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Gourav

@Shubh007

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Armaan Family Is So Much Orthodox...😳

So Much Drama This Update Is Fully Melodramatic...😉

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...,...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Anu

@tacker_karan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Heyyy laddoo...

really good part...d orthodox thinking of angad's family is disgusting

I hope armaan frees shilpa

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rihanna

@rihanna09

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Thank you for updating soon! I am really happy! keep updating regularly!! :-);-)

Coming to the part!

This story is kind of very different! you portrayed the life of a widow in an orthodox Indian family really well! like the white sari and khule baal! she's not allowed to eat or interact or interfere in her family matters! she's not allowed to wear payal! it really touched me! Thank god armaan is nice and so his sister! I really can't believe his family taunts him to handle the responsibilities of his brother! I mean come on! he has his own life dreams and aspirations! I really loved the scene when armaan saw shilpa not exactly saw but her sari payal and all!I loved the swing scene! I am really excited for their meeting!

This ff has has beautiful storyline! please keep on updating this regularly!!!! please!!! It's my earnest request!!!!

Update soon! :-)

Edited by rihanna09 - 10 years ago

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

yo another story by u
hmm the concept is really awesome nd interesting
so shilpa is a widow of angad armaan cousin
but i m sorry but u hate everyone behaves with shilpa
this is so so i don't know wat the correct word is
they all r inhumane , how can they
nd y is shilpa tolerating this???
so many questions is dere for ridhz character nd her opinion , i mean how she is ??? y is she like this n all

now coming to armaan
his character is as usual i loved it
he is very modern nd happy go lucky guy
loved his ideas nd pov
i agree wid him nd his pov
this family is really a Orthodox
the way they r behaving with is building anger in my veins
she is not even allowed to eat nd roam
this whole family is just irritating
okay acc to the story so far i think armaan is attractive towards ridhz i mean not really but kind of ??
now lets see wat will happen next
i guess armaan will go to Mumbai with shilpa
lets see nothing cam guess now
plz continue soon

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Tanvids9

@Tanvids9

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Finally an update after so long
Nice part.. waiting for shilpa's entry
Pls continue soon

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arorasurbhi

@arorasurbhi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Nice update...
Armaan's family is so Orthodox...

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arima_mallik

@arima_mallik

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Widow life... explained really well. You have written the entire part very thoughtfully dear and it's just amazing.

And yes I had been wanting to tell you this; I don't remember if I said this earlier; but I never read Armaan-Shilpa stories earlier. It was always only AR for me... and in matters of writing a piece it's still only AR. But you are the first writer babes... who's writing couldn't keep me from reading even an ArSh fiction. (Vivaah to be specific)You are indeed a fabulous writer. Keep up the good work. Love you!! :)

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Pakeez Muqadas

@Mpakeez

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Finally U update..
Seriously saying I never xpect ur Update soon..
Laga do chaar aur months lagenge.. LOL

ok enough of My Bak Bak..
Now About d Update..

Shilpa Was but still wasn't There..

Loved D way U showed Ammy & Angad Bond..
& Their relation wid Sister..
She Too is sweet & Enough Mature dn whole Orthodox Family..
& 1 thing which i wanna Say..
U r Not showing anything which is imaginary..
All diz Is still part of Our society not only small City but big 1's Too..

Hats Off to ur Creativity & Way of writing..

Eagerly waiting For Comming update..

All D Best..
Keep Smiling & Writing..