All of your questions will be answered soon and no I'm not upset:) Unlike some authors I don't think of criticism as a subversive attempt to sabotage my FF writing career!!! 😆 I'm always grateful to people who invest their precious time in my humble attempt. In today's fast moving world, this alone is something to be thankful about!Originally posted by: kclovearshi
I forgot to ask one thing when I commented...
What happened to Khushi's guilt? Did she have to visit a shrink or did it get vaporized by itself when Arnav walked away? Why did she try to contact him instead of mulling over her guilt? Or not take her dad's advise to think over her relationship? She is one poor confused soul..tch..tchAnd what about the parents? Are they okay with her re-establishing contact with a man they deem unworthy for their daughter? If they are unaware, is she absolutely sure, she will be able to convince them and won't leave him in the lurch again when push comes to shove? I have yet to see that conviction in her..Has Sujata tried to set her up again with controlled supervised dating in the 2 months?Khushi demonstrated one very basic human nature.."you will realize the value of something/someone only when it/he is unattainable"I hope I will be convinced why Arnav goes looking for her.. Whatever I see so far are not enough..they are just like a glue trying to glue together two broken pieces that is Arnav.. She broke him in half if not multiple pieces..Very sorry for the criticism of your (and mine) beloved character Jen!! I hope I'm not making you upset!!
Remember...SF is a journey of self discovery for both Arnav and Khushi...so both will move from point A to point B, in terms of their inner environment.
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