ArShi FS: Never Let Me Go - Last Part (Pg-113) **COMPLETETD**

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12fasiha34

@12fasiha34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Amazinggg mindblowinggg brilianttt updateee...loved it waitingg for part B

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

Awesome parts 4 and 5...thanks for the PM

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Tushaline

@Tushaline

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

super duper awesome...

itna long update...di i love u so much for that...

n the update was just super...

even i thought kushi will be in i trouble when arnav comes to know the truth, i thought he will do somekind of asr drama or go out from the house just like that cause of anger and all but he surprised me by doing all that...

n romance is in air for asr n i can guess that he is planning for some honeymoon trip with kushi thats y he asked for leave...

but the question is hw is he going to disclose it to kushi...

n i also quite scared about ratna n payal cause arnav may b going to his office leaving kushi at home n these two almost vamps might hurt her cause with their stupid words...

i loved all the moments of arshi they were so passionate ...

it was gd that arnav deal with kushi in this way n choose not to shout at her in anger, it might worse the situation ...

the update was so much awesome n i just loved it in simple words ...

n i also loved akash's scene that way the talk payal about what he expect from her was so awesome ...payal's thinking as wrong, hw can she think that akash wants her to be like a maid...she is surely wrong,aksh should do something about payal's matter ... n also the way arnav talked to ratna n asha was also outstanding, it was very much needed to keep these two ladies out of arshi's life ...the way he confess his love infront of them was so needed to make them realise arnav's love n to stop these two dumbo ladies from doing any more blunder

i ill be waiting for the next update as well n pls update it soon n also thank u so much for the pm

Edited by Tushaline - 10 years ago

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saima

@frity

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

when will you update for ymnd????? missing it :(

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josnirmala

@josnirmala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Such a mind blowing update...

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madgirl84

@madgirl84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

awwee such a mushy mushy part of this FS

😳

very sweet and finally they confessed

update soon

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Aanchal

@aanchu19

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

totally unexpected move from Arnav 😆

but nice update I like the way you showed Arnav's thought about Khushi's insecurity.

good one

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Arooma

@Bubbles76

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#588

REPLY:

I have mixed feelings from the response ... at one side am feeling happy to see so many comments and some of them are from new readers.😊

And on the other hand cannot help but feel disappointed by seeing the number of likes , around 220.

Last time when i said i wont update until and unless i get 250+ like and in just 1 n half day i got 300+ likes.

And now for this update its been more than 2 and half day and no 300 likes, for which i was sure when i posted the update, as i made it long, when i didnt thought it to be, and also shown romantic scenes.

I thought that you all will like this update very much and i am surely gonna get atleast 300 likes.

but i guess i thought wrong.😕😭

I woke two whole nights, for my work and was writing update in between, even my weekend was a working one and i still manage to wrote and more, make it long for you all.

But i think now, i should not spend too much time and effort into my updates.😭

So don't expect the next update to be long. Although i will try to give the proper ending to it.

Now coming to the comments, THANK YOU each and every one who commented.

Many of you have guessed correctly as to what work Arnav have.😳

For the rest of the comment, who wanted Ratna & Astha to be punished. Akash to get rid of Payal, or payal turning good.

Karan and pallavi getting punished for their sins and lastly Lavanya getting someone too.

Wait for the next update, cannot say here to spoil the next part.😳

Will try my best to update till Tuesday night, if i cannot, i will post a note about it.

And those asking for YRMND, i have mentioned many times already that i will post it once this FS gets over.

Arooma.

Edited by Bubbles76 - 10 years ago