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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4
Delhi Headquarters

Major General Gaur's office
MG: Thank you for all your work Captain Ahluwalia. Major Chauhan is going to lead a task force to follow up on your leads. The force will include Lt. Yuvraj Sahni and a few other members of his unit.

Naina: And me?

Abhimanyu: I am sorry Naina. You are too close to his.

Naina looked at Abhi incredulously.

Naina: Major Chauhan I think time and again I have demonstrated that I can keep my personal life separate from my professional and I don't like my skills being questioned.

Abhimanyu: Naina please..

Naina ignored Abhi and turned to Major General Gaur.

Naina: Sir I have a background in intelligence and I have relevant local context. I will only be an asset to the mission, not a liability.

MG: Major Chauhan, a moment please.

MG and Abhi stepped into his inner room.
MG: Major I think Naina is right.

Abhi: Sir I have no doubt on her capabilities. But when it comes to Rajveer, she will go to any extent, putting her own life on the line without a thought,

MG: And as her superior it's your responsibility to harness this energy. I have decided Major. Captain Naina will be accompanying you.

Abhi and Naina made their way back to Poonch. Naina gave him a royal ignore throughout.

Abhi: Naina we have to work on this mission together. Ignoring me isn;t really an option.

Naina: You are again doubting my professional capabilities Major Chauhan?

Abhi: Naina, stop calling me Major Chauhan. I have no doubt on your bailities. But I also have no doubt on the intensity of your love for Rajveer. Naina, you do realize this could all be a bluff. The chances of Raj being alive are next to nil.

Naina: And do you know how much better that is than the certainty that he is dead? Abhi I finally feel alive after all these years. I don't care if it's all a bluff. I just want to allow myself to be hopeful again, to be alive again

Naina and Abhi reached Poonch. Lt Sahni had some good news for them. His sources had found the location of the hideout that Captain Dhawan had been operating out off. It was in the middle of think forests and Lt Sahni's men had begun patrolling that area.

The three of them left to join the patrol. A few hours into the patrol they spotted a man slumped on the ground leaning against a tree. Naina's heart skipped a beat. Could this be Rajveer Sir?

Abhi approached the man cautiously.
Abhi: Drop your weapons and raise your hands in the air.

The man weekly raised his hands but his face was overcome with joy on seeing the army patrol. Naina approached hesitantly. She was disappointed to see that it wasn't Rajveer

Man: Captain Amar Singh.. I am.. captain amar singh

Abhi remembered that Captain Amar Singh was a highly decorated officer and had been declared "Missing-in-action" 6 years back.

Captain Amar turned to Naina and looked at her keenly
Amar; And you must be Naina. Raj spoke about you all the time.

Seeing Naina's shocked face he continued
Amar: Yes Naina, Rajveer's alive. But we need to act quickly to ensure that he stays alive. After Dhawan's arrest the entire group was in a state of panic. Exploiting the panic Raj and I decided to escape. I managed to escape but Raj was caught by them.

They heard the sound of gunshots. The soldiers helped Captain Amar to the ground.

Abhi: Soldiers you need to get Captain Amar to safety. NAINA, Yuvraj and I will head to the hideout.

Soldier: But sir, you need a larger unit to raid the hideout.

Abhi: We don't have am option soldeor. I have radioed for a backup. But if they caught him escaping, Raj doesn't haev too much time.

Naina had been silent all this while.

Naina: Nothing will happen to him. Let's go Sir.

They made their way stealthily to the hideout. Naina looked inside from a crack to spot a man lying on the ground being mercilessly beaten. The man looked weak, almost emaciated. He had overgrown hair and an overgrown beard. His face was had lines. But then she caught a glimpse of his eyes. And naina knew it was Rajveer. Her Rajveer Sir. Naina almost gasped on seeing Rajveer alive after so many years.

Abhi and Yuvraj had taken positions on other ends of the building. Abhi was concerned for Naina. He knew she wouldn't be able to control herself for much longer.

Naina was caught in a conflict. She knew that if she shot anyone right now she would reveal herself and potentially jeopardize the entire rescue man,

Naina (thinks): But if I don't do anything, they'll beat him to death. No! that can't happen. I am too close..

