ArShi FS: Never Let Me Go - Last Part (Pg-113) **COMPLETETD** - Page 71

awesome ending...

Res

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I loved, loved, loved this story... You covered every possible angle, track, detail, feeling... just about eveything. I for one am not complaining about the length of the story or the updates. 😃

At the start of the story, I thought it was Khushi on the hospital bed and therefore Arnav was feeling so strongly for her plight. But you proved me wrong and how! La and Arnav had a deep, long friendship going that couldnt be broken by misplaced feelings, parental manipulations or the storms that fate brings 👏 Aisi dosti sab ko mile wherein the sorrow of your friend is your sorrow and the happiness of your friend is your happiness 😊

Now coming to Arnav and Khushi, I could see their comfort with each other, their compatibility, their affection, their care, their love... but like Khushi I was wondering what was still missing: Assurance from Arnav's side.

If Ratna and Aastha hasnt interfered and planted seeds of doubt in Khushi's brain and if she hadnt withdrawn then when would Arnav have expressed his love for Khushi I wonder 😡 At the same time, if Arnav hadnt put his foot down before his family and before Khushi then I wonder would Khushi have continued to be blind to what was between them? 😡

Koyi nahi. Aantt bhala toh sab bhala 😃 Arnav and Khushi are on the same page, happy with each other and content with their love 😳

I loved loved loved their love story... You showed them steadily falling for each other so well! The chirpy Khushi and the practical ASR ❤️ And also the difference between what Arnav felt for Lavanya and what he was feeling for Khushi was demarcated so well. In the former, he was succumbing to maternal pressure and in the latter he was falling for Khushi head over heels 👏

I also liked how you parallelly showed the ugly face of society in how a wife is ill teated after marriage and how peeple can go to any extent in breaking homes thinking they are doing the 'right' thing.

Through Aakash and Payal you showed the difference between being a wife and being just a companion and through Aman and La you showed the hope in giving yourself a second chance.

All in all a great story ⭐️

PS: I would request you to, if you dont mind, to just proofread your updates.

PPS: I hope the work related issues that kept you sleepless got resolved 😊

Fabulousz ending .. loved it

Okay first of all I am really sorry as I couldnt able to comment the last two updates. Mt exams were going on so could type much. Was just eager to read the update. It is totally selfish on my part I agree... that's y m really sorry arooma. I must say your writings are creditable. The way you express each emotions and put into words make a person go into the wonderland completely. Trust me when I am saying this I go in my own wonderland putting myself in place of khushi and read your story as it is happening in real. I do get tears when anyone either arnav or khushi cries. In part one in which khushi cried wishing that maybe smeday arnav would also love her, reading tht line my heart actually ached as if I was wishing someone dear could love me enough. And I think for a writer it is a big rewards that their readers get this much effected by their writings. I know I nag you a lot about the update but trust me it is only because I am desperate to read what happens next. Your thoughts your imagination are priceless. I wish I could write the way ou wrote. Lease posting new stories it is an immense pleasure to read them. Now coming back to the story. The way you portrait the love was exemplary. It was a really nice way to show love and importance. As it said actions speak louder than words. It was true that at that time no words could explain khushi the love arnav feels for her. No words could rip off the seed of doubt from khushis mind. It was beautiful the way arnav stood for her against his mum and aunty. That's what every husband should do. Because I have seen people treating their wives like a trash because their mom don't like them. It was also nice to see akash standing up and voicing out it thoughts. I always believe that a person should speak his heart out because life doesn't give second chances often so it is better to do the right thing than compromising. Lavanya was shown a brave girl. If she wanted she could have laid happiness in front of her by trapping arnav but she didn't because she does realize what a person goes through when your husband don love you back. She supported her best friend and save him from the misery. On khushi part I think being sooo much selfless is not a good thing. Sometimes it is great to a lil selfish. It was good that arnav showed love than anger on khushi after getting her back to rm. For a moment I thought khushi will think that arnav used her and again there will be a misunderstanding butit was non. As a daughter in law khushi fulfilled her duty when she asked arnav to forgive ratna. It was a really nice things to do because new relations can never be strong when old relations have become weak.

In short It was a beautiful five shot, I would love to read more. Please continue sooonnn

Love you
Last but not the least thankyou sooo much for the pm

this was a fabulous fs.. I was simply bowled by the story.. Loved it truly..

Beautiful

Loved this FS !!!
Everything was portrayed so well ;)
The way khushi misunderstood arnav . Arnav's care for lavanya.. His love for khushi.. ^_^ beautiful... !! Initially didn't liked ratna.. Bt glad she understood khushi.. My favourite part is when arnav blasts his mom when he finds out about divorce ... I really liked lavanya here.. She has gone through so much.. & yet she is strong...& the way she tried to make khushi realize their friendship was fab !! Aww.. Khushi.. She is so selfless.. love her loadsss :* :* !! Right from her office days .. She always thought about others than her .. & i really felt bad when she felt arnav might love lavanya.. :( !! &felt so happy when arnav cleared all misunderstandings... This arnav is so sensible <3 <3 !! He knows well !!!!

Nice story. I loved the friendship between Arnav and Lavanya. Khushi is so innocent.

awesome awesome awesome...