Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III

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uthra

@uthra.kg

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Fabulous update! Arnav confrontation with gunda seemed so real. Only in movies hero fights all gundas. The scene u ve sketched s much more real. The ever calm Khushi! Even though she takes everything calmly she couldn't keep the anger anymore and started blaming Arnav for every mishap in her life. It was really needed. It was a surprise to know Poonam Raizada s thinking of correcting her mistakes. It was nice that at last Khushi has been offered a job. Its time for Akash n payal's confession so tat at least they can be a happy couple.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#522

Wow Radhika, what an awesome update this was. 👏

I wish I can peek into your brain and see whats happening inside. How do you store so much information in it? How do you manage to remember so much information?

You are one amazing lady!!!!!

Payal has changed and surely for the better I must say.

Ok what happened between Payal and Akash which makes even Akash guilty??? Though Arnav broke the engagement, yet both Payal and Akash feel its because of what happened between them. Now I really want to know what happened? when it happened and where did all this happen?

Relax, bro. I was with your girl only. Working my charm on her. I just dropped her home and was going to call you."

"You were with Khushi? Why? Didn't you drop her off at her friend's place."

So Arnav thinks Khushi is his girl??? Yeh realisation kab huva???

And wow the scene at Tewari was no less than a dramatic scene from an action movie. Arnav hitting a guy and him hitting Arnav back, I would have loved to see this dishum dishum. 😆

And Khushi showed all her frustration on Arnav and pissed him off to such an extent that he even refused to reply to her text messages.

And Aman turned out to be as mysterious as earlier. Snatching the Werner deal from the Raizadas, then snatching their efficient employee, looks like Aman wants some action in his life and the best way is to have a face off with Poonam??? 😕

Does Poonam know that she destroyed Khushi's life due to her error in judgement???

She must know and maybe her guilt made her give the job of head coach at Alchemy to Khushi.

I wonder how Khushi will react if she comes to know of this. And Aman's mother referred her to the job, another surprise element you brought out today.

Coming to all the new surprises - Shyam is back, how? why now? What now???

Why does Renu bhabhi visit AR? Was she involved with Mihir Gupta??

Will Shyam take over Tewari from Khushi?

Its good that Khushi got the sports coach job at Alchemy, irrespective of whatever her parents and Shyam or Renu decide, Khushi can still be independent.

Finally Juhi Chawla's kundali for Arnav???

Poonam is so desperate to have a bahu?? 😆

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Amazing chapter...their relationship is always yo-yo type..so hope they will bounce back.. Payal's thought about Arnav was an excellent statement.loved it all through.. U r a brilliant writer..

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#524

You know one thing I have to give it to you, none of your characters exhibit envy or jealous ness..

Both Payal and Khushi are so practical in nature I think they are alike in their behavior sans the class difference.. It would have been easy for Payal to put all blame on Arnav and may be some on Khushi too..but she didn't as she knew she was not in it too.. So if she had feelings for Akash, why didn't she act on it? And that thought from Akash that love won't conquer everything and he is the better person to know it, which means something more happened with their relationship and Arnav is unaware of this..

Payal wanting to talk to Arnav to reduce his guilt was a good thing :)

Shyam is back!! What a shocker! But I feel for Khushi, she couldn't feel the happiness that her parents were feeling.. I sure hope Khushi's patents are different and treated both their son & daughter equally then and now..

You are heartless to stop at "Arnav calling" 😭 Since you don't continue where you left off, this all important call will be buried somewhere in the next update as inconsequential and we have to be content with that.. We need some Rabba vey Radhika ji especially since Khushi is Khush at the moment 😆

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Wow...That was one neck of an update with an outtake from so many characters...this is something I have to read again over n over...

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#526

Simply superb. Thanks for the update.

Loved every single word, Hindi and English.

Arnav in a fist fight with drunken goondas, that was something. 😃

And Khushi ne bhi suna diya... Bechara.. But Khushi's ranting was necessary to clear her system. Some good came out of their midnight rendezvous.

I can't hate Poonam Raizada anymore. Liked the direction this story is headed.

Mihir Gupta disappeared and Shyam appeared, eager to know about this more.

Aman & Preeti Nair, wonder what's in store for them.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Dream_on

@Dream_on

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#527

This was just awesome !! It was so nice to read what is going on in everyone's mind.. Glad to have aman back too !! So he was the one who helped khushi get the job. Life is complicated here..lol..

I am glad that khushi had that outburst..it needed to be done before they could have a fresh start..

Shyam is back?or is that mihir? And is that why renu Bhabhi was at AR?

Arnav calling.. Poor khushi .. Feeling so guilty about the outburst!!

Poonam raizada is regretting her past actions ? But she is trying to fix Arnav with chawlA?

Please please post the next one soon :-)

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#528

This story just keeps getting better and better!!

Wow what has happened to Poonam Raizada??How the hell did she realize her mistakes..but good for Khushi ...

Late night meeting between A and K turned to be troublesome and finally Khushi vented out to Arnav which i think is good because Khushi was being way too nice and also its good that she said that now rather than later.

Should we worry about Aman's new assistant?Was she working with Mihir Gupta ?

What was Renu bhabhi doing at AR .and now with Shyam back..God there is too many suspense happening..

BTW its was surprising to read that Aman's mother had recommended Khushi's name for the sports coach position...Lastly is Poonam trying to fix Arnav and Juhi's wedding?I hope not.

Edited by meera06 - 10 years ago