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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

I forgot to ask one thing when I commented...

What happened to Khushi's guilt? Did she have to visit a shrink or did it get vaporized by itself when Arnav walked away? Why did she try to contact him instead of mulling over her guilt? Or not take her dad's advise to think over her relationship? She is one poor confused soul..tch..tch

And what about the parents? Are they okay with her re-establishing contact with a man they deem unworthy for their daughter? If they are unaware, is she absolutely sure, she will be able to convince them and won't leave him in the lurch again when push comes to shove? I have yet to see that conviction in her..

Has Sujata tried to set her up again with controlled supervised dating in the 2 months?

Khushi demonstrated one very basic human nature.."you will realize the value of something/someone only when it/he is unattainable"

I hope I will be convinced why Arnav goes looking for her.. Whatever I see so far are not enough..they are just like a glue trying to glue together two broken pieces that is Arnav.. She broke him in half if not multiple pieces..

Very sorry for the criticism of your (and mine) beloved character Jen!! I hope I'm not making you upset!!

All of your questions will be answered soon and no I'm not upset:) Unlike some authors I don't think of criticism as a subversive attempt to sabotage my FF writing career!!! 😆 I'm always grateful to people who invest their precious time in my humble attempt. In today's fast moving world, this alone is something to be thankful about!

Remember...SF is a journey of self discovery for both Arnav and Khushi...so both will move from point A to point B, in terms of their inner environment.

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Edited by IPK007 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Jen, how much longer before we arrive at this teaser you gave us a long time back??


"His face was serenely contemplative but a slanting beam of sunlight illumining his features revealed evidence of a hard life. Echoes of choices, ripples of vicissitudes, blaze of ordeals. Yet, despite it all there was determination in his bloodshot eyes, indefatigably in his tired shoulders, resolve in his firmly set lips. The whole had emerged greater than the sum of all parts and bore testament to the invincibility of the human spirit.



Even after giving up his job and traveling through three continents in the past twenty days...his resolve hadn't wavered.



"I will find you, Khushi", spoke a steely voice in his heart even as the train shuddered and clanked into an unexpected halt in the middle of remote countryside, "Even if you're hiding in the furthest corner of this world, I will find you".



He was a modern-day knight on a mission but it was a mission with a difference. The dragons he had to slay, dragons he had to rescue the fair-maiden from were all inside her own mind."

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl

Hey Jen, how much longer before we arrive at this teaser you gave us a long time back??



<font color="#0066cc">"His face was serenely contemplative but a slanting beam of sunlight illumining his features revealed evidence of a hard life. Echoes of choices, ripples of vicissitudes, blaze of ordeals. Yet, despite it all there was determination in his bloodshot eyes, indefatigably in his tired shoulders, resolve in his firmly set lips.The whole had emerged greater than the sum of all parts and bore testament to the invincibility of the human spirit.</font>






<font color="#0066cc">Even after giving up his job and traveling through three continents in the past twenty days...his resolve hadn't wavered.</font>






<font color="#0066cc">"I will find you, Khushi", spoke a steely voice in his heart even as the train shuddered and clanked into an unexpected halt in the middle of remote countryside, "Evenif you're hiding in the furthest corner of this world, I will find you".</font>






<font color="#0066cc">He was a modern-day knight on a mission but it was a mission with a difference. The dragons he had to slay, dragons he had to rescue the fair-maiden from were all inside her own mind."</font>

This is post introspection...Ch 46 :) ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
jen so happy to know they will be meeting in chapter 46. that means even chapter where there will be more heartbreak but chalega. n i dunno one thing about horoscope and all so wont be commenting on that.

i was listening to a song this morning and it reminded me of khushi.

"ham jante hai, ham jante hai tum hame naushad karoge
todoge mera dil mujhe barbad karoge
todoge mera dil mujhe barbad karoge
dil phir bhi tumhe dete hai kya yad karoge
kya yad karoge kya yad karoge

na chain hame doge na tum shaad karoge
na dard ki janjir se azad karoge
na dard ki janjir se azad karoge
dil phir bhi tumhe dete hai kya yad karoge
kya yad karoge kya yad karoge"



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deeswarna

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">jen so happy to know they will be meeting in chapter 46. that means even chapter where there will be more heartbreak but chalega. n i dunno one thing about horoscope and all so wont be commenting on that.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">i was listening to a song this morning and it reminded me of khushi.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">"ham jante hai, ham jante hai tum hame naushad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">todoge mera dil mujhe barbad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">todoge mera dil mujhe barbad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">dil phir bhi tumhe dete hai kya yad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">kya yad karoge kya yad karoge</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">na chain hame doge na tum shaad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">na dard ki janjir se azad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">na dard ki janjir se azad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">dil phir bhi tumhe dete hai kya yad karoge</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">kya yad karoge kya yad karoge"</font>




This is beautiful and I love the song you posted earlier too. From the movie, 'Hero'. Sunaai deti hai jiski dadkan wo tumhara dil ya hamaara dil hai:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007

This is beautiful and I love the song you posted earlier too. From the movie, 'Hero'. Sunaai deti hai jiski dadkan wo tumhara dil ya hamaara dil hai:)


glad u liked the song jen. i loved all ur ffs but i think this one is my favorite of all. simply cant stop thinking about it, i should be studying but:((((
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007


This is post introspection...Ch 46 :) ❤️


Thank you Jen... 🤗

The word "introspection" is like music to my ears. Yeah, the man needs to introspect, nay even meditate alright... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting ...Waiting...




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl

Hey Jen, how much longer before we arrive at this teaser you gave us a long time back??


"His face was serenely contemplative but a slanting beam of sunlight illumining his features revealed evidence of a hard life. Echoes of choices, ripples of vicissitudes, blaze of ordeals. Yet, despite it all there was determination in his bloodshot eyes, indefatigably in his tired shoulders, resolve in his firmly set lips. The whole had emerged greater than the sum of all parts and bore testament to the invincibility of the human spirit.



Even after giving up his job and traveling through three continents in the past twenty days...his resolve hadn't wavered.



"I will find you, Khushi", spoke a steely voice in his heart even as the train shuddered and clanked into an unexpected halt in the middle of remote countryside, "Even if you're hiding in the furthest corner of this world, I will find you".



He was a modern-day knight on a mission but it was a mission with a difference. The dragons he had to slay, dragons he had to rescue the fair-maiden from were all inside her own mind."


I was looking for this teaser's page and couldn't find it.
@bold - this was what I was wondering why here
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4353870&PID=121720337&#p121720337

How is it all inside her mind? Is he talking about what she's thinking regarding her parents? Or does he have a Eureka moment during his introspection that leads him to this conclusion? As Jen said this comes after his introspection.. Has this got something to do with the fidelity/infidelity topic too? Is he gonna explain/convince her that the opinion she has about it is wrong or doesn't apply to their relationship?
After the last update I was like "how can he say it's all in her mind when he is the one who treats her this way😡?" Now it makes sense, it's gonna be after his soul searching session..
And we're gonna have a looong wala update next! Woohoo.. By the end of it, all of us are gonna be team Arnav again, haha. Jen will make us take an about turn, forget about all the anger towards the poor guy, join forces with him to search for his Khushi.. I'm fully geared Jen. Have been for quite sometime now. Waiting for it..

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Posted: 10 years ago
I started this and couldn't put it down. Love how you've portrayed the characters and the realness of the challenges they faced.

Looking forward to reading more.

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