AR TS On Armaan Riddhima By Megs ;) - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanx dear :)


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Fairy...

Amazing

Loved it
Perfect Ending
Keep writing :)


Thanx fairy :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rucha_07

Yeahh ... Bht late post kiya ! :-/
But koi nai ... ;)
It was an awesome TS
Just loved it...
N now ... Do write soon ! :P
Tc !


Hehehhe..I know
I posted l8..

But wat to do...was very busy
Yaar...

And thanz for liking it :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshilpa

Hey, just read the part and it is really awesome and loved it. Please do pm me pm part



Glad u liked it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: staraavni

Hey Megs

The story as usual was awesome and the rescue was so realistic, that I got tears in my eyes.
Good work ya, please keep on writing more TS. Also do sent me the PM part
P.S sorry for the late reply


M glad dear... U loved my
story so much...m really touched
Thanks a lot...


:D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just came across this and it is amazing. Please could you send me the pm part . Thanks and do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blessed4

Just came across this and it is amazing. Please could you send me the pm part . Thanks and do write more


Thanx dear... Glad
u loved it 😛

Yaa will give u both
PM parts in a while...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashyyy

wah Darling itne time baad update di or vo bhi itni long wow
i have fallen for muahh ...
but the part is really sad nd emotional hayye i cried a lot in in ar separation :'( :'( :'( :'(
ar separation sequence is written so beautifully that i can feel it*sob sob*
hmm starting mein armaan anger his restlessness nd feeling pain is shown wonderfully
this naman is a jerk he kidnapped ridhz nd torcher r to no extend
how dare he slap her kutta kamina
to finally armaan ne ridhz ko dhund hi nikala
loved how he fight with the goons or sirf 2 min mein sabko dher kardiya hahaha
again loved the moment when ar meet each other after 48 hrs of ridhz kidnapping
that moment is superb us scene par ek ganna yaad aya do pal ruka khwabon ka silsilla or hum age nah ata but i love this song of veer zaara
itna acha moment chal rha tha is naman ko bhi tabhi an
a tha disturb karne but unko disturb karne ki acha sabak sikhaya armaan ne kya maara h yaar wah mazza agaya hahaha
but hayye us kamine naman ne armaan ko shot karne ki koshish ki haww or goli ridhz ko lag gyi
hayye kya pyaar h

loved then in the way to hospital u show ar POV its really heart touching
the pain nd suffering tch yaar is part mein tune bohot rulaya h *still crying
phir in the hospital armaan mein kaise ro rha tha

thankgod ridhz thik ho gyi but her posessiveness ,fear regarding armaan
loved the scene btw padma, ananya md tani
its a really cute nd sweet scene
uff yeh ar bhi na kabhi or kahin bhi romance karne lagte h
omg they make out in the hospital room i mean uff yeh kaam sirf ar hi kar sakte h
itne saare sad or emotional scene ke baad finally happy moments i mean romance is back in ar life
hayye ar parents ar do sweet dono ko holiday par bhej rhe h
loved all the kausali moments of ar
loved all the pic which u show its really beautiful song sequence awesome
pm part as usual hot, passionate sexy
hayye conjus epilogue bhi saath hi de diya *pout*
so ar have a twins so cute
the names is beautiful
5 saal ke baad bhi loved how ridhz blush nd armaan not leave a single chance to romance
i really loved ar daughter
she is so cute nd adorable nd love boy too but she is more cuter
hmm another story ends here
but koi nah yeh end hua to tu dusri shuru kardegi *wink*
this story is beautiful , fabulous awesome but yaar bas 3pary the ismein
chal koi nah anyways ab yeh khatam ho gyi to bohot saari stories on the way h ab
jaldi se new story start kar ya purani wali ki next update de jaldiii
ab or wait nah hota mujhse



Hehhehee...glad tujhe achha
laga palku...

Voh toh hai...tabhi toh
Itna time laga likhne mein...

I know... Myjhe bhi bohot
gussa aaya tha yeh likhne par
what to do likhna toh tha hi ;)


Hahahhahaaa... Yaar USS
Song mein toh hero heroine alag ho
Haaye hain... But yahaan ni hue... :p

Yahi toh AR ka pyaar hai jaaan... ;)

ahahahhahahaa...
Glad u liked AR POV...



Arre inka romance is toh evergreen.. Kabhi
Khatam ni hogaa...


Hehhehe...new ka toh pata
Ni kab shuru ho.. Baaki jaldi hi upd8 dungi ;)


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Hiii Megsss...
Finallyyy, tumne update de hi diya...
Bohot time laga diya tumne lekin... Update toh bohot mazedaar hai...
Ab itna accha update diya hai toh tujhe daant bhi nehi sakte na late karne ke liyeh heheh...
Chalo hum baat karte hai part ke baare mein...
Waise previous part tumne jaha stop ki, Armaan ke dil ke saat saat humhare dil koh tohd diya...