She raised her pistol, closed her eyes and recalled everything that Rajveer had taught her about getting her aim correct. She opened her eyes and fired. The bullet pierced Shera's heart who slumped to the ground next to Rajveer.

Rajveer looked up weekly. Physically he had no strngeth left but his heart told him that Naina was around. Naina continued hiding and firing at the people inside. She managed to kill 3 more people before Chaudhary spotted her and yanked her out of her hiding spot.

Rajveer looked at Naina. And his eyes began twinkling. His body was week and close to giving up. But seeing nAINA he felt the life come back into his body.

Chaudhary fired at Naina's hand and as the bullet pierced her shoulder the pistol dropped to her hand.

In all these years, his body had become numb to the pain of getting shory. but seeing Naina get shot he felt an actual physical pain.

Chaudhary and his men got hold of Naina. They pushed her to the ground right in front of Rajveer, but out his reach.

Chaudhary: You came? Good, you couldn't live together but today you will die together. But let's have some fun before that.

Today for the first time I heard Rajveer Singh Shekhawat groan, when his lady love was shot. Let's see how you'll withstand her being tortured/

He proceeded to tie Naina's hands and legs and kick her. Rajveer had tears brimming from his eyes. He suddenly felt a surge of strength in his body and he managed to fling his body on top of Naina;s trying to protect her from the blows. Their eyes met and as always spoke volumes to one another.

Chaudhary: What a love story! He is as good as dead.But he still wants to protect her.

Good you can die in each other's arms.

Abhi: Not so soon Chaudhary!

Abhi came in with the unit and managed to kill Chaudhary;s men before capturing him.

Naina tried getting up. Yuvraj untied her hannds and legs. But Rajveer didn't move. He was lying slumped on her. His eyes were closed.

Yuvraj proceeded to check his pulse

Y: I can't get a pulse.. I am not sure if he is alive.

Naina: RAJVEER!!!!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
What a cliffhanger 😆

Naina finally meets Rajveer and he nearly dies again.

Abey iss Abhimanyu ko itna time kyu laga, what was he doing 😡 Urghhh... I wanna punch him SO BAD! 😡

I read all the four parts and your idea is very good! 😊 Naina seems to have matured quite a lot over the years and actually, I sorta felt like she attained a calmness in her that reminded me a lot of Rajveer.
Having Rajveer caught and imprisoned by the group along with Captain Amar is very good way of explaining Rajveer's disappearance since obviously after the car blast he would have been too weak and they could have easily taken him. But Rajveer never gave up ❤️
Our Captain Rajveer would rather die than betray his country
It is going to be interesting how Rajveer adjusts to his life after being imprisoned for so long.

Abhimanyu ke baare me jitna kaam bolungi utna hi acha 🥱 Bandar kahi ka... Always trying to take Raj's place.

I hope the other cadets are going to come into the picture as well, it will be nice to see how all of them are doing and a reunion with their favorite sir.

Is this the end of these rebels? Or maybe the Captain escaping might set a bigger story in motion? I do not know what you have planned for the future story but one thing I would like to suggest is giving RN a little time before they confess or get together. I would love to a Naina nursing Rajveer again tho... I still remember the appraisals when she took such good care of him ❤️

All in all very interesting andgood story Pankhuri! ❤️
Ill definitely be following it! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
wow great part
naina ne dhondh liya apne raj ko
par ab ye kya uski toh pulse he nhi mile rhi
i hope raj will be fine soon
continue soon
n plz jara jaldi update karana next part
n thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hi paradigm



Love the story very excited to know what happened next.also pl pm when u update next.

Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Nice update...Naina found rajveer..yipeee!!.
Finally u continued.. Now don't stop in between..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Part 5

Naina sat on the cold bench at Poonch Army Hospital.

Naina: Rajveer Sir was alive... He was tortured, bruised and damaged. But he was alive. He was still the same. He had flung his lifeless body on her to protect her.

He was going to live.

He was going to heal.

And maybe... maybe... they may still have a chance at their happily-ever-after.

Abhi: Naina the jeep is here to take you to the cantonment. I'll keep you updated.

Naina: I am not going anywhere.

Abhi: For God's sake Naina you have a gunshot wound. And

Naina: I have to be there when he wakes up. He'd want me here.

