it once again!

Please do drop in your views.

New entries are yet to come; though I have this gut feeling might contradict my track from what I thought!

Anyhow, thanks for your support.! :D

And thanks to all those who commented. Will reply soon to all of them.

Thanks for showering your love on an amateur like me... :)

I was bereft reading your response.

I Love D3 and especially *Swayam* aka ShanTANNU .

So I hope I do justice.

Feel free to criticize.. =D

__Love Nivriti ^_*

(Ready with a helmet! =P)

Nice one...liked Swayam's character sketch very much as there was a proper balance to everything...Sharon's POV was a nice read...so when will he spill the beans to his friends... luking forward to the next update

OKay.. One Confession.