Ab starting mein toh tumne Mallik's koh bhi shock de diya...
Sabne bhaag ke hospital pochgaye...
Abhi koh dekhte hai sabne saat saat sawal karna shuru kardiya...
Armaan ke baare mein poochke seedhe Ridz ke baare mein poocha...
Lekin jab Abhi ne kaha Ridz Armaan ke saat nehi aaye toh sabko phirse shocked laga...

Armaan behosh hote huve bhi apne Ridz koh pukar raha ta...
Aur jab usko hosh aaya, tab Abhi ne time par enter huvi room mein aur Armaan koh check ki...
Ab hero heroine ke bina ek minute bhi kaise reh sakti hai right...
Accha huva Armaan koh itna yaad hai ki woh Kamina Naman hi hoga jo uske Ridz koh legaye...
Aur baaki sabko toh yeh sense ta police koh bhulane ka hehehe... Nehi toh log kidnapper ka wait karte hai aur jo maante hai wohi de dete hai...
Lekin yaha toh kidnapper koh paisa nehi Ridz chahiyeh toh woh bala kyun call karenge right...

Can I murderrr this idiot, moron, kamina, duffer and etc etc :P
Accha huva abhi meri roza nehi hai hahaha, nehi toh kiya hoti main toh abuse bhi nehi kar sakte is kamine Naman koh...
Pada bhi tab Roza nehi rakka, aur ab comment ki kar rahi hoon after roza hahaha...
How dare that basturd touch Armaan's Ridz... Bechari Ridz, usko bhi toh hosh nehi aayi ab tak accident ke baad...
Lekin jab aayi toh sirf Armaan koh pukarna shuru...
Accha huva Ridz ne kehdiya woh sirf Armaan ne pyar karte hai...
Sahi toh kaha Ridz ne, Hero aayenge heroine koh bachane ke liyeh...

Yeh Naman kitna bada kamina hai...
Himmat kaise huvi Ridz pe haat utane ki ullu ka patta :P
Ek kaam toh accha kya yeh Naman ne, apne mobile bhul gaye hahaha...
AR moment was so emotional... Both talking each other after 24hours...
description about their feeling was written superbly awesome Megs... I felt their pain while i read it...
Uff yeh Kamina Naman tohdi der baad nehi aa sakte...
Hawww, he has the gutt to hit Riddhima and tie her in the chair...
Seriously yeh ladka pagal hai, kamina kahin ka...
Armaan toh chodenge nehi, ek baar haat toh aane de, itna maarenge, itna maarenge uski nani yaad dilaenge...

Arey wah, police ne Naman ke phone trace karliya...
Aur Niks ne bhi kuch information diya about Naman... Good good, ab jaldi se kamine koh dhundo aur maaro...

Uff yeh Naman ka toh kuch samajh nehi aati...
Ek baar itna gussa aur dusri baar itna pyar...
sacchi mein yeh kamina possessive lover hai, woh bhi dangerous wala...
Jaldi koi isko iske asli jhaga pocha doh...

Ab isko kaise pata police koh pata chal gaya yeh kaha hai...
Uff iske aadmi ne bata na... I must say yeh itna bhi kamina nehi hai, tohda toh smartness bhi hai hahaha...
Lekin Armaan isse toh smart hai, woh zarur Ridz koh dhund lenge... after all hero hai yaar...
hahah see Naman kamina hai, usne Armaan koh call kiya...
Waise usko toh pata nehi police uske call trace kar raha ta... Usko toh utna bhi akal nehi hai hahaha...

Finallyyy, Armaan poch gaye apne Ridz ke paas...
Hayye, usko bohot dard huva Ridz koh aise dekh ke...
Wah hero ne kiya maara hai gundo koh...
Lekin Naman toh abhi baaki hai...
devil ka naam liya, devil haazir hehehe...

Yeeeyyy, Hero ne maara usko...
Yes yes, aur maaro hero, meri taraf se bhi teen chaar maarna kamine koh...
Wah Ridz also giving moral support to Armaan to beat the devil out from Naman body hehehe...

Naman koh maarne ke baad, AR hug hayye...
Oye, yeh kiya kardiya tumne... Naman ne shoot ki aur Ridz took the bullet hawww...
Kamina mara kaise nehi, accha huva usne Armaan koh shoot karne se pehle police aagaya...

Bhaagooo, Armaan apne Ridz koh lekar Bhaagooo...
Accha huva Anurag ta waha... Kyunki Armaan koh toh Ridz ke siwai kuch dikh nehi raha aur na kuch samajh aa rahi ti...
Awww, it was so touching when Ridz ask Armaan to save her because she wants to live with him...
Herooo, bachao heroine kohhh...

