ArShi FF: Splintered Dreams ~Ch 04: Pg 80~ |04-May-2015|

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

given Arjun's adventurous life and Arnav's bitter past the way the Raizadas behave is not unusual ... It is difficult to trust a stranger and here it is Khushi for the Raizadas and Raizadas for Khushi... now what and who made Khushi return to Shanthivan

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Show Khushi strong n the one who stands on her own feet n walks away

I seriously dnt like how the Raizada's are treating her or thinking of her

Jus like all fingers are not same , all people also cant be same

Cant they get that

I wish Khushi walks away n makes her life

They do meet again but when Khushi is more stronger

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arnshi

@arnshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

another shock for khushi...might be her house was sold...

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

awesome update...i was having this feeling that though arnav pissed with arjun and his way of living but deep down he is going to miss his brother cause these relations r very rare in life...and being elder and sensible, arnav must be having that feeling of "kaash" he could have done more to bring arjun back on right path or put his mind on right track somehow...but not every one lucky enough to get second chances...and death harsh reality from where no coming back at all...arvind seems very very practical guy...either on arjun matter or khushi's he was damn straight forward..and very right in his arguments too...

ratna poor mother ...her pain no one can understand actually...the child who is weak in the lot is the one for whom a mother more prayers directed towards...i really feel for her...and devyani she simply different...hehe...she is strong and having advantage of her age so no one can disobey her and she is using that pretty well in her favour or for family name and sake :)

its right that in future anyone can come up with arjun's baby seeing his dark character...but i guess khushi being wife is not any one random here...she is having edge as long as he not having many more wives too :)...khushi status is pretty decent in my eyes ...no matter wt she the wife of arjun..

arnav past , so he is a man who is having no injured heart cause his past experience has killed the heart itself..reason ...hmm lavanya...the women who actually the root cause of bitterness or not to trust even ur shadow in arnav's case ...it makes perfect sense now...i am happy at least he able to see through khushi eyes ...which not lying to him...but yeah he in denial state thats another story :)

i am perfectly fine with arnav character ..as told u before also...he totally justifying his actions..it may sound rude but it is apt and real ...but one thing i am sure about is that one day he going to feel dhak dhak he ll get to meet his own heart that day once again :)

khushi is already sweet heart in my eyes...i am so happy that she continued her studies and its final semester for her after which she wanted to find a job for her and her baby...now wt happened at her place that she need to be back in shantivan which is having not so much shanti for her...her amma words awesome awesome.."to get to some place, it is important to get out of one place. And one needs to get out in time; or else, it gives rise to complications and misunderstandings"..loved these words of her amma...how practical 👏 ...sorry for my long comment ...kiya kerain control nahi hota ...lol...loving it tanvi...u doing fab job here :)

Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

A definite awesome chapter looking into the family's grief and your character development through it. Excellent writing.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

That was a clever ploy by dado...

Wonder what has really happened at G H. To make her return to RM.

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enlightenme

@enlightenme

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Khushi will have to come back to Shanti van. Does that mean the Raizadas have done something to manipulate Khushi to stay with them. The whole family is filled with selfish people, these people are now going to try and force themselves on Khush because she has the Raizada heir in her womb. This is so downrIght cruel and unfair.

I read your reply to the last chapter. Now I'm really scared for Khushi if Arnav is like his brother. I just hope he doesn't force himself on her and make her feel helpless and humiliated at any part of the story. Khushi had suffered enough, and she is already scared of Arnav because he looks similar to his brother.

update the next chapter ASAP.

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Zeehana

@Zeehana

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Arnav is paranoid just like in show trying to thing worst of Khushi even if in heart he knows Khushi is innocent .

And I bet whatever shocked Khushi is engineered by Arnav in order to bring Khushi back in his house because only he knew about Khushi's plan to leave.

I do hope she starts studying and become independent and slowly win everyone's heart especially Arnav's.

Is Khushi terrified of Arnav because she thinks him similar to her husband?

Great chapter ...