Arshi TS *~ Inciting Desires ~* Completed..Part1-3/All on Page1 - Page 65

Originally posted by: brishti84

Everything about this story was very romantic and sensual. Didn't matter if Arnav and Khushi were fighting and arguing or romancing. I enjoyed this very much. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sohara

Happily ever after type ending like a fairy tale. Just perfect.

Very beautifully written.

It was so painful to see the drift between Arnav and Khushi. I was angry on Arnav when he misbehaved her. But I was glad that it was not because he came to know about her biological parents.

The pacifying part was mellifluous and intense, what I liked so much. In rendition Khushi shared the most important story of her life with him and he also soothed her so lovingly and passionately.

Takraar ke baad pyaar aur bhi meetha lagta hai.

I was imagining the scene how Khushi appeared in her blue gown made Arnav bedazzled.

The moment was surreal as the spent the night under the sky.

Beautiful story.

thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Spoonai

This was so beautiful can't begin to explain. But I truly enjoy this short story and I so wish there was couple more line even. Every emotion is describe with so much reality that I felt I was there and I can just imagine arshi while reading this story. It was so pure and sensual and I love love it :)

I'm really bad at words but I really felt connected with this story, it touches my soul and why not after all it's our arshi in so much in love with each other :)

Originally posted by: chavvi16

hope you are doing better
he almost screwed it up
but it wasnt his fault
he was only doing it for her
to save her rep
and to get that idiotic raj outta the way
he got him too
but in that she got hurt
and was so heart broken
which he regretted for sure
hmmm she tried to run away from him
but he didnt let her
am happy about it
awww it all worked out for them
he finally showed how much he cared for her
man things sure got heated between them
almost full on make out session
but shame it had to stop
awww things are all okay between them

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Mindblowing update
Loved it
Superb one
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: SilentShadow

What a TS. It had all the elements. Love, drama, Angst, Jealousy, Sensuality !👏

The last two parts were really amazing.

Arhi in such a relationship was great to read.

Kudos! And hope to read more from you in the future! 😃

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

That was a beautiful journey across flaming desires, unending passion and true love. Arnav stood by Khushi as he promised and gave her the much needed time to discover herself.

Originally posted by: Roop_P

Thank you Sanaya and Zoya for my attempt.

Zoya ,your taste in Ghalib is divine.🤗

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

brill but emotional ending

cant believe khushis friend Raj was behind all that

he realized he went too far by hurting khushi to get to Arnav when it was too late I hope she never forgave him

felt so sorry for khushi when she thought Arnav was behind her humiliation

glad he didn't gave up n waited till she was ready

their kiss was hot n heavy both ppouring out their hurt n anger

god knows if it wasn't for Arnavs phone maybe they wouldn't have stopped n that might have made Khushi upset n angry later

thanks for pm n plz keep em comin