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Her lips quivered as she felt his hand on her cold ones trying to give her comfort...like any other bride she was nervous as well as scared to head for the new phase of her life...after completing all the rituals of taking vows and bidding farewell to her family she was sitting on the car with her husband.He removed his turban revealing his handsome face...Her hands were wet with sweat and because of the long rituals going since morning she was feeling weak and tired.The journey was going to be a long one so she thought to close her eyes for a while feeling her hand still in his hold.

Booom...crashhh...

Seems like she was seeing a nightmare with open eyes...her heart was beating rapidly and all she could see was her world burning in fire infront of her own eyes...she tried to raise her hand but pain engulfed her making everything blurr and soon she was unconscious...


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Manhoos hai woh manhoos...shaadi ke chand ghante nahi huey..kha gayi mere bete ko...

Angad Mallik was the son of Vikram and Kuljeet Mallik and grandson of Balwinder Mallik- a very respected and reputed personality in the small town.Mallik family were owner of many agricultural properties.Few hours ago whole house was busy in celebrating their eldest son Angad's wedding and little did they knw how their world would be turned upside down.While angad was returning home with his bride their car met with a terrible accident and he managed to throw her out of the car somehow with him still stuck inside the car and eventually losing his life.



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With million thoughts running in his mind he entered the big gate of his house..this place...where he grew up has endless memories...where his family resides...and after 10 long years he will get to see their faces...only if things would have been just like before...

Armaaan bhaii...aap agaye...


Dadajji...taya jiii...tayijiii...angad ki kami main poori to nahi kar sakta per itna zaroor keh sakta hu ke aapke paas abhi bhi apka ek beta hai...

He touched Balwinder's feet and hugged Vikram and Kuljeet who broke down sobbing hard in his arms...


Armaan Mallik was the only son of Billy and Ananya Mallik...Billy was Balwinder's younger son and Vikram's younger brother...Angad and armaan grew up together and were more like friends not brothers...circumstances changed and with time armaan's father Billy was more focused into his career and he chose to move out to big city to establish his dreams.This was not liked by his family much however they agreed to give him support and thats how he went to Mumbai years ago..Armaan was a broad minded person as he grew up in a modern city but he respected his parents and the values given by them...after completing his studies he went to Canada and was now a full fledged IT professional... not much liking the orthodox nature of his family back in Punjab...he was always in touch with Angad...after getting the sudden news of Angad's demise he had to return back to fulfill his duties as a son while Billy and Ananya were already in Punjab for Angad's wedding...



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A simple story..yet very different from my side😛Heloo guyz here Iam back with another concept of mine and this time the credit for inspiring and helping me out goes to Ana and Sameera(my Sam😉)Love you guyz...Here is the intro and first part will come as Humsafar ends😳
-Laddoo

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I n d e x

Intro Pg-1

Part 1 Pg-8

Edited by Laddoo.Phaddoo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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laddooo...
i m sso excited for this one...
a fresh concept is what i m looking for in an ordinary story...
n i so know that u are gonna rocck it...
though i love angad .. ...but lshilpa sirf armaan ki ho sakti gai...
n here comes the hero to save thee day...
muwah .
waiting for part one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😲 Will come as Hum-Suffer ends?? 🤣🤣🤣
Kab?? Agle saal?? 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Khair.. Angad Shilpa ki jodi se tumhara pyaar dekh kar bohat khushi hui😃.. Kuch ghanton ki dulhan aur ab pata nahi kitne arse widwa ban k rehne wali humari shilpa!!

Manhoos hai wo Manhoos!!😡 Chalo oye padhe likhe jahillon!! Car wo thodi chala rahi thi..🤢

Agay!!!! Humare Armaan Bhai Agaye!!! 😃 Chalo Selfie Leyte hain! :P





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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Concept...
Looking forward to read this Story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept..

love to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing + Interesting Concept...👏

Just Love It...😊

Waiting For Part One So Update Soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww...what an intro...
cant wait to read d story...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow... Too gOod..
I knw i have seen Such stuffs Many times..
But It will B Nice to See It in ArSh version..
Post soon D First Update..

Really wanna C How Ammy Will Fight Wid All Odds To Get Shilpa In Her Life...

I have Only Confusion..
Balwinder Malik & Billy Malik R not D same..?
B'coz In DMG Billy's real Name was Balwinder Malik..
But Here I think it Z Father & Son..

Post Sooon...
& Stay Blessed..
Keep Smiling & Writing..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept, loved it dii, looking forward to it, do cont soonish dii 😊

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