Operation successful means ab Armaan ke pyar usko sahi karenge...
Awww sab kitni sad hai, aur sab ek dusre koh support bhi kar raha ta...
Armaan koh rest karne koh bola, sahi kaha Armaan ne woh kaise rest karpaenge Ridz koh aise haalat mein dekh ke...
jab dost saat hai toh koi na koi solution toh nikal lenge...
Accha huva sab maan gaye Armaan koh rukne ke liyeh aur Muski and Rahul bhi...

Song sequence was super, emotional and heart touching...
It shows the emotional of Armaan, awww, poor guy was so much hurt seeing his love in pain...
As if the bullet has not hit her but him...

Awww Poor Ridz... Uskki dil mein dar beit gaye...
Accha huva Armaan ta uske saat, nehi toh woh shaant kaise hote...
After Ridz gain sense, everyone came to meet her and shoot questions at her...
awww so much love between Naina and Ridz...
Padma and Tani lil acting hehehe, it was sweet...
AR moment and their kiss was cherry on top... Hayye, itne sab kuch hone ke baad ek toh accha huva AR ke life mein :P

Phir Ridz koh jaldi discharge milgaye... Sabne khub doom dhaam se welcome kiya AR koh...
Lekin Ridz toh shocked mein hai, uske dil mein dar beit gaye hai aur woh Armaan koh apne aankhon ke saamne jaane nehi dete...
Naina decide to send AR to Kasauli, even Armaan think it would be a good idea to take Ridz away from the place and spend some precious time with his Ridz...

Kasauli farmhouse description is superb, even I love the place hehehe...
hayye, mujhe bhi jaana hai waha *dreamly*
Marry Aunty is too cute hehehe, awww the way she bless them...
Phir AR moment, their close moment...
hayye, everything about AR was super and hot hot hottt...

Phir aaye woh din phirse AR hogaye ekkk...
It was super hot song sequence Megs...
Arey wah, Ridz being naughty too... good good hehehe...
PM part ke baare mein kiya bataun... It was too hot and passionate ki mujhe bol ne bhi sharam aa rahi hai :P
seriously it was too hot to handle but super awesome description of their love making ;)

Arey wah, five years later...
AR parent bhi hogaye... aur woh bhi twins ke hehehe.. cute...
AR moment in morning was as usual romantic...
Ahaaan, both was losing themselve when Ridz heard the kids were awake...
Wah wah, cute cute family having gala time...
Love their moment in carnival... Armaan teasing Ridz about riding the swing hehehe...
AR moment with kids were sweet and super cute...
After that AR moment, how both were telling how important and perfect their life is with each other and their kidsss...
Awesome ending megsss...

TS was super awesome, fun, crazy, masti, emotional and hottt...
Love it and Love you Moreee...

Yeh loh hogayi meri comment as I promise hehehe...
Kaha ta na main longgg comment ke saat aaungiii...

Ab long haina yeh, yah tujhe aur long comment chahiyeh...
Waise toh main bak bak karke long kar sakti hoon but woh kiya haina...
raat ke 2 31 hogaye hai, aur meri roza hai kal toh mujhe sehri karni hai hehehe...
Issiliyeh abhi ke liyeh Tata byebye...
Muwaahhh
Love you <3
Cuaaa...



Hiii rihooo...
Haan finally maine upd8,dedi ;)

Hehehhee...ab time liya hai...
Toh mazedaar toh hon hi tha...
Hahahhahaa...
Kyun todha aapka dil maine...
Batao..batao...

Hahahhaa...ab bechaara abhi
Kese sambhaalta armaan ko
isilie toh bhejaa malliks ko ;)

Hehehehe..u see main shock dene mein
expert ho gayi ;)

Ab villain ke alawa aur kon lekwr
Jaayega heroine ko
Hehehehe...

Hahhahaa...kidnapper ko toh bass
Heroine chahyie aur
Koi ni :p

I know. . he's a bas***d..
USNe ridhzz ko maara... :(

Ullu ka paths kyunn...aur bhi gaali do...
Hehehehee :D

Glad yaar sabko AR ka POV achha lagaa..
Jab I was writing... Thinking pata ni kesa hogaa..

Hehehe

Ab villain sirfff maar khaaye yeh toh
Possible ni hai naa...
Isilie he tried to shoot armaan
Aur ridhzz ne goli apne uppar le lele...


Hehhee..yes operation was successful...

Hehehhee..pata hai... Its my favourite song

I love it...

Hhehhehee..ab AR bina romance
Kiye kese reh sakte hain...

Heheehehehheee...
Aur precious time toh romance hona laazmi hai ;)


Hehheeehe..haaye I also love their kasauli
Moments very much in this TS ;)

Heheee...
Bye.. Bye.. Cuaa
Muahhh :*


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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing TS. Keep up the good work.

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