Abhi (softly): Naina, please don't get your hopes up like this. You saw him. He was almost dead. He may not make it!

Naina: NO!!! HE WILL SURVIVE. HE HAS TO.

Naina refused to move for the eight hours that the surgery went on. She rushed to the doctors as they walked out,

Abhi: How is he doctor?

Dr: Those people were really beasts. He was tortured beyond human limits. He had lots of internal agencies. He'll need physiotherapy to be able to walk properly again. He also received blows to his back damaging his spinal chord. As a result his left arm is paralyzed. He is likely to suffer from severe PTSD. I am not sure if he'll ever be able to serve on active duty again.

Naina: All that doesn't matter. We'll pull through it. The important question is "Will he live"?

The Doctor smiled.

Dr: Yes Captain Ahluwalia. He will live.

Abhimanyu saw Naina's face light up. He had never seen her so happy. But the next moment she collapsed. Physical trauma and years of psychological trauma had caught up with Naina Singh Ahluwalia.

Rajveer;s recovery process was slow and painful. But for a man who had given up on life, it was blissful being alive and being surrounded by his loved ones. His cadets had flown in from all corners to meet him - Huda was still mischievous as ever, Pooja and Ali had married and were now Mr. and Mrs. Beg. Alekh had finally made his place in the world as one of the most respected officers of the northern command. Yudi had channelized his wizardry with gadgets to become an indespensble asset to the intelligence wing. They had all made their mark in the world. But around their Rajveer Sir, they were still first year cadets.

Huda: Captain Sir aap jaldi se theek ho jaon. Hum long aisa jashn manayenge ki poori Army yaad rakhegi,

Alekh: Sir jab bhi koi appun ki tareef karta hai, apun unko bol deta hai ki yeh sab Rajveer Sir ki wajah se hai.

Ali: Sir, hum sab ne aapko bahut miss kiya hai. Pooja aur humari shaadi par aap ki kami bahut khali thi.

Pooja: Haan Sir.Par sabse zyada to aapko Naina ne miss kiya. Usne to life ke saath hi connection tod dia. Hum Ssab ne koshish ki. Chauhan Sir ne to use apna sim card banana ki bhi koshish ki..

Pooja immediately bit her lip and the others glared at her. Shalini who had flown in with Yudi to meet her old friend walked in.

Shalini: Enough everyone. Rajveer needs to rest.

As the others moved out, Raj asked Shalini to stay back

Raj: How is she now?

Shalini: Furious that you won't let her meet you till she recovers. But recovering rapidly otherwise. So when will you be ready to meet her Raj?

Raj: Come on Shalini. This is about her health. Not my readiness.

Shalini: Raj you can't lie to me.

Raj: Chauhan Saab.. I mean.. he proposed to her right? What.. what was her response?

Shalini: What do you think?

Raj: She refused?

Shalini nodded.

Shalini: You two have been through hell. But you have a second chance at life and at each other.

After Shalini left, Raj fell asleep exhausted by the morning;s visits.

A few hours later he began seeing his most common and beautiful dream. His cadet singh was standing in front of him.

NainaL Rajveer Sir.

He suddenly realized that it wasn't a dream. Naina was in front of him. She was smiling but her eyes were brimming with tears. She still looked physically week and exhausted.

She walked up to him and sat on the visitor's stool.

Raj: Tears don't suit you Cadet Naina Ah Singh!

She broke into laughter. He had waited so long for this sight and sound.

Raj: I knew you'd come for me Naina.

Letting herself go she hugged him and began crying. He wanted to comfort her and tried placing his hand around her. But the hand wouldn't move. It was his paralyzed left arm.

Raj (thinks sadly): I knew I was damaged. But I can't even hug you. I wonder if I am far too damaged for you.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Mind blowing update

Continue so on can't wait to read what happen next

love and prayer

Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
awsome.
beautiful ff. poor rajveer. he is suffrng the most.
update nxt prt soon.
thank u so much for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
great
finally raj is back but he is injurd badly
i hope he will be fine soon
naina hugged raj so sweet
continue soon
update next part soon
we r waiting
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
It is looking like rajveer will distance himself from her bcoz of his condition... Plz don't separate them..

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