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Posted: 18 years ago

awww.. poor neha!😭😭😭 continue soon hun! wat a neat twist!👏👏 love ur story! if only i could write like you!😆😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow... i did not expect it to come... but it was amazing .... but plz continue sooon....
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: koolaries4

wow... i did not expect it to come... but it was amazing .... but plz continue sooon....

Your Wish is my command...😃...I am working on the next part....😊...will update asap😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 17

Neha lay on her bed, staring up at a small black dot on her ceiling. Shewta dated Shiv. Shiv dated Shewta. She repeated over and over again, in order to make herself belive that what she saw a few minutes ago was the truth and now just her imagination. Shiv had broken Shewta's heart? What about Natasha? Did Shewta know about Natasha being Shiv's childhood friend? Why had Shewta lied to her and not told her the truth? And what of the marriage? Many questiones arose in Neha's head. But all this didn't not matter right now. Right now Neha had to concentrate on something else. She knew that her sister would have never broken up with Shiv, Shiv had broken Shewta's heart. Now Neha had to do the same, she had to break Shiv's heart for her sister. Neha had to concentrate on hating Shiv. Hating him so much that when she saw him tonight, she would not fall weak. She would not have tears in her eyes, nor a smile on her lips. Only hate. Enough hate to break his heart. Enough hate to bear the pain of her own broken heart. A tear trickled down the side of Neha's face.

The door opened, and Shewta ducked in her face to find Neha lying on her bed.

"Hey Neha? What was the rush? Why do you want to go meet Natasha?" Shewta questioned

Neha did not look at her sister but continued to stare up at the ceiling.

"Did you know that Natasha knows Shiv?"

"Ya, I knew Neha." Shewta walked into Neha's room and took a seat on her bed. "We just didn't want to tell you, because we thought it was better not to complicate things, Natasha is on our side if that is what you are..."

"That is all I wanted to know di." Neha interrupted Shewta. Now she got up from bed, and smiled for her sister. "Well di, it is time to put our plan in motion. Shiv has invited me for a party to his house today and I think that will be the best time to break up with him." Before Shewta could say anything, Neha got off her bed and rushed into her washroom. She slammed the door shut and opened the tap of the bath-tub. Shewta a bit confused about Neha's sudden decision to break up with Shiv, knocked on the bathroom door. But when Neha did not reply, Shewta had no choice but to leave.

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Shiv's servant let Neha into the house. The party had not started yet, no guests had arrived. Neha had come early. She sat in the middle of a long white leather couch, looking around the house. "How strange life had been," she thought to herself, "three years ago she was to become a part of this house, she was to marry Shiv, a complete stranger. And today, when she was in love with Shiv, she sat in this house only with one purpose in mind, to break all ties with him." A sorrowful smile broke onto Neha's face as she thought of her fate.

Shiv rushed down the stairs smiling at Neha.

"Hey!" Shiv greeted Neha, as he came close to her to give her a kiss on the cheek. But before he could plant the kiss, Neha moved back dodging his lips.

"Shiv, I need to talk to you." Neha announced.

"Ok? Let's go to my room. We can talk there." Shiv said, sounding a bit confused and concerned. Neha followed Shiv as he led her to his bedroom.

Shiv gently grabbed Neha's shoulders and asked her to sit on his bed. He then kneeled down before her.

"Ok, my queen tell me what it is you want to talk to me about?" Shiv asked, sounding more like himself this time.

Neha downcast her eyes. How was she to end everything with Shiv, if he was going to look at her with so much adoration in his eyes. Neha suddenly stood up, and in a very cold and ruthless manner said, "Shiv I want to break up." When Shiv did not respond and continued to kneel on the ground, Neha walked a bit further away from Shiv and then continued. "Shiv, I am sorry but you are just not right for me, I just don't..."

"What? Who do you think you are?" Shiv walked up to Neha, grabbed her arm and pushed her against the wall. Neha looked up at Shiv who now stood right in front of her, his arms up against the wall. She could feel his warm breath, she saw fire in his eyes. Neha's heart started to beat alot faster, her hands felt cold and num as the blood from her hands rushed to her face. "Girls like you come and go in my life. All you women are the same. You are just like everyone else." Now Shiv brought his face even closer to Neha's. Neha turned her face to the side as Shiv continued to come closer. Neha shut her eyes. "I never loved you, never cared for you, you are just another girl for me." Shiv whispered angrily into Neha's ears. "You were a waste time." Shiv now backed off. "Get out! Get out of my room, my house, and my life. Get out!" Shiv yelled.

Before leaving Neha turned around and looked into Shiv's eyes for the last time. He had once again been successfull in breaking her heart, yet his eyes carried no pride or happiness. She had wounded his ego, yet his eyes were not angry. She had broken his heart, yet his eyes were tearless. Neha tried to search for the love she had once seen, it was no longer there. Shiv didn't care for anyone, then why did Neha care for him. She would no longer love him, he was only worth her hate.

Hey Everyone😃

I know this part was a bit dramatic 😳 😳 😳 😳 ...please let me know what you all thought of this part😊...and this is not the end... 😉 ...btw I am thinking of starting another fan-fic please let me Know if there is something that you thing I always do in my fan-fic that i should improve on...plz plz plz...😊...thank you all for the great and awesome comments..i love them😃

Chandni 😊

Edited by Saregama_fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey nice part ..but umm i am confued is the end of the ff??
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: soniabaweja

hey nice part ..but umm i am confued is the end of the ff??

no no no!!😆..this is not the end...😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 neha shud hav confronted shweta abt shiv... but it was still awesome 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
okay SHIV IS HER SIS'S EX AND SHE WAS ABOUT TO MARRY HIM!!! HELLOOOOOO!!! HOW WRONGGGG!!! 😆 😆

she shouldve confronted shweta!!!!!

stupid nehaa!!

well.. continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow awesome part.. i liked how it was dramatic:P.. pretty intense and I would have talked to shewta and gotten the real story out of her but awesome part continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow...mindblowing part...poor neha,she went to break shiv's heart but got heartbroken herself 😭 .
i wonder if shiv ever luved neha😕
Edited by mitali_s - 18 years ago

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